My brother's best friend - ff (New thread updated) - Page 37

Wow, yeh kya hogaya! Naina is turning out to be a true damsel in distress each time, I hope she would have slapped the guys herself 😡
The build up to Naina walking to the party was amazing. Both Nanu's teasing and Sameer's restlessness was perfect. I like how Sameer is trying his best to protect Naina from himself sincerely. Prem needs to learn his lessons 😆 Description of Naina's dress was fairy like, no wonder Sameer fell flat.
Loved the confrontation, it is wonderful how you dont beat around the bush and hash out effective conversations. Now that Sameer knows how he hurt Naina I really hope they have a good heart to heart. Even though it is still lot of lust for Sameer's side hope he knows Naina has always loved him purely without any expectation.
The last sequence was so filmy. Really felt bad for Naina. You built the suspense well whether it was Sam or Prem, so glad it was the earlier. Now the hug, just why did you stop right there 😳 Please update soon this time, can't wait!

P.S. Congratulations on becoming a Senior Member, well deserved 🥳

Wow! Again an amazing update. Loved the fight sequence and the interaction of Samaina. Waiting for the next!! Update soon!! :)

JaySeeBoth Sameer and Naina can't stay away from each other. But sameer is so much worried that he may cross the line. Loved the way how Sameer is always present to protect Naina. Loved this Naina who got enough courage to question Sameer.

Can't wait to see to see how their relationship is going to progress. Pls update soon (Quote)

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