#AshDeep poem - Kya hai yeh ???

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Kya hai yeh ??? 😕😕


Sabko mera shashtam dandwad pranam .
Actually it's quite a silly shayaari which is based on Rd's dilemma on talking about his " relationship talks " .
So here it goes , HAPPY READING !!! 😊😊

Ae mere dost kya haal , main batau is dil ka aapko,

Samajhta hi nahi chahta ye baat ,

Un donon me nahi hain kisi tarah ke bhi aapsi talukaat .

Kehte hain ki kaam hai hamara to karna hi padega ,

Trolling se bachna padta hain to single rehna hi padega . 😆


I know it is very wierd kind of shayari but I was actually laughing when I penned it down .

I am all ready to take your tamata , chappals and other sabjizs , but dhyaan se dena mehengai bad gayi hai . 😆😆 Really no offence for any Rd lovers kyunki main khud uski itni baadi fan hun so don't take it in some other way . 😆😆

From Kristy with loads of love . ❤️❤️

Critisism and suggestion are always welcome 🤗🤗

Pls don't copy the poem and post it in any social media platforms 😊😊

Would love to read your precious comments . 😳😳

Edited by Kristy2092003 - 6 years ago

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Posted: 6 years ago
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The last line trolling se bachna hai toh single rehna hi padega 🤣 Actually this poem reflects rd's inner state!! Superb work Kristy. I really enjoyed it 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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it was awesome Kristy
trolling se toh bechare ko bachna hi padega
isly aajkal social media se sanyas le rkha hain janab ne
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rph09

The last line trolling se bachna hai toh single rehna hi padega 🤣 Actually this poem reflects rd's inner state!! Superb work Kristy. I really enjoyed it 😆


Actualy when I wrote this poem I thought it was gross & I would never post it but I was getting bored of what to do in IF so posted this 😆😆 Waise thread pe koi on kyu nahi hai ??
I was getting so bored 😳😳 Aap sab log kab on honge ??
We can understand Rd's inner turmoil 🤣🤣

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: munchkinland

it was awesome Kristy

trolling se toh bechare ko bachna hi padega
isly aajkal social media se sanyas le rkha hain janab ne

Haa ... baba ab online hi nahi ho rahe hai 😭😭
Issiliye Insta pe Fanpages pe " Missing Rd Rai " karke post aur Vms banane shuru kar diye hai .. 🤣
Pta nahi apna hero kab sanyas se wapas aayega ?? 😕😕
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Posted: 6 years ago
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It's beautiful. Trolling, kaam - every line was awesome .😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: shwta16

It's beautiful. Trolling, kaam - every line was awesome .😊

Thank you shweta dii 🤗🤗
I'm glad u liked it 😆😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice poem Kristy
And the trolling line was just perfect😉

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kristy2092003

Kya hai yeh ??? 😕😕


Sabko mera shashtam dandwad pranam .
Actually it's quite a silly shayaari which is based on Rd's dilemma on talking about his " relationship talks " .
So here it goes , HAPPY READING !!! 😊😊

Ae mere dost kya haal , main batau is dil ka aapko,

Samajhta hi nahi chahta ye baat ,

Un donon me nahi hain kisi tarah ke bhi aapsi talukaat .

Kehte hain ki kaam hai hamara to karna hi padega ,

Trolling se bachna padta hain to single rehna hi padega . 😆


I know it is very wierd kind of shayari but I was actually laughing when I penned it down .

I am all ready to take your tamata , chappals and other sabjizs , but dhyaan se dena mehengai bad gayi hai . 😆😆 Really no offence for any Rd lovers kyunki main khud uski itni baadi fan hun so don't take it in some other way . 😆😆

From Kristy with loads of love . ❤️❤️

Critisism and suggestion are always welcome 🤗🤗

Pls don't copy the poem and post it in any social media platforms 😊😊

Would love to read your precious comments . 😳😳



Kristy,
This is Ria.I am pretty new here.And always up for shayaris and poems.Since i can only manage shayaris,I am quite intrigued by people who can pen poems in English.
Your poem had me in splits ,especially the last line...But then in retrospection I found it to be so true...Here's wishing more strength to your creativity,
Love,Ria.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: RangnRia



Kristy,
This is Ria.I am pretty new here.And always up for shayaris and poems.Since i can only manage shayaris,I am quite intrigued by people who can pen poems in English.
Your poem had me in splits ,especially the last line...But then in retrospection I found it to be so true...Here's wishing more strength to your creativity,
Love,Ria.


Awww ... Thank you dear for such a heart warming response ... 🤗🤗
I'm glad that you liked my work . I am always welcome for shayaaris and poems you know 😉😆😆
I basically write poems and shayaaris because you don't just rhyme the words but put your own emotion to it 😃
You can check out my other works in my index which is filled with shaayaris and poems , if you wish 😃
HAPPY READING !!!!!


Edited by Kristy2092003 - 6 years ago

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