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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Rph09

I'm totally blank to say something!!! Has has ke mera muh dard kar raha hai 🤣 Still I'm grinning! Oh god kya tha yeh! Ekdam dhamakedaar update!

I guess aap gang ke ideas ki baat karte Rahe ho😉
Uff every kiss was wow 😳 Sameer how long will u be able to control urself? Only 5 days aur tumhara yeh haal hai! Naina k alawa kahi dil na lagta.
Sam baba ka control underestimate mat karo, snap ho jayega😆
So Pandu n is sensing the romance. When will he confront Sam 😉 Ponga ko samajh aa gaya aur bakiyon ko bhanak bhi nahi lagi!!
Lekin Ponga Ko nahi pata ki Naina hai, ladki hai yahi pata hai😉
Naina is so happy just to have sameer's liking towards her. But she isn't keeping hope to get sameer's love 😭 I understand. Sameer ko khud nahi pata he loves her. So how can naina will understand Sam is totally lattu on her.
Stay tuned for that, can't reveal
Best part was sunaina nahi thi samaina ko disturb karne ke liye!! Ponga ke baad she'll sense their chemistry maybe.
I have decided ki spoilers nahi dungi, pls Sam ki tarah mujhe poke mat karo
Munna finally got his swati. I could imagine munna's expressions. They were really cute.
Yeah, someone requested Swamun, toh readers ki wish toh puri karni hi thi
And the date! Should I say anything else about the date? It was hot ☺️
Aapke bhi cheeks red hai kya, cause I got 5 PM's after that, with the same problem😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
Hey Anshika!❤️
So finally I got around to the story! Started it the day before and couldn't stop reading and now am addicted to it!
I love the pace of the story. The innocence of their childhood while the changes adolescence brings in people is portrayed so realistically! Our show Samaina can't seem to think beyond handholds...so I kind of liked how Sameer grabbed Naina's hand during the ragging session.
Again, I especially liked how you gave the ragging episode (which I couldn't digest easily), such a nice twist, not to mention the appearance of Prem!
The animosity between Prem and Sameer is worth watching! Who doesn't like jealous Sameer? And when the boy is just realizing he is into Naina- a lot! The way he can't take his eyes off her! And thank you- for a change, Naina is exceptionally beautiful...or else Taiji would have berated her even more!
And then Shoe- haha...madam kitne bhi chote kapde pehen le...kuch na hona hai! Matlab sach mein...uske kapde to mujhe bhi aaj ke era ke hisab se bhi chote lage! Despo kahin ki! Huh!
I really loved the progression of their acquaintance- from a lonely Sameer and a lonely Arjun becoming buddies (though I didn't like Arjun initially)...then Sameer's concern for Naina as a kid...then his concern for her in school...Sameer turning into a playboy with what started to piss off Mayank...even though the conditions were clear beforehand, it was still bad and glad to see Sameer realizes it now.
What had my heart was the convo between Nanu and Sameer- this shows how just a small show of trust to a child can make him want to prove worthy of the trust and love bestowed upon him...and then mend his ways...Sameer always craved love (glad to see you touched upon his father's death too) and Vishakha's plight and then indifference...his Nanu's support...his love turning to hurt, hurt turning to resentment and finally anger...if only one could understand the psychology of the child!
One more thing I liked was Sameer bringing Naina to his secret place- something which he'd not shared with Nanu or Mundit or Arjun...not even realizing he is already in love, shows how much he'd started trusting her already!
The fresher's party jealousy, the corridor convo and the gunda-hero fight was woohoo- full dhamakedaar!
And the kiss in the changing room! My God! Sameer shirtless??? I was so reminded of an OS on similar lines by Aaisha- Sameer in a sleeveless basketball Tee taken off...I loved the kiss(es)...they could not have enough of each other...❤️ Loved it...loved it...loved it! And happy to see you showed Naina as a shy, yet adult girl...she may not know everything...but she knows how to respond to her heart!
And finally the music room confrontation reminded me of the hug in the show...only this was so much better! Sameer Maheshwari and Naina Agarwal are officially bf-gf! ☺️ Ab jane kya hoga! Waah!
I also enjoyed Sameer's fantasies and daydreams- the nightie and towels...the kisses in tea-stall, the Mangola bottle being sucked by those juicy lips...etc. etc..☺️
SMFG! 🤣 The line which made me laugh was this! They have a fan club for Sameer! Haha...hero hai ladka!
Puri duniya ko inka isharon isharon me pyaar...same dishes khana dikh raha hai...even Shoe ko...Prem ko...aur puri gang bekhabar hai...lekin kabtak?
How would Arjun react when he finds out- he won't take it well I think...but Sameer sab sambhal lega I know!
I know this review consists mostly of my blabbering- can't help it...I loved the story so much!

I'm eager for the next now!!

Love and keep writing such wonderful stuff!

Sur
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hey!
Just read the prologue and it has left me intrigued; so I couldn't stop myself from commenting!

A fresh new concept and an interesting start...can't wait to read all the other chapters! 😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
Dear Anshika,
Beautiful update. It was as soothing and exciting as first rain.

I liked their laughs, giggles, looking at each other from the corner of the eyes.

Their first date, secret hand hold, their innumerable kissess.
I just everything of this update.

But it has left me craving for more

Hai phirse intezaar

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Posted: 6 years ago
Chapter 1
So I'm back because as I said, I couldn't stop myself from reading nor commenting 😆

Loved how you introduced Sameer not as an 11th Grader but as a 3 year old boy. Vishakha's compulsion and Sameer's grief has been portrayed so well, Anshika! Not only did you express Vishakha's forced ignorance towards Sameer, but justified her character; which I admire the most about your writing.

Your creativity is worth praises! Never had I though SaMunDit to become ArSaMunDit; a trio to increase to a group of four. And Arjun and Sameer; two people who share similar yet contrasting grieves. Can't wait to read more! 😃

Chapter 2, here I come! 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: munchkinland

This update was super se bhi upar Anshika
Mujhe bhi hawa lag gyi hain
ab aise hi panka dena
ok na 😉
I definitely got the pun😆
Acha ok now coming back to the chapter
By god ki kasam Sameer calculating 24 hours how he thinks of naina
mera dil le lo yar😳
Sam is quiet wierd u know
And he even described how she moans and looking after every session of theirs
my cheeks are very red and they keep turning a darker shade of red everytime I see them romancing
I know yaar, pm mein yeh problem describe ho gayi hai😆
Pandit is getting some inclination that sameer might be hiding something as well as nanu referring to nani and telling him of similar situations
kb tak bachenge sameer baba😆
Bachne ka to sawaal hi nahi uthta
He knows that he has to be careful with naina and not just get swiped away with his emotions
because this truly his one serious relationship for him unlike past where he was just looking for time pass
he knows that Naina is innocent and has to preserve her innocence👏
Yeah, Sam does becomes baba sometimes.
He really does love naina but he hasn't realised it yet
because that is one reason he confided into her about his mother
And wow I really loved the moment when his entire focus shifted to naina as she entered
but madam is like he isn't concentrating
madam mr maheshwari toh apne ignore wale phase pe bhi concentrate kr rhe the
Sam is a pathetic ignored, so lets just ignore that fact
ab toh aap bkayada unki girlfriend hain
aap se dhyan thodi hata skte hain voh
Naina started stuttering as soon his hand landed on her lap
haye hamri najuk kali😳
Najuk Kali ha😉
Naina feels that he might not love her
but he already does
dekhte hain pta kb chlta hain
are that dialogue amar akbar Anthony vala it was superb
maza hi aagya😆
😆
ab Anthony ke liye gang ke ideas
hey bhagwan seriously
bhai in logo ki akal ghas charni gyi hain kya😛
The gang is good at heart, but stupid at ideas
aise masallah ideas kaun deta hain
sameer was really frustrated but His joru to his rescue
she put forth some sense
and finally when sameer agreed to her bakiyo ne bhi socha chlo yehi krte hain
vrna inke ideas se toh kbhi election hi nhi jeet paate
Shayad logon se aur tea hers se pit bhi jaate😆

Everyone is making posters
and making these silly mistakes
but the girls helped them
and munna was irritated with swati
yeh sare dost ekse hain
apni wali ko dusre ladke se baat krte huye bardast nhi kr skte
Sam ki sangati ka asar hai😉
So she told him she likes him
Munna ke mann main laddu phuta
haha😃
Chlo now back to our hide and seek couple
Sameer wants her and she denied
lekin kb tk
bhai aise corners main yeh sb kroge
kisi ne pakd lia toh
Yaar, aisi baatein mat karo
lekin koi nhi aapko sb allowed hain😉
aur voh factory romance
The song was apt for the situation
but is it some kind of hint
ki lakh chupaye but sabko pta chal jayega
did you purposely choose this song
mujhe laga he will lose control
but nhi
itna control laate kha se ho bhayi
Yaar, don't underestimate his control, snap ho jayega
I know I know he will keep naina protected hence he controls
haaye this guy is pure unadulterated love
and mujhe toh bas ek sameer lakar do
Mile toh mujhe bhi kaam dena😆

P.S since that is our ritual now I wanted to say that I really loved that how you detailed things here
which every writer in unable to
Thanks 😛
P.p.s. hope everything goes smooth for them or else I trust you that you won't unnecessarily drag things
Yeah, don't worry. No EK twists
P.P.P.s. Thank you for such a long update and please continue soon this time
I have been really stalking the story
I know dear

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: sadhikasamaina

loved it

such a sweet plus a sensuous one.
Glad u liked it dear😛
They have been dating for five days nows and the desire for each other is only increasing
Vaise abhi tk toh acha chl rha hain sab chupna chupana lekin yeh itna aasan nhi hone wala
they have to be careful enough
Will convey ur message to them😆
Oh when naina was like he isn't concentrating on her and his hand landed on her lap
I got all 😳
He loves teasing her
but she also enjoys that
If we had a Sam, we would enjoy too
and mr maheshwari won't hear anyone saying no to her
he will stand for her
Sam ke couple goals bhi awesome hai😉
and as always she has the best idea
baki log sach main pagal hai kya😆😆
ok the boys are ridiculous at making posters but the girls helped them
and and now we have another couple our very own swamun
Munna is singing, " Aaj main upar, aasmaan neeche"😆
what will they do of their relationship
lets see
mr maheshwari want her for himself all the time
Lekin Naina toh uski hai hai
aur voh factory wala dance aur romance bs jaan leva tha
vaise aksar dekha gya hain jb log aise jgh se bahar niklete koi na koi unhe jarur dekh leta hain
kya yha pr bhi aisa hi hua hain
waiting to know
Will update soon
continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Ramy_ani

Wowsome update dear continue soon


Thanks😛
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Posted: 6 years ago

Thanks😛
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Yudkbh30

Wow so Romantic update

Plz update soon


Thanks😛

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