Preedit OS: The Date - teaser updated

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello everybody! How is it going? I have attempted to write something on preedit ,hope it turns out to be good. Below is a teaser for it. Do tell me if I should continue or not.
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"Maa, Maine Aapko kaha tha na ki mujhe abhi shaadi-vadi mein interest NAHI hai. Abhi mujhe Apne career par focus Karna hai. "

" Arre toh main Kahan key Rahi hoon ki tu usse Shaadi kar le. Main toh Bas itna keh Rahi hoon ki uske sath date par chali ja. Pachis(25) ki ho gayi hai aur abhi tak Tera Ek boyfriend bhi NAHI bana. Pata NAHI Tera kya hoga? "

Preeti gave her mother, Bela, a you-are-impossible look. Her mother was literally asking her to make a boyfriend and was dissapointed in her for not doing so. And people still said parents are not broad-minded. They haven't met her mother probably.

"Arre itna bada film star hai, itna handsome hai aur ladkiyon ki respect bhi bahut karta hai. All in all, perfect hai. "

"Kaun hai yeh 'perfect' filmstar ?"

"Pandit kapoor!! "

"What??


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Did you like it? Kindly comment below.
Ps: this may not turn out to be as it seems. 😉 Kindly don't keep your expectations too high as I am an amateur writer. 😆
Love
Inayat
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Posted: 6 years ago
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the teaser was tempting Inayat
do continue
I have a feeling she already knows him
or is a very big fan of him
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: munchkinland

the teaser was tempting Inayat

do continue
I have a feeling she already knows him
or is a very big fan of him

Thanks for such an immediate response dear.😃 I remember you were the first one to comment on my previous os too. She does know him for sure but your last guess is true or not, you'll get to know. 😉
The os will take some time as I haven't planned it completely neither have I started typing it.😆 So please be patient.
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Inayat
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I found the teaser to be exciting
bela is asking her daughter to date
who does that
why was she so shocked hearing his name
can not wait to read
do continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadhikasamaina

I found the teaser to be exciting

bela is asking her daughter to date
who does that
why was she so shocked hearing his name
can not wait to read
do continue soon

Thank you so much sadhika (nice name😃) .. Bela does that. After all she is the unique mother of her unique daughter-preeti.😆 The shock was.. Let's keep it suspense😉. The actual os may take some time. Keep the love coming.
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Inayat
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Inayat dear!
I am so glad to see another work in progress here. Your writing is exquisite and emotionally provoking. I think you should think of making this an SS because laalchi dil hai ki maanta nahi😳

But I really like this different take on Preedit relationship. Continue soon my darling!

Bundles of love,
Sims <3
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: IamIbe

Inayat dear!

I am so glad to see another work in progress here. Your writing is exquisite and emotionally provoking. I think you should think of making this an SS because laalchi dil hai ki maanta nahi 😳

But I really like this different take on Preedit relationship. Continue soon my darling!

Bundles of love,
Sims <3

Haha Sims! Laalchi dil.. 😆 Thank you so much for the appreciation dearie. 😳 It has boosted my confidence. My final exams are going on and therefore could think and type the teaser only. 😭The actual part may take some time,probably by end of december. About the SS request,will surely think about it. 😃Any suggestions are welcome. 🤗Keep the love coming .
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Inayat

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