SamAina OS: Hope

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#41

This was so beautifully written. Loved how Sameer handles the relatives and never let Naina down at all..

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vandana

@VandyP

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 6 years ago

#42

mou... frankly speaking i can't thank you enough for this beauty...

day after day... as each epi airs and we as viewers are left yearning for a little more that was required...a little more that should've been there... you chose to bless us with this piece of writing which not just covers and fulfills each little thing was was missed by viewers...it goes a step ahead in re-establishing the original essence of the characters of the show!

no wonder now its not just me but a lot of others who don't get tired of saying " jo show mein nahi milega wo mou ki writings mein milega"😆

i can't tell u how pissed i was wen the cvs casually omitted the car sequence after bidaai...and how delighted i was wen i saw u starting the os with it

the way sam consoled her... introducing her to their world with the assurance that they both will be together always was such a beauty😳

and sam's dreams are just🤣...i love his consistency😆

i simply loved how u described every bit of the decoration that had been put up by sanmundit to welcome naina...and how it helped ease her fears of being amongst "anjaan log"😳

i could so imagine sam contemplating the various reactions of his dream grihapravesh🤣

but of all things that caught my eye was the fact that sam did not want to be with naina because he wanted to initiate intimacy... he wanted to be with her coz he knew they both needed each other's company...especially naina who was now in a totally new environment...

have i ever told u chance p dance wala sam is becoming my new favourite🤣

loved the ring game... and the way he distracted naina... though immediately he knew he was so going to pay for it😆

mou... i must applaud you for sticking to the original essence of the characters...and time and again re-establishing it through your stories...

for sameer it has always been naina's comfort which has been his top priority...and inspite of being a stud and a lot of peer pressure...he chose to stick to her comfort above everything else!

and u seriously need to take a bow for ur eye for detailing...

the way naina was curious to see the new house... the way the hammock excited her...and those attempts to get onto it but slipping off😆...each bit and its detailing was to die for 😳

i was pretty surprised wen u incorporated the burn mark...and used naina's concern to help sam broach up the topic of intimacy with her and be bowled over by her innocent responses😳

aah...and then finally a glimpse of protective sam who won't tolerate a word against naina...nor will tolerate any discomfort wen it comes to her!!

mou... no matter wat i comment today...all i know that words are not enough to justify this beauty of writing that u came up with!!

do write more😳

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MSK04

@MSK04

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: munchkinland
It was so beautiful
I would start with appreciating you for the name of the story Hope
A hope which we all have in our hearts that maybe not now but in future we will finally see samaina interacting like this.
Sameer consoled her and soothed her worries that he will be there for her if no one else is present.

Naina saw potent raw desires in his eyes but obviously could not pinpoint what exactly it was.
Sameer can actually go into his dreams anytime anywhere
lekin chlo khi nhi dreams main he romances Naina.
I really wanted that red feet thing and angoothi wala rasam in the show
lekin vha nhi toh yhi shi
Naina ek min main naina devi ban gyi
sameer ki toh khair nhi thi bas bach gya

Mundit are so cute I swear they were teasing him
par sare armaano pr pani phir gya

our innocent boy wanted some moment alone with his wife aur sab nalayak khayal soch rhe the
He was really furious to see Naina sleeping on the floor
she owns the house and she is made to sleep on that damn floor
Loved how sameer woke her up and took her to their room
fulfilled a part of his dream by lifting her up
They had a heart to heart convo
And Naina saw the mark for which she was blamed for
par bechari ko yeh bhi nhi pta
she was concerned
Sameer explained her about how a wife and husband relationship is not just about kissing and he is ready to take baby steps for her and pushed all his feelings aside so that he can be the patient teacher with her
Loved this drastic change
how sameer can let go of everything so as to protect Naina even if its from himself
Mami uth gyi but Sameer is smart enough he knows how to outdo such people
he put every one on their right places because you don't talk like that to his wife or about his wife
He even got Naina a bed and warned everyone to be careful
I really adored how mundit let go of their comfort for their dearest bhabhi

And finally they slept thinking about a beautiful future where no evil eye can put a cast on them

Thank you so much Suhani...!! 😃

Indeed how we all have so many hopes from the show and Samaina... I am sure they will fulfill all our hopes... 😳

And yeah, Sameer's protective instincts are too strong when it comes to Naina... so he will always protect her, and he cherishes her innocence... He will take her through stages of intimacy slowly and ensuring that she is a 100% partner in it... 😊

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MSK04

@MSK04

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Mdissan
Yaar..I wish the show would olso have a happy ending like this to their wedding day

Amazing !!!

Thank you dear...! 😳

Glad you liked it...

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MSK04

@MSK04

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: sharja84
Amazing...
Loved your take on the first day of a bride in her sasural...

Liked how Sameer was day dreaming about the various scenarios and his Naina's blush...

Liked how he came down to meet his wife just to ensure that she was okay.

Loved how he took her to their bedroom and the discussion thereafter.

Amazed at how he found a solution to ensure that his wife was not taunted by his relatives for finding them in the same room

Lastly, just loved how he made sure that his wife was provided a proper bed and not tormented in the name of some ritual..

Just loved everything about this OS.

Fingers crossed... HOPE.. even Cvs show something like in this in the show...

Love,
Neena

Thanks a lot dear... 😃

Show didn't have same content... but I am glad you liked this version of the post wedding sequence... 😳

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MSK04

@MSK04

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Fatistic
I have innocent tears right. :')

I mean how is this sooo sweettt?!?!?!

If this doesn't happen today... I'll cry.

And welcome backkk!!!

Thanks a lot Jess...! 😳

Well... it turned out different in the show... hope you didn't cry... 😉

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MSK04

@MSK04

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Rph09
Wow beautiful! But alas! We won't see this in the show😭 There is a rasam in marwadi that new bride has to sleep in front of ganesh murti. Poor girl didn't get the chance to change! But all her exhaustion vanished because of her dear husband. How sweet of him!! Loved it.

Thanks dear...! 😃

Yes, I know about that rasam... I am also married into a marwadi family, even though I am a Bengali... If you notice by the time Sameer makes Naina sleep in a room upstairs, on bed, in comfort, it is already almost dawn.. so technically the rasam was fulfilled... 😳