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Posted: 6 years ago
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So guys, contuining the fight saga from the show on this weekend without YUDKBH, here's some more fighting of the duo๐Ÿ˜†

Naina is all ready for a dinner date with her husband and waiting at their home. It's past 30 mins the time that was agreed upon, yet no sign of him. She repeatedly called him only to get no response. After about another 10 mins, she dialled his assistant's number... She was told that he went for a business dinner with a client and to add fire to her anger, it was a lady client.(God save Mr Maheshwari today!๐Ÿ˜†)

Sameer returned home totally unaware of what was awaiting him. On stepping inside the house and looking at the dinner table, he realised what he had forgotten.
Sameer(to himself) - "Aaj toh meri khair nhi! Bhagwan please bacha lena, aaj toh yeh billi jarur kaategi!".
He took silent steps towards the room and searched for her. She was sitting with a book in hand, he was not sure if she was reading though because she seemed like she couldn't concentrate. Thinking that she din't notice his arrival, he cleared his throat as if preparing for an exam and initiated the conversation, "Naina, mai aa gaya!"
Naina - "Ha toh? Aarti utari? Koi jung jeet ke aaye ho?" (fuming in anger)๐Ÿ˜ก
Sameer murmurs - "Beta Sameer aaj toh tujhe bed kurbaan karna padega"
Sameer(gathering guts to face it and tring to calm her at the same time) - "Chalo na khana khaate hai, maine kuch order kiya hai!"
Naina - "Kyun pet nhi bhara tumhara? Bharega bhi kaise bhukkad jo ho!" (gritting her teeth)
Sameer slowly walking towards her, (stuttering)"Naina please gussa mat hona, bahot kaam tha toh bhul gaya! Tumhe pata hai na aaj kal kitna stress hota hai!"
Naina - "Ha yeh toh hai! Ghar par biwi intezaar karti hai, pyaar karti hai aur bahar tum kisi aur ke saath dinner karte ho, yeh sab toh hota hai stress ke wajah se!" and she bangs the book in her hand!
Sameer(to himself and then looking upwards as if talking to god)- "Yaar isko kaise pata chala, bhagwanji aap toh situation ko aur bhi complicate kar rahe ho ab mai kaise manaunga ise"
Naina - "Apne karnamon ke liye bhagwanji ko kyun kos rahe ho! Unhone toh nhi kaha tha kisi aur ladki ke saath date par jaane ke liye!"
Sameer - "Naina tum na raii ka pahad bana rahi ho. Dekho mai business meet ke liye gaya tha, ab isme ye sab hota rehta hai! Mai koi uske saath date par nhi gaya tha, contract discuss karne gaya tha"
Naina - "Ohhh... Toh kal lunch date ko chale jana"
Sameer - "Yaar tumhari problem kya hai, insaan thak kar ghar aaya hai, ye nhi ki pyaar se do baatein kare, bass jhagadne lag gayi! Mana mai tumhe batana bhul gaya, maine sorry bhi toh kaha na! Ab kya jaan le logi?"๐Ÿคข
Naina - "Achchaaa... toh ab meri baatein itni irritate karti hai tumhe? Thik hai mai na vapas ghar chale jaati hu, shanti se ghar aana khana khana oh nhi woh toh tum bahar hi kar logi aur phir so jaana, AKELE!!" And she stood up with full thrust..
Sameer - "Ha toh thik hai chali jao kuch din ke liye shanti toh rahegi!"
And the temperature raised to several advanced degrees...
Naina - "Mai na abhi ja rahi hu!"
She pulls out a bag and starts packing her clothes from the cupboard..
Thats when Sameer starts imagining himself without her,
*****Imagination******
He wakes up to realise he's totally late, after taking a bath he is totally irritated because he can't find a single thing, he has a rough day at office and nobody even cared to ask him if he had his lunch, coming back home to his cluttered room, the towel is lying on the bed, cupboard is left open, it's all messy around! And after all of that, he has to roll into the bed and sleep alone, without her warmth, without talking to her for a whole day!๐Ÿ’”
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Coming back to reality, he gulps and goes towards the bag and starts pulling out the clothes she packed, putting it back into the cupboard...๐Ÿ˜†
Naina - "Sameer kya kar rahe ho!", totally irritated
Sameer - "Tum khi nhi jane wali. Mai tumhe khi jaane nhi dene wala"
While she keeps running between the bed and cupboard trying to pack and he keeps running behind doing exactly the opposite!
Naina - "Oh hello! Mai na apni marzi se jeeti hu tumhari nhi jo tumne keh diya nhi jaogi aur mai ruk gayi"
Sameer irritated by the arguments and running between the bag and cupboard stomped his leg on the floor ad said - "Naina" which made her halt.
Sameer - "Tum na bilkul apne papa ki beti ho, pura time jhagda jhagda.. Maine kaha na mai tumhe jaane nhi dunga, baat khatam" and suddenly falls on her legs while she looks at him confused, he ties a hankerchief around her legs. He looks up to her and says, "Ab ja ke dikhao!" and laughs๐Ÿ˜›
She tries to move and is about to fall when he holds her hand to support her and save her from the fall..
Sameer(looking into her eyes and holding his ear in his style) - "Am sorry"
Naina slightly pushes him and bends down to untie her legs when Sameer lifts her up and puts her on the bed saying, "Haath bhi baandh dunga magar jaane nhi dunga"๐Ÿ‘
Naina(sulking) - "Tum na!!!" and hits his face with a pillow and they keep hitting pillows at each other(obviously Naina unties herself)
Finally Sameer catches her and says, "Ab maan bhi jao na please... mai 100 baar sorry bol dunga par dur mat jao"๐Ÿ˜ณ
Naina smiles a bit... Sameer - "aur phir mera saara kaam kon karega" and winks๐Ÿ˜‰ and runs from there...
Naina runs behind him, "Sameer ke bachche!"
Sameer - "Tum kaho ko aaj raat hi bacche kar lenge... Ab aa jao tumhare baat se awaaze aa rahi hai khana khaate hai!"
And thats the end...

One last shot because I loved it...
While sleeping Naina was lying on the bed and Sameer looks at the couch and says, "Aaj toh bach gaya bhai, teri jarurat nhi mujhe!"
Naina - "Ab sona bhi hai ki nhi? Jaldi se light band kar ke aa jao warna uski hi jarurat padegi tumhein sone ke liye!"๐Ÿคฃ
He quickly runs to switch off the lights and gets into the bed to have a warm peaceful sleep with his loving wife!๐Ÿค—


Happy reading everyone๐Ÿ˜Š All kinds of responses are welcome.
Vidhimehra thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
Typical husband wife fight. Main ja rahi hu nd dialogue by husband thaka hara insan ghar aaye. .lovely os thx for making up weekend.โค๏ธ
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13
Uff I was Imagining Samaina fighting.
Very well written. Continue.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14
Loved it. The last bit was too funny. I can imagine those two in that scene. Please continue writing
Edited by Laksh2000 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Vidhimehra

Typical husband wife fight. Main ja rahi hu nd dialogue by husband thaka hara insan ghar aaye. .lovely os thx for making up weekend.โค๏ธ


Glad to know ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 6 years ago
#16
Super. Husband and wife fight was so cute.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: toshibelekar

Uff I was Imagining Samaina fighting.

Very well written. Continue.๐Ÿ˜Š



Thank you toshi ๐Ÿ˜Š
PratzN thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Laksh2000

Loved it. The last bit was too funny. I can imagine those two in that scene. Please continue writing


I literally laughed so much at that part myself ๐Ÿ˜†
Thank you Lakshmi ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 6 years ago
#19
So cute Samaina's fight
Nok jhok..
Plz write more fight ff
PratzN thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Yudkbh30

So cute Samaina's fight

Nok jhok..
Plz write more fight ff


๐Ÿ˜† Will surely do if I have some ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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