SamAina Series: Post-Wedding Fiascos (7th Sequence on Page 50)

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Rph09

@Rph09

Sparkler

Posted: 6 years ago

#351

Perfectly portrayed their thoughts! Loved it.

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Satpriya

@Satpriya

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#352

Hi,

Maine saare update ek sath read kiye.

Wow Kya likhti ho yaar.

Sach kahu toh serial see bhi aacha.

Ye Sam or Naina mujhe actual see jyada pasand hai.

Serial ab thoda sa bore kar Raha hai but your Jodi is fabulous.

Tumne saare episodes itne aachese emotions ko dhayan mein rakhte hue likha hai

I just fell in love with your writing

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Thulasi Nair

@Samaina_loverzz

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#353

Muskan Dii It was superb..Sorry for not commenting for the previous 2 fiascos..But loved them a lot... I liked all the fiascos aur mujhe lagta hai Ki aapko hi humare show ke co-writer/director banana chahiye.. And Thanx for the Pm..Do write more And do pm me whenever u t updating it And Also pm me for the Accidentally in Love Update too...

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Vidhimehra

@Vidhimehra

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#354

Beautiful bilkul mou style of writing as my fav writer...i wish aisa tym hume doremon jarur de sakta hai samer typ gentleman and especially knowledge of shyness in intimacy that tym was un dino ka only...bt surely hot one najna ka sharmana and sameer ka sangeet ke din ki tarah abhi bhi backout karna till the time naiN is rrady of her own...he will not do anythg to force in relationship.

Will wait for another fiasco.

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Ankita.jaiswal

@Ankita.jaiswal

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Posted: 6 years ago

#355

Fabulous again Mou...i am always short of words when it comes upon commenting upon ypur work..every update leaves me spellbound..

The tactical way in which the situations present in samaina's life are dealt with is simply Mindblowing...i throughly enjoyed both part 5 and 6 and it felt as if both sameer and naina are speaking out and conveying their thoughtsto us...youre so good

I hope youll use the drunken sequence to good use too...but instead of sameer i would love to see naina's drunken state of mind...😆

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Rohitsad

@Rohitsad

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#356

Lovely update.

Sameer is ready to her by his charm the way he is seducing her ,now Naina is also comfortable with this she is just shy not scared and checking him out

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Snehath

@Snehath

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#357

Mou,

Kaha meine socha ki Mrs Maheswari will make the move and we will get to see Suprised Sameer, yaha toh mujhe hi suprise mil gayi hei. I did not expect that you would give an update on his feelings during the stunt which he pulled on naina, thats an awesome move Mou.

Eagerly waiting for the next os

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RangnRia

@RangnRia

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#358

Hi Di,

Sorry for the late reply cause n my place of posting Internet is a huge issue.I may be late but be sure of my replies.Right now m travelling and my net is also working.And I found your PM.Following FCFS rule I read this OS.

Consent is so not an Indian term Di,yet all your versions of Mr Maheshwari are so adorably respectful...

One moment which stole the show for me was when Sameer felt equally clueless about initiating intimacy yet kept it away from even his chadi-buddies...

Alu parathas...the only thing that have the power to snatch away Mr Maheshwari's attention from his darling wife...

Your detailed description of the towel encounter and thoughts on his mind were bang on...

One word...Fantabulous...

Loads of love,

Ria

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vandana

@VandyP

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+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#359

mou... naina's problem is seriously a big problem😆

i mean... imagine urself having "The Sameer Maheshwari" as ur hubby... and all his demands and desires in that package🤣

the man that she has started noticing now... was very much subtly visible all throughout... but call it his care and concern for naina... he never made the visibility that prominent... that was so so evident wen inspite of naina pecking his cheeks and expecting the same in return...he had chosen to kiss her hands...

but mou... inspite of such a beautiful piece of writing here... i have a complaint

i was soo looking forward to you making sam mouth the explaination of the french kiss which was otherwise muted in the sow...but u too acted like the cvs and ignored it😭

loved loved loved...the way you put words into naina's thoughts as she stood infront of the mirror and stole glances at her towel clad hot hubby☺️

loved the subtle way in which u hinted that naina knows there's definitely more than a kiss on sam's mind☺️

and...damn that ending!!! it put such a beautiful closure to all those hugs and kisses in that toy train ride... giving us an exact insight as to wat was going on in her thoughts!!

loving these short doses mou... please keep them coming...coz this piece and the next one definitely made up for the extremely bad editing in the show😉

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vandana

@VandyP

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#360

Mr Sameer Seductive Maheshwari...😆

Have i told u that never have u ever put up such an apt title for any of ur updates😆

mou...frankly speaking... seeing sam struggle so badly in the show for his first kiss...and getting nowhere near it... i myself had got frustrated...and had even thought aloud...dude just kiss her... she's your wife...she's gonna love it...but then reading through this update...i realised how beautifully you threw light on the fact that... for sam it has always been her consent and comfort foremost...and his desires came only after that...

loved the way you explained that he did not want her to just give in to the moment... but live in that moment

loved how sam had tried every trick in the book to initiate the intimacy...but finally it was an accidental act which made his wife's hormones just fly in and out of those glances she stole of his towel clad body🤣

and sameer maheshwari...calling it a stunt!😎 and jugaadu sam...doing exactly wats expected of him...chance pe dance🤣

i loved how you made him diss any ideas of discussing how to initiate or the progress of intimacy between them with mundit...coz some things should remain between man and wife👍🏼

loved how he tested her with the no touch feel...and the way you explained his turmoil as he sprayed that cologne on himself😳

and...hats off to you for writing that yes men can turn into puddles too👏... yes...the man out there who had chanced on seducting his wife...was equally seduced with her touch on his bare body☺️

i simply loved how he revelled about just her being affected by his touches...not wanting anything more from that moment.

loved how you explained how just intimacy or forcing urself in the act was not the sole goal... but being comfortable and giving in everything to live that moment is wat intimacy is all about!!!

as i've always said...its ur understanding of the characters in such depth...that u are able to give us insights as beautiful as these...which will always be cherished wenever i rewatch that towel scene

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