The Love Fighters - OS (Updated on Page 2)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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So guys, based on the current track, I was thinking of writing an OS. Here's the teaser, let me know if I shall go ahead with it.

Sameer returned home totally unaware of what was awaiting him. On stepping inside the house and looking a the dinner table, he realised what he had forgotten.
Sameer(to himself) - "Aaj toh meri khair nhi! Bhagwan please bacha lena, aaj toh yeh billi jarur kaategi!".
He took silent steps towards the room and searched for her. She was sitting with a book in hand, he was not sure if she was reading though because she seemed like she couldn't concentrate. Thinking she din't notice his arrival, he cleared his throat as if preparing for an exam and initiated the conversation, "Naina, mai aa gaya!"
Naina - "Ha toh? Aarti utari? Koi jung jeet ke aaye ho?"
Sameer murmurs to himself, "Beta Sameer aaj toh tujhe bed bhi kurbaan karna padega"
Sameer (trying to fight for the comfort of sleeping on the bed)- "Chalo na khana khaate hai, maine kuch order kiya hai!"
Naina - "Kyun pet nhi bhara tumhara? Bharega bhi kaise bhukkad jo ho!" with a sarcastic smile!
Sameer slowly walking towards here, "Naina please gussa mat hona, bahot kaam tha bhul gaya! Tumhe pata hai na aaj kal kitna stress hota hai!"
Naina - "Ha yeh baat toh sahi kahi hai tumne! Ghar par biwi intezaar karti hai, pyaar karti hai aur bahar tum kisi aur ke saath dinner karte ho, yeh sab toh hota hai stress ke wajah se!" and she bangs the book in her hand!😔


Now what do you think, billi kategi? Bed par sone milega? Waise bhi in this history of humans,aise kaha jata hai ki ladke ko hi sorry bolna padta haišŸ˜†
Edited by Ishveershadhika - 6 years ago

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chaaru26 thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
#2
Really cute!!
Do continue. lets see how Mr. Maheswari cajoles his Mrs.Maheswari...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#3
Hayee their nok-jok😳
Would like to read further.šŸ˜Šā¤ļø
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Posted: 6 years ago
#4
do continue
and that to soon
sameee mna lega apni billi ko
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I liked the concept
Sameer sleeping on the floor too funny
acha hain naina ne book ko table par patka
gussa dekhkr lag rha tha sir par hi na de mare uske
kia kya hain ladke ne
waiting to read more
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Posted: 6 years ago
#6
awesome plot. do continue definitely
PratzN thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: munchkinland

I liked the concept

Sameer sleeping on the floor too funny
acha hain naina ne book ko table par patka
gussa dekhkr lag rha tha sir par hi na de mare uske
kia kya hain ladke ne
waiting to read more



Domestic violence 🤣
You'll know soon!! Thank you 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#8
I love Samaina's nok jhok
& this teaser is so amazing
plz update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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That was fantabulous.šŸ‘ Waiting for the final. picture!!
Regards
Inayat
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Posted: 6 years ago
#10
Hayee so cute please continue and do post ASAP.
Waiting please

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