Samaina TS : A Game That Changed The Game(part 3 updated on page 2) - Page 2

Oh god kya ye kya hogya

Recap :

Bas aaj chupa le bhut tuti hoo me.
Ek tere alawa jag se ruthi hoo me.

Bas aaj chupa le bhut tuti hoo me.
Ek tere alawa jag se ruthi hoo me.

Yu to bhut kabil ho gam chupane me.
Bas akele me chupkar kar roti hoo me.

Bas aaj chupa le bhut tuti hoo me.
Ek tere alawa jag se ruthi hoo me

Is shayri ko sunne ke baad sameer waha se chala jata hai. Apne piche ek roti hui naina ko chodke...

Narrator : Us din sameer ke sir pe ek alag sa junoon sanwar tha, use aisa lag rha tha jaise uske sath dhokha hua hai.
Is matlabi duniya ne ek bar fir uske dil ke tukde kar diye hai...
Aur in sab ke bich na jane kab wo ghar se bhut door nikal jata hai. Aur ek park mai pahuch jata hai jaha koi bi nhi hota. Wo park ke ek kone mai padi bench par baith jata hai. Aur apne aap se hi baat karne lagta hai.

Sameer : Naina, naina aise kaise kar skti hai. Bharosa karta tha mai uspe. Itne saalo tak usne mjhse ye baat chupai, ko...koi mera apna nhi hai.

He was crying like a child. Who complains to her mother.

Tabhi waha se guzarte hue shaksh ki nazar rote hue sameer pe padti hai. Aur wo sameer ke paas jate hai.

Man : kya mai yaha baith skta hoo ?
Sameer(trying to hide his teares) : nahi itni sari seats hai kahi aur jake baith jao.
Man : wo beta baki ki seates zara gandi hai. Plz.

He was a middel age men, sameer doesn't want to disrespect him. So he allowed that person to sit on seat next to him.

There was silent for several minutes bcoz sameer was not in any condition to talk and the person want sameer to be comfortable with him.
When he realise that sameer stops crying he starts to start a conversation.

Man : beta bade pareshan lag rahe ho. Koi dikkat hai kya.
Sameer : aapse matlb ? Aap nhi smjh sakte ho, to smjhne ki koshish bi mat kijiye.
Man : ha baat to tumhari sahi hai. Par beta meri zindagi ka anubhav kehta hai ki dard baatne se kam hota hai.

Us shaksh ki aawaz mai na jane kaisa apnapan tha. Ki sameer unke samne rone lagta hai. Aur sari baat unhe batata hai, ki kis tarh naina aur wo mile, kis tarh unhe pyar hua, kaise wo jhagde, shadi, aur aaj ki ladai.

Sameer : aap bataiye uncle mai kyu na hoo gussa usne dhoka diya hai mjhe, bataiye kya mai galt hoo.
Man : nhi beta, tum galt nhi ho, jab koi apna aapse sach chupata hai to bhut dukh hota hai.

Sameer feel good after sharing all this.

Man : par beta zara ek baat to batao,

Kya tum aaj usse islie gussa ho kyunki tumhe saalo purani koi baat pata chali. Aur wo bi islie kyunki tum chahte the ki wo tumhari side le, jabki tab tum khud usse pyar karte the,
Jab tumhara pyar hi us wakt exist nhi krta tha to tum usse har kasoti pe khara utarne ki ummind kaise laga skte ho.

Those words really hit hard to him,
Naina kaise uska sath deti jab usse ye tak pata nhi tha ki sameer usse pyar krta bi hai ya nhi. Kaise wo leti ek ladke ka sath jabki usko hmesha ladko se door rehna sikhaya gya tha. Shayad usne jo us wakt kiya wo sahi tha.

Lekin fir bi itne saalo tak naina ne usse jo ye baat chupai thi uski wajh se sameer ko bhut dukh pahucha tha, aur uska gussa ab bi waisa hi tha.

Sameer : mana uncle ki wo us wakt sahi thi, par fir bi itne saalo tak usne mjhe dhoke mai rakha mere vishwash ko tod kar diya usne... Mai use kabhi maaf nhi karunga kabhi bi nhi.

Man : beta tumhe pata hai. Mai bi bilkul tumhari tarh tha. Ek roz mai bi apni biwi pe gussa hokar ghar chodkar chala gaya, apne piche ek roti bhilakhti jaan ko chodke bilkul tumhari naina ki tarh.
Mai usse itna gussa tha ki na to maine uski puri baat suni aur na hi use maaf kiya.
Mai us din itne gusse mai tha ki maine ek pal ke lie bi ye nhi socha ki us bechari ka mere siva hai kon hai.
Isse pehle na jane kitni hi bar usne mere lie kitna kuch kiya tha, par fir bi uski hazaro achaiyo ke bawjood mai bas uski ek kami ke piche pad gya

Uska wo raat raat bhar jaag kar mera khayal rakha, mujhe chot lagne par uski aankho mai aansu aa jana. Puri duniya se mere lie lad jana.
Aaj bi jab wo sab sochta hoo to lagta hai kitna khushnaseeb tha mai jo mjhko aisa sathi mila tha.
Par in sabke bawjood mjhe us din dikha yo bas uski ek bhool.

Sameer unki wo sari baate badi dhyan se sunta hai. Aur kahi na kahi uska gussa shant hone lagta hai, kyunki uske har ek sawal ka jawab use mil rha tha, siwaye ek ko chodkar...

Sameer : par uncle aap mjhe ye sb kyu bata rahe hai aur in sab ka hmari ladai se kya matlb.
Man : mai tumhe ye sb islie bta raha hoo kyunki us raat mai bi apni biwi ko chodkar chala gya tha.
Lekin Mjhe kaha pata tha ki us raat mere lie wapis jana namumkin jo jayega.
Kyunki us raat mai apno se hmesha hmesha ke lie door ho gya, wo mjhse itna door ho gyi ki mai uske pass ja ji nhi saka.
(Tears started forming in his eyes)
Aur aaj itne saalo baad bi mai bhagwan se yhi dua krta hoo ki bas mjhe ek bar apni wo bhool sudharne ka moka de de lekin nhi...
Aur shayad yhi saza hai meri us bhool ki.
Tumhe pata hai zindagi mai sabse khushnaseeb log kon hote hai, wo nhi jinko sansar ki sari khushiya milti hai, na hi wo jinko aisa sathi mile jo kabhi unhe dukh na de
Balki asli khushnaseeb to wo log hote hai jinko ek aisa sathi mile jo na sirf apni galti ko swikar kare balki usko sahi karne ke lie jee jaan ek kar de
Jaise tumne naina ko manane ke lie mahino tak uske ghar mai kaam kiya socho agar naina tumhe wo moka na deti to kya tum aur naina aaj sath hote, nhi na ??
Aaj naina bi tumse usi tarh ek moka maang rahi hai, apni har ek galti ko accept kar rhi hai, ro rahi rahi gidgida rahi hai.
Tum chaho to naina ko uski galti ki jo chahe saza do par plz beta kabhi bi usse itna door mat jao ki kahi waapis jane mai deri ho jaye, meri tarh...

Man : ye baat sirf tumhari aur meri nhi hai beta, duniya mai baki sb log bi to yhi karte hai na. Hm apno ki hazaro achaiyo ko nazarandaz kar dete hai sirf uski ek bhool ke lie.
Islie jab kabhi moka mile to maaf kar dena chahie unki khushi ke lie na sahi apni khushi ke lie hi.

Kya khoob kaha hai na kisi ne

" Bhale hi bhool ke lie maafi mat do...
Par bhulaye jane ki saza bi mat do..."

" We don't have to forgive them
But we shouldn't forget them"

Ye hamare hanth mai ki hm kya chahte hai, ek aur tum chaho to yuhi zindagi bhar gussa reh skte ho air ek achi khasi zindagi ko tabah kar sakte ho meri tarah ya dusri aur tum naina ko maaf karke apni hasti khilkhilati zindagi mai wapis lot sakte ho aur zindagi bhar sath reh skte ho.
Par beta meri ek baat yaad rakhna gussa aur ego, iski wajh se na jane kitne hi rishte kharab hue hai aur jab umar ke aakhiri padaa pe tum piche mud kar dekhoge to janoge ki tumse kitni badi galti hui thi, moka samne tha bas zarurat thi to ek maafi ki...
Maine apne zindagi mai same tumhare jaisy hi galti ki thi aur uska parinam mai aajtak bhugat rha hoo...
Jate jate bas ek aakhiri baat kehna chahoonga beta

" Log sath islie nhi rehte kyunki wo bhool jate hai...
Balki wo sath islie rehte hai kyunki wo maaf kar dete hai..."

Sameer(apne aap se) : ye ... Ye mai kya krne wala tha aaj, mai kaise gusse ki aag mai itna andha ho gya jo mujhe meri naina ke aansu tak nhi dikhe.
Mai wahi sameer hoo na jisne puri duniya ke samne ye promise kiya tha ki mai kabhi bi apni naina ki aankho mai aansu nhi aane dunga. Fir kaise aaj mai hi uski rone ki wajh ban gya.
Wo roti rahi mere pairo mai gir kar gigidate rahi par mai use waha chod aaya...
Kaise ho skta hoo mai itna matlbi.
To kya hua agar usne paper chori ke wakt mera sath nhi diya. Mai kaise bhool gya ki ye wahi naina hai jisne mere lie raato mai jaag jaag kar sweater banaya taki mjhe maa ki kami mehsus na ho.
Ye whi naina hai jiske bheje gaye fool ne mjhe delhi mai bigadne se bachaya.
Ye wahi naina hai na jisne mere lie apna hanth tak jala liya.
(Crying miserably) kaise kar skta hoo mai apni jaan apni naina ke sath aisa...
Pata nhi ki wo mjhe maaf kregi bi ya nhi...

Man (keeps a hand on his shoulder) : beta wo tumhe zarur maaf karegi. Meri ashirvad tumhare sath hai.
Sameer (between sobs) : n..nhi... Uncle mujh jaise insan ko wo kaise maaf kar skti hai.
Man : maaf karegi nhi maaf kar chuki hai.
Sameer : kya...kya matlb ?
Man : udhar dekho tumhari naina tumhe dhundhte hue yha aa gyi. Ab wo tumhe sambhal legi mai chalta hoo.

And sameer look towards her.

Narrator :
Naina ka roop mai shabdo mai bayan nhi kar sakta bas yu smjh lijiye aisa lag rha tha ki koi apni jaan ko bachane ke lie bhag raha ho.

Uske khule baal hawa mai lehra rahe the.
Uski aankho mai aasuo ka sailab tha.
Jo uske gaalo tak aake sukh chuke the.
Uske pairo mai na chappal thi na hi hantho mai chudiya.
Us tapti dopheri mai wo nange pair sameer ko har ek gali kuche mai dhundh rahi thi. Hanth mai sameer ki photo aur dil mai sameer ki chinta liye.
Girti chot khati hanth pairo pai kitne hi chot liye.
Par in sab ke bawjood bi use apni chinta na thi, thi to bas uske sameer ki chinta...

Ab agar ise bi pyar nhi kehte to pata nhi kise kehte hai...

Aur fir uski nazar park ki us bench par padti hai jaha sameer baitha tha. Aur us aur wo aise daudh lagati hai mano waha sameer nhi balki uska dil rkha ho...

Aur wo sameer ke pass aake gale lagane lag jati hai. Par bich mai hi ruk jati hai.
Shayad ye sochkar ki sameer use apne se door na kar de.

Naina : sam...same...sameer m..mai wo...

Sameer ki aankho se fir ek bar aansu behne lagte hai, kaise kar skta hai koi kisi se itna pyar. Bina apni parvah kiye ghar se itna door bhagti hui aayi naina abhi bi usske gusse se dari hui hai par fir bi use akela nhi chodna chahti. Ye sochkar ki kahi mjhe kuch ho na jaye.
Uski saanse phool rahi hai, chehra murja gya hai. Aankho mai ek ajib sa dar hai,
Dar is baat ka ki na jane sameer use maaf karega bi ya nhi. Kahi... Kahi wo use apne door to nhi kar dega.

Shayad aisy hi hoti hai na ek aurat. bhale hi lakh gussa ho jaye apne pyar se par usse door jane ka khayal tak unhe andar tak jhakjhor deta hai. Aur us wakt wo bina kisi ki parwah kiye sare jag se lad jati hai.
Samaj bhale hi aurat ko kamor samjhe par jab baat apno ke lie hoti hai na, to wo kuch bi kar gujarti hai.

Sameer se aur bardasht nhi hota aur wo jhat se use gale leta hai.

Sameer : I... I am.. sorry naina, plz mjhe maaf kar do.
Naina : same... Sameer ye tum kya keh rahe ho mafi to mu...mjhe magni chahie
Sameer : chup ekdam chup jyada mahan banne lagi ho na aajkal. Itni dopher mai yha tak chali aayi, kuch ho jata to.
Naina : aati kaise nhi, tumhe jo manana tha. Plz mjhe maaf kr do sameer.
Sameer : nhi naina jitni gunhegar tum ho utna hi mai bi hoo. Maine bi to delhi mai wo sb gande kaam...
Naina (put a finger on his mouth) : khabardar jo mere sameer ke bare me kuch bi bola to..
Sameer : naina tumhe pata hai aaj maine ek bhut kaam ki chiz sikhi.
Naina : aur wo kya hai mr. Maheshwari
Sameer : ki purani galtiyo pe gussa karke aap past ko nhi badal sakte, par kisi ko maaf karke aap apna future jarur badal sakte ho.
Naina : acha par fir bi meri galtiyo ke lie sorry sameer aur thank you bi, mjhe maaf karne ke lie
Sameer : naina tum bhool rhi ho dosti mai no sorry no thank you.
Naina : nhi par sorry to bolna padega na galti jo ki hai itni badi.
Sameer : ab agar tumne ek baar aur sorry bola na to dekh lena..
Naina : acha kya kar loge, mai to bolungi sorr...

She can't complete her words bcoz sameer seal her lips with his. That kiss was not represent passion or desire but it shows the love the need for each other.
And with that two restless souls found their home in each other arms.

With that they goes towards the home where all the gang also present..

Munna : bhai tu kaha chala gya tha yr pata hai hm sb kitna pareshan ho gye the. Kaha kaha nhi dhunda tujhe
Pandit : ha yr sameer hme to bhut dar lag rha tha.
Sameer : mujhe kya ho skta tha jab meri naina mere sath hai to.
Munna : matlb tune bhabhi ka sorry accept kar liya.
Sameer : ha kyunki us sorry ki jitni jarurat naina ko thi utni hi mjhe bi.
Munna : yr sameer. Tu ho sake to mjhe bi maaf kar dio yr. Mai janta hoo ki mjhe swati ko wo baat nhi batani chahie thi.
Sameer : munna pandit tum dono meri jaan ho yr. Aur ek tarh se dekha jaye to acha hi hua wo baat sabke samne aa gyi. Warna shayad mai kbhi naina ko nhi bata pata.

And then he move towards swati.

Sameer : swati pls tum bi mjhe maaf kar do mjhe tumse wo questions nhi puchna chahie tha.
Swati : nhi sameer galti to meri bi hai jo maine gusse mai itna kuch bol diya, tum bi please mjhe maaf kar do.

Preeti was looking towards kamya

Preeti : Tujhe kuch nhi bolna.
Kamya : nhi...
Everyone : kyu
Kamya : are yr fir tum log hi kahoge
dosti mai no sorry no thank you.
Everyone : pagal hai ye puri

Sameer : lekin kuch bi kaho yr. Is game ki wjh se mushkile to aayi par ham sab ne har baar ki tarh un sabhi mushkilo ko hara diya
Munna : ha akhir mai ek bar fir hamari dosti jeet gyi.
Preeti : ha aur chalo aaj ye wada karte hai. Chahe halat jaise bi ho hm sb hmesha sath rehenge.
Naina : aur kabhi kisi ka sath nhi chodenge.

Hip hip hoorey...

They all share the group hug and apologies to each other, because they knew ki wo is khel khel mai bhut aage nikal gaye the.
Lekin wo kehte hai ki ant bhala to sab bhala.

After some days

In the bedroom

Naina was doing household work and mr maheshwari is doing his work kissing his hot wifey

Naina : sameer...plz na
Sameer : nhi...
Naina : acha ye tumhare kapde to rakhne do.
Sameer : ha to tum rakho na maine thodi mana kiya hai.
Naina : kya hoga tumhara. Aaahhh... aaram se

And suddenly someone knock on the door.
(Hamare samaina romance kare aur koi unhe disturb na kare aisa kabhi ho skta hai kya.)

Sameer : yr ye mummy bi na
Naina : sameer jao date kholo jake dekho wo bas kuch dino ke lie hi aayi hai. To hamara farz banta hai unka khayal rakhna.
Sameer : ohhk boss

And he goes to open the door

Naina : pagal hai pura. Par pyara wala pagal

In the hall

Vishakha : dekh sameer aaj ghar safai karte hue mjhe kya mila.
Sameer : wow mummy ye sb to bhut purani photos hai ye sb aapko kaha se mili.
Vishakha : uppar wale room ke almirah mai.

Suddenly sameer ki aankh ek photo par padti hai.

Sameer : mummy ye photo kiski hai.
vishakha (with tears) : beta ye... Ye photo tere papa ki hai. Tujhe to yaad bi nhi tu bhut chota tha aur fir unke jane ke baad ye album bi pata nhi kaha kho gyi.

Sameer ke pairo tale zameen khisak jati hai apne papa ki photo ko dekhkar.
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Us photo mai khada wo shaksh whi uncle the jo use us din park mai mile the.

Narrator : ab aap ise koi chamatkar keh lijiye ya koi aankho ka dhoka par us din jo hua wo sameer kabhi nhi bhool paya.
Hm aksar miracle ki baat karte hai. Par us din jo kuch us park mai hua uspe na to science yakin karegi aur na hi logic.

Par us din umhone na sirf sameer ko sahi rasta dikhaya balki apna ashirvad bi diya..

Kehne ko to hm ye bi keh skte hai ki wo bas sameer ke aankho ka dhoka tha.
Ya sameer wo sab imagine kar raha tha.
Par in sbse ek baat to tay ho gyi thi

Sameer ki zindagi mai uske nanu, naina munna & pandit to hai hi. Par uske dil ke ek kone mai aaj bi uske papa hai...
Jo shayad bura wakt aane par apne bache ko sahi raah dikhayenge

The end

Isse pehle koi gaaliya de to mai bata doo ki mjhse romantic scenes nhi likhe jate. And i know ki ye story kisi bi normal os jaisy nhi hai islie pasand na aaye to maafi

Share your opinions with me, kuch new try kiya hai. You can criticize me wholeheartedly if you find any scenes wrong.
And one more thing guys I m going to announce something so stay connected with me
Bye bye

This was awesome

I hope is story se sabko seekh mile ki maf kar dene mein khudki hi bhalai hai. Loved it!

👏Really awesome update with nice concept.

Originally posted by: sadhikasamaina

This was awesome

you connect people with your words

it was sameer's father who helped him out

woww

great

continue with the great work

Originally posted by: Rph09

I hope is story se sabko seekh mile ki maf kar dene mein khudki hi bhalai hai. Loved it!

It was really good

All the Parts Were Good And Superb Written And sorry for commenting late..But loved it..And Do write more...I have read in one go...All the parts were good and 2nd and 3rd part was Lil emotional but loved it...

Originally posted by: munchkinland

It was really good

gave a lesson too

and I seriously adored how you incorporated Sameer's father

and left it on our imaginations that whether he was real or just sameer's heart talking