New OS- Dil ka Rishta - Page 4

Wow such a nice os. Simple, neat, fabulous. Loved it.

Your OS has all my heart..I think this is one of the best works I have read and you have proved today that a writer can adapt any style and make it work. The depth, the profundity of words you used, the sadness, the thehraav all of it made me emotional.

You have so wonderfully understood the essence of Samaina and woven it into your work it made me feel the same magic as the episodes last week. It is commendable how you constructed the chemistry between them and the spark of emotions through the conversation and words and most importantly through Nanu's memory. It reminded me that our Samaina's true chemistry was in Mount Abu where they never touched each other physically only through their words.

Please write more works like this..

Bundles of love,

Sims

The story is penned down so beautifully. Dil ka Rishta is such an apt title and truly the bonds by heart are indeed special. What I really liked was the thought that a smile can have a very positive effect on life. The subtlety with which the characters were introduced was appreciable. Do write more.

Cheers!!

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Such a beautiful OS!

Thanks a lot May 😃

I loved the way you have written the progression in the Naina-Nanu relationship, it started with a simple unexpected meeting, then the smiles... and then slowly getting to know each other over few months.

Nanu's experienced eyes recognized something in her and found a way to lead his grandson to her.

You are so right. Nanu understood that only Naina could bring the required warmth and care in Sameer's life. As you said, his experienced eyes saw through Naina's qualities.

The idea of converting the house to an orphanage is so beautiful and felt so right.

Thanks. I am so glad that the reason behind converting Nanu's home into an orphanage has been perceived so well. For Naina, there couldn't be any better tribute to Nanu 😍

I felt a feeling of deep sukoon as I read this OS. Loved it.

This means a lot. The best compliment I could ever get for this OS 🥰

Originally posted by: Mayashika

This OS was really beautiful...such a different concept you have woven into words. I loved how you portrayed a smile can brighten up anyone's lives. The Naina-Nanu's bond was the highlight for me in the OS.

You know what, this is my personal belief that we should always greet people with a smile. A smile can do wonders. And that is why I decided to pen down something on these lines. I am glad you liked the concept ☺️

Also, I liked how you connected the title and SamAina at the end, such a different thought. I loved it, Aaisha Di!

Thank you sweetie 😘

Hey Shreya! How have you been? Itne din se kahan gayab?

Btw I was so waiting to read your thoughts on this one 😍😍 Your replies always make me happy and motivate me to write more and more.😘😘

Originally posted by: vidrev

Wow such a nice os. Simple, neat, fabulous. Loved it.

Thanks a lot :)

Originally posted by: IamIbe

Your OS has all my heart..I think this is one of the best works I have read and you have proved today that a writer can adapt any style and make it work. The depth, the profundity of words you used, the sadness, the thehraav all of it made me emotional.

Thank you so much. This means a lot. It is very generous of you to call this work one of the bests here. I am very happy that my writing could reach your heart.

You have so wonderfully understood the essence of Samaina and woven it into your work it made me feel the same magic as the episodes last week. It is commendable how you constructed the chemistry between them and the spark of emotions through the conversation and words and most importantly through Nanu's memory. It reminded me that our Samaina's true chemistry was in Mount Abu where they never touched each other physically only through their words.

I so agree with you. The Mount Abu scenes truly represented the essence of Samaina and their pure and unique connection. Those were my favorite days I am honoured that my OS brought back those memories for you. Thanks a lot for leaving this comment. It certainly made my day.😊

Please write more works like this.. Will try for sure 😊

Bundles of love,

Sims

Originally posted by: AFineMess

The story is penned down so beautifully. Dil ka Rishta is such an apt title and truly the bonds by heart are indeed special. What I really liked was the thought that a smile can have a very positive effect on life. The subtlety with which the characters were introduced was appreciable. Do write more.

Cheers!!

Thanks a lot for the appreciation. I am really glad that the thought behind the story could reach you so well.

Will surely try to write more such stuff. Thanks😊

Originally posted by: Prizi

Beautiful os

Thank you 😊

This is indeed very very heart warming shot!

Every thing was sooo peaceful.....

And thanks that you remembered nanajii .... I miss him badly ... Wish he were here to support samaina......

But it's okay.... Sameer has his naina ...

Keep smiling

Labhya 😃