Samaina SS : Jeevansathi Hum( note on pg 41) - Page 13

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Yudkbh

It was great, love the twist and turns in the story, har bar kuch naya late ho aap 😆

And I m the one who msg you on Wattpad with user name kumar954

Thank you so much for the appreciation and haan main aapko pehchan gyi 😃

Keep reading and supporting 😛
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Dharapriya

Superb update. But very eagerly to know how they got married. Who is in hospital??? Too many questions please clear dear. Will be eagerly waiting for next update.

Thank you so much dear 😊 will try to update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidhimehra

Truly speaking...ab story mazeddar hogi...samaina married lets see how tbey will know each other...would like to knw the reason behimd who is in hospital amd how this happened that rohan is out and sammer is in.

Waitung fornxt update.

I am so glad you are enjoying the story 😃 hopefully some questions will be answered in next update 😉

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Yaar kya gaane bajaye hai tumne car mein! Barish ka bahana hai, Zara der lagegi. Sun ke toh mera seeti bajane ko maan hua!

Driver chacha ko toh worst timing Aur comic sense ka award dena chahiye! Bhabhi ko bida toh karke laye hai, par aane wali toh woh kisi Aur ke sath thi na! But, I know there are truly such insensitive characters in life.. Aur maybe just plain stupid

Ramdhari was so good and Vishakha seems to truly care for Naina. Between them they did what could be done for the grahpravesh.

As expected so many questions buzzing through my mind... Rohan kidhar hai? Who is in the hospital? What happened that Naina's family refused to stand by her and Vishakha accepted her?

Your description of Naina's feelings was amazing! I loved that line about what was more heavier her ornaments or ordeal.

And I liked Sameer's room. Feels real.. not like some exorbitant set! 😆

Waiting eagerly for more!




Driver ko tharkee songs play krne k liye maine khaas paise diye they 😆 I literally searched for the tharkiest songs 😆 and aapka seeti bajane ka mn hua toh meri mehnat safal😉 and yep you are right is type k mindset wale log hote hai jo apni hi dhun mein lage rehte hai not caring what others are feeling

And sabke itne saare questions dekh k acha laga.. . Main safal hui suspense create krne mein 😉 ... Will try to answer some of them in next update
And Sam k room ka secret toh maine already bta diya😆


Thank you so much for taking out time to read and review my story 😳
Lots of love
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Samaina_loverzz

Thanks for the PM... Coming back to SS...It was a Dharthi phaad update with horror Twists... Naina Is Now MRS.NAINA SAMEER MAHESHWARI WNted to know what happened ... Do update more coz this one was Lil bit shorter.. And u have stopped at the cliffhanger...Want to know who they tied their knots together.. And Loved Sameer care for her ..He understood that she is uncomfortable so he shouted to him(driver)..Do update NEXT ONE WHENEVER U ARE FREE...AND DO PM ME...




Thank you so much 😃 I am glad you are loving this story so much. .. But update toh ab tak k teeno update se bda tha😆 and cliffhanger par chodk tease krne ka bhi apna hi mazaa hai 😉

I'll try to update soon😃 keep reading and supporting
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjaanMishra

Awesome update dear 👏

Samaina ki shaadi hogyi , mujhe pta tha 😆


Itna interest hai thoda jaldi update deba please ,


Please send pm.

Thank you so much 😃 Samaina ki shadi toh krwani hi thi warna aap log bhaga dete mujhko😆


For the pm ... I m sending u the buddy request accept it 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehapandey12

Please update next part ... Ab wait nhi Hoga yrrr awsome story line

Thank you 😃

I'll try to update soon 😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
Madam...tum to bowler ko saans nahi lene deti...har ball pe sixer! 👏
Gajab hai...bade bade maharathiyon ko tujhse seekhna chahiye!
Kya tareeka tha portray karne ka...Samaina ki shaadi bhi ho gayi aur suspense bhi barqarar hai...mere guesses to tujhe pata hi hain! 😆Aur bhi chalaungi apne velle dimag ko...kab hai next update...??
Sameer sharabi hai yahan...waah...maza aayega dekhne mein...
Aur Naina bhabhi se Naina biwi ho gayi...kitna ajeeb lag raha hoga na use...but mere man me aayi behen tension mat le...yeh hero best hai tere liye aur tu uske liye!
That fighting scene in the car- wo bhi baarish me!! Dil le le! Driver ko badi masti soojh rahi hai! Dono sach mein pati-patni ki tarah hi lad rahe the...good to see Sameer itna negative nahi hai...shaadi ko accept kiya hai usne!
Ab jaldi jaldi bta de Rohan bhai kahan hai...wo kya hai na suspense aisa ho to nind nahi aati mujhe!
Keep surprising us with the twists and your unique writing style!

Loads of love
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Hi Meenakshi Di,

I am officially hooked to this story. This is awesome!

The scene in the car was funny with the Driver Chacha trying to make the 'romantic' mood for the newlyweds! Both of them fighting like a typical married couple!
Naina saying hoga apna zamana ka and his reaction made me laugh out loud. 😆 But, on a serious note, I am curious about this declaration of his past being a racing champion?!

I really liked the line where she wondered which was heavier; the ornaments or her ordeals? Very good! And, good to know that Vishaka accepted Naina wholeheartedly. The latter actually needs someone, she is so lonely and even more alone after the betrayal from the one she love. She is in the process of discovering her true home, where she rightfully belongs!
I am guessing that Vishaka is in hospital..but why? Is she sick because of the shock of Rohan not coming? Where is Rohan? Did he chicken out in the last minute or couldn't he reach the venue? That comes to me asking you how did Sameer reach the wedding place?

The pungent odour will soon be replaced by the sweet smell of companionship and care!
and, something I liked is the bond established between Ramdhari and Naina. He is so sweet!

Ab, jaldi update kar lo, please! 🤗


Hey Shreya. . Mast review deti ho ur... Whenever I read your review I feel so happy as a writer main apni baat paucha payi ..

Well yes Naina is too alone now she needs a shoulder to cry upon.. To share her ordeals.. . Let's see how her "Jeevansathi " helps her out 😳


Hospital suspense ka answer next update mein hai 😉


Thank you for such a lovely comment 😃

Lots of love to you
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Inki shaadi kaise ho gyi!! Not that I'm not liking it, but yaar mujhe laga ab flashback ayega, ab flashback ayega.. Lekin aya hi nhi! I am curious

And hospital mein kaun h? Kyu h?

Aur Naina ne Sameer ko kab kaise galat samjha?

I clearly hv too many questions 😆 jaldi se answers mil jaye



Flash back aane mein tame hai ladki😆 wait karo


Naina Sameer ka car mein jhgda hua na toh Sam ko laga usney galat samjha


Thank you for commenting dear 😃

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