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Posted: 6 years ago
#31
Bahot hi acha OS hai 👏

Par dhukh iss baat ka hai ye show Mai milna impossible hai 😭


Thank you for this , atleast itna acha pdhne Ko toh Mila 😳



Please update your , stories ASAP 😉

Let it go - Abhi naintal Mai hi settle krna hai kya samaina Ko 😆


Accidentally in love - ab intezaar nhi ho rha , na Sameer Ko na Hume , krwa do shaadi 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#32
Beautiful and simply no words to explain how excellent this was. Wish the same could happen in the show too..but no hopes on tat.
Excellent writing mou, u rocked as usual...
Waiting to read your other updates too
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Posted: 6 years ago
#33
Awesome work Mou... 👏 you are an amazing writer. Portrayed Sameer and Naina just the way each girl want her Man and each Man want his girl to be like. Each emotional conveyed fantastically love, fear, care, excitement, and HOPE that everything will be on place as they are now two body one soul forever.
Keep writing such awesome OS/SS/FF for lalchi readers like me 😆

Love DK.

Edited by dhk2311 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#34
Beautifully written Moumita.. .Thank you so much for sharing.. .How we wish we could get something like t his in the show... But alas...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#35
Wow Mou, it's so beautiful!

How I wish they showed at least half of what you have written.
With Ashdeep's chemistry, all these scenes would have been fab!

Y don't you try and see if you can join the CVs team, we would get some awesome Samaina scenes then... 😛

Anyways .. loved the small conversation, the use of hammock, the escape from Mamiji and ofcourse our ever understanding poor Sameer 😉


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Posted: 6 years ago
#36
Mou , first of all How are you?
I shall say you are back again with a bang. Lovely, beautiful, mesmerising, each word that signifies serenity and beauty can be used to describe this OS.

It is such a great work. Hats off to you. 👍🏼

You know I have shut down each and every form of entertainment from my life as I have to focus on my goal but i am not able to stop myself from reading your works. And I feel some cheating is allowed, Correct😉
And as I have always said you bring a smile on my face anytime I read your stories. They work as stressbusters.
So I want to say Thank you Mou for sharing your stories here.

Coming to the OS -- it was magical

The day dreaming Sameer Maheshwari is so cute and blushing Naina😳
Sameer keeping Naina his first priority is Dil le lo❤️
Loved the way he kept thinking about her comfort and controlled himself.

These Somanis and Mama - Mami are so cruel. How can they make new bride sleep on the floor. And again a bow to you for understanding and predicting this even before it happened in the show 👏

Sam taking Naina to the room and there hammock scene with the cute nok-jhok was lovely

Sameer announcing Naina is the Malkin of this house was superb.

I hope Sam wakes up soon in the show too and take Naina's side.

Love,
Mansi

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Posted: 6 years ago
#37
Hey Mou,
Firstly, I'm sorry for the late reply.
Secondly, To be very honest, I wasn't keen to read after reading the title but damn, when I've finished reading the whole os the title can't be more suitable than this, Hope.
Third, I just want to bow down for this masterpiece. God, there was this fine details and incidents you've written that the show looks a bit dim in front of your story.
I loved the understanding Sameer displayed and Naina's fear and apprehension are the perfect highlight of the os .
Wonderful work.
Thank you.

Love,
Neetu.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38
Hey Mou, how are u doing? We missed ur writing so much and this os was like genie fulfilling our wish.
The title itself is so beautiful, simple and surreal. 4 simple letters holding the most important place in our life. And u have beautifully put that in this OS.

Loved how Sameer was worried abt the reason for Naina's crying, the way he was comforting her, the way he held her everything was so aesthetic.

Loved how u portrayed naina's first day at sasural. Sameer can dream abt romancing naina anywhere and anytime. The way he held her and took into their room, their romantic moments, his raw desire for her, her increasing desire for him just amazing it was..

Sameer can never stay quiet when it's abt Naina's care, respect and comfort. Just loved how smartly he found a solution to the problems and made things clear to all the ppl around especially the maheshwaris and somanis. Really wished we could see on the show everythjng that u penned.

Looking fwd for many more heart touching, romantic posts from u..

PS. Is there any chance of getting to read ur older ffs

Lots of love 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#39
Mou...
This is such a beauty
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Posted: 6 years ago
#40
Mou diii
I am flattered again...
You made me cry with happy tears
It was sooo beautiful sooo soothing and very realistic...
Best just like you...
Infact I'll again say the line...
Kaash CVS ne esa kiya hota...but koi nahi i am lucky to have mou dii...
Who fulfill those unfulfilled wishes

Thankyou
Labhya😊

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