Samaina SS : Jeevansathi Hum( note on pg 41)

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Dhudhu

@Dhudhu

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Posted: 6 years ago

#251

Emotional update dear liked it so much hope next update will be soon

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AnjaanMishra

@AnjaanMishra

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Posted: 6 years ago

#252

Aakhir intezaar khtm hua ,

Itni interesting story hai , ye update superb

Wo flashback scene 😭

Tai ji 😡 , show se toh chli gyi ,

Sameer toh ekdum aashiqui 2 movie ka Rahul bna hua hai 😆

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PALAK17

@PALAK17

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Posted: 6 years ago

#253

Superb update 👍🏼

Eagerly waiting for the next update.l

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May

@SixteenAgain

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+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#254

Hi Suman,

So good to see that you are feeling much better now.

Such a lovely and emotional update yaar! That FB was so beautifully written... it revealed a lot around Rohan's passing, but at the same time you ensured that not all was revealed in one go! Such a fantastic way to keep the readers hooked.

Now we will wait to find out how did she and Sameer end up getting married and also how the relationship moves forward.

All the dialogues were just too good as always, especially Taiji wale... very well written!

I liked the description of Naina's emotions and thoughts from the FB. Especially that line about a glass vase turnong from treasure to trash as soon as it is broken a bit. That is such a beautiful analogy. Too good! 👏

And I also agreed with Sameer to a certain extent... one step at a time... she can start by focusing on her duties starting with Rohan's ailing father. But, at the same time my heart goes out to poor Ahaana, who must be so scared not knowing where her father is..

Sameer in a caring mode was a treat to read.

Looking forward to the next update 😊

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

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+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: Suparna13
You are back with bang! The flashbacks, its really hurts 😭 Ye taiji aur tauji!kuch bhi bolte hai😡 Sameer's care towards naina😃ladki dheere dheere sameer ko samajh rahi hai!!! I hope your health us better now. Take care of yourself!! Agle Jeevansaathi ke update ke rah dekhungi!!!
With love,Suparna

Thank you Suparna 😳

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

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+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#256

The flashback really broke my heart! How can someone be so cruel to speak nonsense even in such critical situations.

Vishakha, thankfully, shut Taiji's mouth.

Naina and Sameer both hv started softening towards each other.

I'm very eager to read next part.

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RangnRia

@RangnRia

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Posted: 6 years ago

#257

Hi @Suhaaniladki.My apologies I do not know your name...Can you please tell me how to refer to you...

Thanks for the PM.I came across this story through your PM and read all parts in one go.

Well first of all a BIG APPLAUSE for your audacity and courage for this humongous HERAPHERI of CHARACTERS.Take a bow lady!!!

You made Naina fall in love with Rohan,they getting married with Mr Somani's aashirwad, Sharabi Sameer, Sameer in devdas mode cause of Sunaina, Rohan having a daughter, then Shefali is Ahana's Nanny, Ramdhari at Somani's place, Rohan dead on the night of his wedding, Somani in hospital and Sam taking care of him rather a SANE conversation between the always-at-loggerheads step-Dad and step son and finally Naina wanting Ahana at Somani's house...Oh God how did you manage to rumage through your brains for this plot...Anyways a big Salute to this gripping plot cause every update makes the reader wait for the next...

I was slightly confused in the third update ki how did she end up marrying Sam when in the previous update she was looking out of the window on her wedding night waiting for Rohan...And what happened to Rohan ?Was he dead or missing?

But then your comments clarified my doubt and I could understand the 4th update...

The build up in the first two updates was great...Taiji's acrid and stinging comments against Chachi's soothing words...

You choice of songs in the 3rd update was just so awesome.Bechara driver was just trying to keep his bhabhi happy...

What i really loved is you have kept an iron grip on the plot by "Concealing some and Revealing a little" in each and every update...The plot is unfolding in flashbacks and present time which is a tempting treat for the readers...

Again what held my notice is you always explain Naina's state of mind through the view out of her window-through the dark clouds,the partially eclipsed moon and stars or the sunshine...

Sam-Naina verbal tashanbaazi was awesome in the 4th installment,but what had my heard was Sameer's advice🤣...

Why is Naina hell-bent on getting Ahana into Somani household immediately?Should she not wait,understand the family dynamics and then make a move to make the Somani family accept Ahana...there has to be some strong reason that the baby was kept away from the family by Rohan...I completely agree with Sameer that Naina should start from the first step of taking care of the family and more importantly the paralysed Mr Somani...

Naina's breakdown scene was heart -wrenching and very well described.If felt as if I was watching the scene happen right in front of me...Sadly such cruel people do exist...

Caring Sam was a treat...both when he calmed down and assured a paralysed Mr Somani and when he took care of Naina...

Waiting for more dhamaka which i am pretty sure you have more of them up your sleeve...

Love,

Ria

Edited by RangnRia - 6 years ago

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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#258

Hi Meenakshi Di,

The flashback provided a little more understanding of the events leading to and after Rohan's death. But, still you managed not to reveal much like what was the reason finally that made Sameer and Naina marry each other.

As much as it provided information, it was painful to read the atrocities towards Naina by Taiji. She is such a cruel-hearted person, I mean, for god's sake, she is going through a trauma and Taiji just wanted to satisfy herself and humiliate Naina.

All the dialogues were beyond superb. Your major strength is effective dialogue writing which is applause worthy. And, also it was beautiful to read about your description of the night sky and the absence of moon and how Naina related it with her own life.

Enjoyed reading a warm and caring Sameer! Update soon! 😊

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Surabhi1995

@Surabhi1995

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#259

It was a really good update ...plz update the next part soon

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Saji79

@Saji79

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#260

Hi Suman

A all together different story . You have changed all the characters from the original plot. Each chapter reveals something new yet with so much hidden. The way you are going keeps all of us hooked with so many questions yet to be answered.

What do I say of Naina and Sameer.

Kabhi kisko mukammal jahan nahi milta

Kahin Zameen Kahin Aasman nahi milta

Tamam shaher mein aisa nahin ke khulus(sincerity ) na ho

Jahan umeed ho iski wahan nahi milta.

The dialogues are too good. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Luv

Sajida