Samaina FF: Expectedly Unexpected Thread #3 (Part 35-Pg 115_No PMs) - Page 16

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Nice to meet you Sneha! I'm Surbhi! 😃 And my apologies for the unprecedented delay- all along I remembered your comment and felt bad that I kept you waiting!

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

It makes me all emosh ...

Khushi ke anshoo actually 😭

Thank you so much dear and I am glad that in someway KP could really give you the recognition and love you very well deserve and perhaps you deserve much more for the love you have both for me and the story 😳.

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Hi Sur!🤗

Finally here. You must me some magician my dear.Leaving me spell bound and enchanted with each update.This story is a magnet and magic.It surely is a bliss reading it.Trust me! In days that seem low for me I turn to your stories.And this story specifically.Sameer recovering and stabling him in life casting an indifference somehow inspires.

Hey Minu! Behen- this is one of the best comments I'd received in the one year or so I've started writing...and this coming from someone so learned and so established as you makes me feel really humbled! Thank you for the love dear...and I'm so glad that my stories have made you feel spirited in days you felt dull🤗What can be more wonderful than that for me? But I wish life doesn't give you anymore reasons to feel upset...instead I hope life is full of smiles for you! 🤗

Finally the revelation is done.And it was all logical.Sur! I think you would agree with me too that child out of wedlock is such a cliched topic.But do you know my master magician;what makes your story different and a piece of sheer artistic,aesthetic brilliance? The treatment.Logical and Chronological.There is no mad rush and gradual storytelling.

Naina and Sameer have been through numerous unprotected physical encounters and this logically backs the conception of Diya.Not those stories where just the leads share a single night and viola!the baby is conceived.I have read many stories on this topic but I am proudly declaring that none treated this sort of logical conception of child out out of wedlock.Kudos to you 👏

O bai! 😳😳 Thanks dear...I know it is a very cliched topic, and that was partly a reason, where I was contemplating on whether to modify my storyline and remove Diya completely...but am happy I stuck to it and that my readers liked it.

I can totally imagine- spending a night of passion (mostly the firsts of the leads) ends in a baby 90 percent of the time, which seems quite illogical to me...yes not impossible, but then not so common I would say.

I know people are impatient for the suspense to be revealed, but I want the emotions to flow normally. If Sameer and Naina have developed a lot of distrust in each other, I want them to interact often and realize how mistaken they were and the person they knew before was genuine all along.

When each scene is so thoughtfully envisioned and crafted,its difficult to chose the best pick.With this another thought flashes by.You have treated Mr.A in one of best lights.Not the oppressive husbands types.And I bow down to your vision of story writing.Without any single character turning into a villain or antagonist ,the story enchants with emotions being the pivot joint.Needless to say,why this story has captured several hearts and has reached a glorious third thread.My lady! A big congratulations to you.This is an achievement in itself.🥳

Thanks so much dear...I'd thought this story would be done and dusted in about 8 updates and look where all the love and encouragement you guys have showered me with has led to! All because of you guys! 😳

BOLD: Wow Minu- I never really thought about that myself...what a keen observation and

I will take care of this aspect in future as well!

I'm really happy I've managed to portray my characters and their feelings in a way that people are able to connect to them...I would try my best to do better and better! 😳

And the way you are weaving the classics and contemporary novels in your writing.Thats no mean feat.It's difficult to draw parallels and taking care that your actual storyline is not distorted and that the original work of the other author is hampered as well.Balancing the two and yet retaining the essence of each s distinctively...I am not wrong in terming you the 'Lady Magician'..Oh well..It sounds somewhat like Lady Macbeth😆

Thanks again dear! I was actually apprehensive about including the reference of Paradise when I did...but somehow the story seems to fit so seamlessly into my own storyline- it was sheer luck. The first time I sat down to read the novel on Pooja's recommendation, I had a draft ready and had posted a few updates...but only I knew what was to come next...and I felt a kind of uncanny semblance (not in the writing style of course- Judith is a pro and I'm nowhere near her😊) that I connected even more to her story.

Lady Macbeth haha- typical literature student! 😉

Jokes Apart...The last update was such a riot.I mean Diya has totally inherited the 'mar-pit' genes from her father..And silky hair even..Sameer's dream and reality are no different rather blend of expectedly unexpected.Defining the title once more.

I love how both the father and daughter bonded so well and Naina being typical mother,ranting and self berating.I feel for the poor girl.So much she has endured and mothering a child is no easy feat.We are yet to be revealed how Arvind came into the frame and what transpired ..But yeah! there seems no smooth cakewalk of Naina Agarwal transforming into Reena Mittal..This is intriguing and I know you must have planned it really well.

I hope I can meet the expectations now dear...honestly! I don't want the ending and the revelations to be a dampner...😕

Haha- Diya pehle lagi Naina jaisi...but nikli full on Sameer type! 😆

Yes, Naina has indeed gone through a lot...and she still is insecure. She is afraid of tell Sameer the truth about Diya for she feels she might lose her daughter now.

Special mention to Naina's gaali to Diya..I loved that "Aye din maar-pit" 😆 Waiting for an oppurtunity to use it for some.Sur! You are so good with dialogues and symbolism.The references from Paradise..My words fail to conjure how brilliantly you have penned it down all.👏

Haha thanks dear! 😆 Big hugs to you!! 🤗

No coming to the theory as spun by Sweety...Perhaps Diya's failing health or some ailment will match with Sameer..Juvenile diabetes? May be..and then Sameer would know he has fathered this child.May be then he can realise that Diya and him share 'genes ka rishta' along with 'dil ka rishta'..And since she is a daughter ,the probability of her carrying genes from her father is much more.Will wait to see if this theory stands correct or was it a khyali pulao.

Pehle to Sweety ko bhi dil se thank you- I know her views have also been incorporated by you in this review! 😳

And dusra, I'm literally stunned at her thoughtfulness and imagination. Infact, I may need to connect with her on that topic. I would choose to stay mum here, for I haven't quite decided the approach. But this theory gives me food for thought! 👏👏👏

And trust me I absolutely loved the father daughter interaction and how Sameer couldnot tolerate Diya's wish not getting fulfilled.There is nothing that moves a loving father's soul quite like his child's cry.And Sameer proved this,though he is unaware of Diya's parentage.

Yeh to sach baat hai- baap beti ka rishta ki kuch alag hota hai...kehte hain na khoon khoon hota hai! 😳

With Mr.A going away for 2 weeks,I smell some unexpected twists waiting our way to spring off.Can't wait to read the next update.

😃 Dekhte hain!

I am sorry dear for not being able to comment on time and regularly.And I know I have not reviewed the updates pretty well too.😳 Sorry.

Arey fikar not dear...you enjoy what I have written is what matters! 😳🤗

Thank you for the PM and keep coming with your best.

With love-

Minu

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Guess, I am on a roll; reviewing! 😆 Well, I read this one now and didn't want to keep it pending. I have this superpower of procrastinating and blocking out the guilt for doing so! 😆

Haha! Thanks a lot dear Shreya! And guess what- I'm big procrastinator myself! 😆

This was a superb chapter, Sur Di! I lived it so much because it was filled with only Naina, Sameer and their child, Diya. I am so happy to know that Diya is their child and now, the hopeless romantic in me can hope for happy-ending, however long it take and how much hurdles they have to overcome! Love you so much! You are the best! ❤️

Awww! I'm glad I made you happy! 🤗 So now hope prevails! 😃

Diya inherited the silky locks and the high cheekbones from Sameer; I am thinking, it must have been a little hard for Naina know when she would be tying her daughter's hair daily to be reminded of the feeling of combing Sameer's hair with her fingers! I am just imagining.

Wow! I didn't think of that myself! But you are right- Naina must have been reminded of Sameer each and every time she combed Diya's hair or seeing the antics she pulls off!

I loved that joke surrounding Rakesh and his aatma possessing Naina!!! 🤪

Haha! Thanks dear! 😆

I also loved very single interactions between the father and the daughter. Both oblivious to what they are to each other. It's good to see them liking each other and playing with each other.

Also, loved how Sameer called out Naina for her anger and also how efficiently he took care of Diya! I wonder what would Sameer's reaction be when he would know Diya is his child? He would definition be angry, I know.

I'm glad that you enjoyed it dear! Yes- some unsaid force pulls Sameer close to Diya and makes him shower his affecgtions on her. Come to think of it, he might actually have hated the child, for she was borne to Naina by a different man, as he feels. But he is feeling the exact opposite in this case. Haha- kabhi kabhi aisa hota hai ki Sameer dusron ko gusse ke baare mein lecture de! 😆

Sameer ka reaction- yes we'll get that too in a while!

And then there was Arvind- his trust would be shattered!

I have questions! Is Mr. A aware of the fact that he isn't Diya's biological father?

I also didn't miss Naina's happiness when Sameer went back to Tum and also, when he remembered the memory from their school...it's affecting her all over again and then I wonder, when did it ever stop?

Yeah! A lot many questions around Arvind, which I plan to unfold bit by bit. And yeah- Naina and Sameer have forever been in love, but they've kept on denying it.

Okay, so Arvind wouldn't be there for fourteen days?! Oh. My. God.

Will this time be enough for SamAina to clear all the misunderstandings? I am as curious as a cat!

😃 Let's wait & watch!
Splendid!

Thank you dear! 😳❤️

P.S. I was and still am the girl who could never blow big bubbles! Meri phooti qismat! 😭

Haha! As I told you- count me in that category as well! 😆

Originally posted by: sadhikasamaina

Oh god

I am crying after reading it

aise kaun krta hain apne readers ke saath

ab aap itna acha likhoge and ruloage toh kaam kaise chlega

Naina not revealing about diya to sameer is soo painful

kb pta chlega sameer ko

but this was so beautiful

the real family of three spending some awesome time together

mamma scolding both dad and daughter

and daughter looking at dadda for help

and dadda supporting his baby instead of mamma

but also politely making her see the light

only if it could have been the reality and not sameer uncle

mrs mittal and diya

Originally posted by: AnjaanMishra

Finally , pta chl gya diya Sameer aur naina ki Beti hai ,

Jab Sameer Ko pta chalega bahot gussa krega , Naina se jyada khud pe😭

Awesome update dear 👏

Originally posted by: Rohitsad

Wow amazing update.

I loved the part Sameer after touching her hairs become suspicious may she is his daughter.and I am sure after going home he will think abt diya's mischivious behaviour and compare it to himself and get some hint.