A poem on sameer's feelings before he met naina

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi guys remember the mount abu track when sameer's diary is accidentally discovered by naina and she reads his poetry.So i had written a short poem depicting sameer's feelings before he met naina.Hope you enjoy reading it😃

Where will I find the beauty,
That ensnares the senses of the world,
Trapped in a colourful water bottle,
I have lost my charm

I owe an account of infidelity,
Unsettled truce with life,
I bicker over my misspent youth,
I rage the stable like a mad horse,
Unrelenting like a mammoth

For I ate the forbidden fruit.
My hands still reek of the kisses,
Of the ruthless truth,
And gnarly lies

They all walk away,
And I stay alone,
On the room of my own,
In my morbid existence,
And keep looking for the sun

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow! It's beautiful and you have beautifully used symbols here such as the Forbidden Fruit, mad horse, Colorful eatee bottle. Loved it. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Brilliant!! Dadaji aap sachme badiya likhte ho👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow... Amazing
You poems literally bring the character's emotions out😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful as always
now I get it why you said literature is your first love
you are very good at it

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