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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update...update more...loved munna swati confession...sameer naina lovey dovey scenes are nice...waiting 4 ur next update...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Such a beautiful update. The way u described everything is just fabulous. I can literally imagine everything. Sameer is just too naughty to hold her hand in red rose. But it was too romantic. And while making poster him holding her hand is just so sweet. And the kiss after that was too romantic. The first date was too romantic and cute. The since and the kiss thereafter are so beautifully described. Just awesome. I was waiting since long for this update. And the wait was worth it. Thank you. Keep writing. Keep entertaining.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hmmm... am still so lost in the post. It was like i was watching the entire part rather than reading it.
Sameer's description of his timetable was mast. Every hour of his day is dedicated to only his Naina. Sirf 5 din mein ye haal hai toh aage na jaane kya hoga😛. They just can't control their "mushy " feelings and am sure Pandit will soon catch up and help them realizing its love.

You have beautifully put his thoughts and that how Naina is changing him for good. The way he shared abt His past relations, his equation with his mom and Naina understanding without judging him was pure peace.

Naina ke intezaar mein sameer ki besabri, Sameer ka na dekhne par naina ka naaraz hona, he caressing her while eating, sameer cleverly letting Naina get a chance to put forth her opinion... haiii all these made me go through so many different emotions.

I liked the reasoning behind choosing activity room. Am sure we all could relate to sameer's thoughts. The mention of music room itself gives us so many romantic vibes.

Swathi aur munna ke bi pyaar ki kahani shuru ho hi gayi.. I liked the way they confessed.

Sameer knowing Naina would come behind him was such an awww moment. They understand each other so well.

And lastly their date, I just dunno what to say hot, sensuous, passionate, consuming etc etc.. and the choice of song was cherry on the top.

All in all it was a fiery update. Loved it...Waiting for the next post.

Lots of love🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hi dear lovely update
Im loving as how sameer is spending all of his day thinking about naina
Uff the kisses man *dead dead*
I love how sameer is so supportive of naina but ya loved naina where she stood up for herself and expressed her thoughts
Do write soon[I][/I]
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Posted: 6 years ago
Dear
It was an awesome update with steamy romance ... Sameer is feeling love towards naina But he is not understanding that this is love ... Sameer is only thinking about Naina 247 hrs.. Loved the whole chapter... I'm in lose of words whenever u update the chapter..And now do make them confess...And thnx for the PM... Loved the chapter and Do update ASAP...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Actions speaks louder than words Anshika...

And this quote goes well with you right now...

Thankyou for not disclosing when I asked that how much you'll make lalachi readers blush ...

Damn man you just killed throughout the update.

You Nailed it!!!!!

Now coming on the update let's just go in the detail...

Sooo five days completed and now the samaina named flower is blossoming day by day... Matlab rukne ka naam hai aur to aur sawal bhi paida nahi hota!!!!!

The usual banter or mundit swapree and arjun was going on but our love birds were busy in the La La Land ...

Sameer to already kissing encounters k karan pagal thaa hi lekin tumne details dekr hm sabko bhi pagal kr hi Diyaa... *MAD* somehow same condition like Sameer's

Sameer the Majnu Maheshwari is definitely driving Nuts ... Aur ho bhi kyu na ... Aakhir the beautiful naina agrawal jo unki girlfriend hai...
Aur sabse best baat to ye hai ki sameer is protective for her...
He loves her innocence tooo right na!!!!?????

Sameer already nanu k karan change to ho hi rha tha lekin naina k karan vo aur bhi jyada khushh rehne laga hai... His jolly mood
grinning stupidilyg
gettingg lost in his thoughts (jo obviously naina se hi related honge )
For long... Complete symptoms of an aashiq...

Soo ponga ko samosa pr dhyaan dene k alawa apne sameer bhai k aashiq hone ka Shaq hone Lag Gaya hai...
Acchi baat hai yaar
Jald hi Hamare ponga maharaj smjh jaayenge esa lagta hai ...
Kuch bhi fayda to samaina ka hi hoga...
Afterall bhabhi k devar support me jo ajayengE...

Sooo nanu ko bhi smjh aahi gaya ki hero ko uski heroine mil hi gayi hai... Badhiya haiii .Afterall nana ji best cupid aur love guru ho kaun sakta hai ?????? Nana ji keep continuing sharing your love story ...

Naina - Awesome person kindest heart he could ever imagine her understanding nature and her support all things are liked by Sameer ...

Just by mere presence of naina Sameer is feeling special , lucky and different tooo...
Pakka yakeen hai sameer ko naina se pyaaar hogaya hai... Bs ab confession ki deri hai...lekin itni jaldi confession laane ki koi jarurat nahi hai... Arey aur thode moments aur masti and fun hoga to maza hi aa jayega ...

Sameer baba naina ji different hai aapki sabhi past me thi ladkiyo se comparison ka to sawal hi nahi hai...

Meeting her talking her holding her hands and Doing mushy mushy things haaa... Haaye pagal hi ho gaya hai ladka ...

Pehle samjh me ata tha ki sirf dekhne se naina ko sameer got erotic dreams aate the jo uske according galat the lekin ab to gf hai arey haq banata hai sameer baba ka erotic dreams dekhne ka... Dekho dekho hm sabhi lalchi readers aapk saath hai sameer baba...

So he was thinking about her while playing guitar on the D day well well kya baat hai ...

Accha to ab naina k upr sbke saamne sameer ji ne haq dikhana bhi shuru kr dia... Haaye

I am soo happy to know that samaina too like eating pao bhaji because its my favourite dish tooo

Agr sameer naina k barein me sochta h to naina bhi kuch kam nahi hai. Afterall he also have same effects on our innocence naina...
But Anshika aage k story me please show her bold and naughty side as well...

Offooo that under the table encounter... My goodness that was sooo good... And finally naina realised ki sameer ka dhyaan sirf aur sirf unki naina pr hi hai... Chahe vo show kre ya na kare...
That teasing was cherry on the top...

Kya reference tha Amar Akbar Anthony ka pandit ji aap fikar na karo teeno aap hi jeetne waale hai. .

Ye arjun kyu naina ko itna underestimate aur low value karta hai... Acchi baat nahi hai...
Isko theek Krna padega koi jaake arjun k sir pr danda maaaro re...

Music room and the samaina encounters good sameer that you chose activity room otherwise i dont think ki sameer baba se control ho pata...

Sooo finally swamun love story started ... The confession was very very cute... Munna getting jealous and swati being angry confessing her feelings a perfect combination...

Coming back to our favourite couple ... I know sameer ka gussa fake tha he trust's his lady that no matter what she'll never refuse his cute little little tho naughty demands...

Again you made us blush to the core with that detailed kissing encounter of them...

Date at factory kya baat hai ji... Their dance their laughs Naina's mischief and the song which related them you chose the perfect song baba...

Sb kuch bole to Bohot hi badiya tha maja hi aaagya ...
Hai ni hai ni hai ni...
Definitely their first update went very very very fine ...

Ha baba we are satisfied with such a long update after a long wait which seemed like ages to us...

Lekin. Kya kare hm h vahi lalachi readers aapko end me fir vahi bolenge ki eagerly waiting for the next ...

But i want to know that you are satisfied or not with this update??????

Ha ha baba ye lo abhi tak ka mera sabse jada detailed comment... By god maine aaj se pehle kabhi itna lamba comment nhi Kia.. aur apna ek hi usul hai saaf kehna sukhi rhna hai ni !
To saaf shbdo me kahe to dharti phaad update tha ye Aur bhagwan jhoot na bulaye Anshika ese hi updates deti rho aur hamesha muskurati rho...

Lots and lots of love
Labhyaa

P.S - I hope this comment it not too long

P.P.S - sorry yaar pehle comment karte time thodi gadbad hogayi
Edited by Labhya - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Lovely update..
Soo romantic
On every occasion both are together.. be it in canteen or activity room or when he kissed her or in the factory, my heartbeat increases ke kisi ne dekh liya to.. specially Arjun ko pta chal gya to? 😆😆
But tysm for a lovely update
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Posted: 6 years ago
Update was too good
I'm really enjoying their dating phase and am also excited for the election time
Congratulations again
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Posted: 6 years ago
Loved it ...their secret encounters n meeting n their first date was so nice...waiting for more..
Update asap...thanks for pm
Regards

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Sashikala

Hi this update is very romantic no doubt in that but I need some sought of suspense or tension or jealousy in their relationship so that the story will be more interesting


First, thank u very much for the feedback...😛
Second, u see this update started directly after the gf bf thing, so I had to give romance to the readers since I promised them. The story will unfold in proper layers, so will take care of it next time...😊

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