Samaina FF: Expectedly Unexpected Thread #3 (Part 35-Pg 115_No PMs) - Page 38

Originally posted by: vidrev

Oh god when will sameer know that the child belongs to him. When will naina tell him the truth. The chapter was really good. Sameer and naina must talk with each other. 😭 Naina was getting anger soon. She should understand sameer. The trio bond was nice. It was good to see munna and pandit showing concern for sameer. They really care for him. Naina should let him know him he is the father of the head. Awaiting to know what is in store in the next update. Thank for Pm dear.

Originally posted by: Mismatch

What a beautiful update. Thanks for ur reply. Yes I am new here and signed up just to give feedback. I don't know why but this story has a haunting familiarity and i have read it at least 3 times.

I loved Sameers's bond with Diya. I didn't like the physical violence towards the little girl that Naina is showing. She can be mad,frustrated, angry and even yell at her. She can punish her by making her stand in the corner for 5 mins or something like that.

But I loved Sameer Naina's dynamics and the sexual tension. Naina's helplessness and money problems can be felt through the writing. U r brilliant with words. Waiting fir the next update.
Sanchita

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Hi Sur! 🤗

I am glad that its not too late to unres.😆

Aww it never is dear..I wait with bated breath for your reviews! 😳

Well...You have just thrown me into a spectrum of emotions.Kis kis ke liye dukhi hun? Diya not doing well..Naina's anger and self beration, Sameer's plight and like a full circle;Diya's health issue.Rulane ka plan kiya hai na pura? 😭

Aww ro mat yaar..mujhe bura lagta hai ki log ro rahe hain coz of me! 😕 Acha bhi lagta hai ki they are able to connect with the story! I'd never planned it to be this emotional though.

First the title...They say "Love is like exploding cigar we are willing to smoke". The stronger their resistance is ,the more sparks they are emanating..Electrocuting the readers along side.That phone call..Sur!I must tell you once again that you are too good while it comes to dialogues.An art i need to learn from you.Not a single dialogue looks spoken unnecessarily.

Really! Thanks so much behen! I thought I was going overboard, but then decided to go ahead with the flow of the story! And your quotes man! Brilliant as usual! 👏

The entry of MunDit was so apt and timely.I actually loved the different tangent they took.Sameer's marriage.I can feel in my bone that mast diwali hone wali hai..The scene though amused me also made me feel the helplessness of Sameer and indirectly Naina.That trembling of balance in relationship.How could both forget all those memories which were realities and not some ancient myths to be forgotten as unbelievable.

So true...practically speaking, Mundit said the right thing...time heals everything...but what all are unaware of is that sheaths of truth and misunderstandings are yet to be unfolded...no one has a clear picture as yet...not Sameer...not Naina...not Mundit!

Diya's illness seems to be a big cue for Sameer.And I am waiting to see how it all unfolds.Before that I loved that sandwich scene.Bechari loves cheese and yet had to eat something thats not too palatable.I can relate to this tragic time.Man ho kuch khane ka and khao kuch aur ...🥱

Haha- aur soch Diya mere jaisi hai...cheese lover! 😆

Next what I loved is the description of School uniform and Sameer asking Diya to choose.And as I was reading along Naina's self questions about how Diya seemed more comfortable and demanding with Sameer ,I remembered a quote "We accept the love ,we think we deserve"..Diya might not know but she deserves father's love.Haq hai pencil kharidne ka and Ice cream khane ka..😳 Diya and Sameer scenes are pure love and beautifully written.❤️

BOLD: Again such a beautiful quote and I agree to it cent percent. The school uniform was similar to the one I used to wear in my first school...it was really pretty one😳 And yes, Diya ka haq hai to accept things from her father...though as yet neither has realized their true relation..but then khoon khoon ko pukarta hai na! 😳 Diya ki Sameer se achi banegi! Most daughters ke sath yai hota hai...plus yahan Diya ka nature Sam ka photocopy hai! 😉

and the last scene..Sophocles says "One word frees us of all weight and pain of life:The word is love"..And thats what summed the last scene for me..Its Sameer's love that would be balm to Naina's ailing heart and support to a mother's failing hopes.

Ab main firse tareef kr rai hun...ek literature scholar review kare to hum kitna kuch seekhte hain! 😃 Thanks love! And yes, the balm to Naina's pain is Sameer's love...n vice versa!

Kya likhun aur..Rula diya mujhe and yet I am happy because this story is no erotica and does complete justice to physicality and emotional treatments.Kudos to you 👏

Hehe...nahi yaar...it was never meant to be an erotica...the reason the physical intimacy was introduced so early on was to incorporate a love child, without confession/ realization of love! Thank you so much dear...your words of encouragement mean a lot to me! 🤗

Thanks for the PM and update soon please.

Keep coming with your best 👍🏼

With love-

You-know-who😉

Originally posted by: Archie0405

Dear Sur

Please update next part soon, this time lapse is not good for health of readers. they get irritated when they find nothing good in show which is happening a lot nowadays and not getting required dose of happiness of getting their favorite ffs updated. My other fav ff can be updated only after 24th as May is busy, so it is yout duty to keep lalchi readers of forum happy.

Do update

Originally posted by: munchkinland

Sur I am soo very upset with you

You know I went through this particular chapter so many times so that I could unres and comment

but every freaking time I finished reading it I was crying 😭

Now also I have tears in my eyes and then writing.

how can you make me cry so much.

Mujhse toh or dard bardasht nhi ho rha

seriously I feel like in dono ko ek ek thappd laga kr aamne samne bitha du ki baat kro.uthna mt baat kiye bina.

Naina has this habit of not listening to things completely and jumping to conclusion whether be Dia or her father

She blasted on both of them unnecessarily and later on realises her fault.

I know Mundit are right that Sameer should move on and all but no not happening.

He was fighting for his life😲

What?

This is getting intense

hua kya tha and I am damn sure there is someone behind all this misunderstanding

Khi voh A toh nhi

he loved Naina and in order to have her he played such tricks

my brain is working on overdrive.

I really adore this daughter father duo

she isn't aware that he is her father but she has gotten this closer to him that she shares things with him and not her mother

how sameer is in a turmoil that he can not fulfill Diya's small small wishes as well.

Will Naina's jealousy lead to the confrontation between the two?

Oh btw I am sure Diya wanted those sandwiches ordered by her father and not what her mother wanted her to have

Naina ko sachi Rakesh ki aatma ghus gyi hain kya

she slapped diya that hard

bechari bachi

Sameer ka gussa hona bilkul jayaj tha

but wait what what disease does Diya have

I am pretty scared

And I am again saying it Naina ke jo bhi reasons ho she is completely wrong in separating Diya and Sameer.

He has the right to know.