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Posted: 6 years ago

#381

Rph09

(Quote)Arey khatam kyun ho gaya!! 😭 I wanted to read more 😭 I knew it sameer ki halat kharab ho jayegi naina ko dekh kar. Thank god shoe didn't interrupt in this part. Sameer can't tolerate anyone staring his girl so tarnishing those boys is very natural! He must've been so angry. He would've killed those boys but naina hugged him. Aah hug ☺️ Sameer'll be relieved. Dil ko sukoon mil gaya usko 😳 It was good that naina spilled out the truth. At least I'm hoping sameer'll tell her he is not anymore casanova. But also I'm worried he may consider himself unworthy of her and start ignoring her more. 😭 Please update asap. I can't wait more!!! 😭 (Quote)

Shoe Ko Abhi ke liye show aur story se dur rakha Gaya hai.

Sam is overprotective and possessive.😳 Sam Ko Sukoon Mila ya nahi vo to agli baar hi pata chalega. Convo bhi ayega, jald hi. Don't worry too much.

Will update soon

Thanks for the comment

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Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#382

Asyalover

(Quote)love ur update. but I feel Naina shud make Sameer suffer as well as she did. ,(Quote)

Thank u so much

Will update soon

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YUDKBHT

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Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#383

ratnarao12

(Quote)Congratulations senior member

Soooppeeerrr duper update

Falling more in love with this story every time I read it .

All the more because Naina too is shown beautiful

Absolutely loved it (Quote)

Thank u so much

Glad u liked my update.

Naina Vaise bhi beautiful hai, pata nahi show mein CVS ki kya problem hai.

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YUDKBHT

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Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#384

Vidhimehra

(Quote)Lovely update...

So both have feeling..might there is confession in nxt part. (Quote)

Thank u so much.

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YUDKBHT

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Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#385

MinervaMcG

(Quote)Awesome update. Loved it. Cant wait to read the next.(Quote)

Thank u so much,

Will update soon

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YUDKBHT

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Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#386

NikiAries

(Quote)Wow, yeh kya hogaya! Naina is turning out to be a true damsel in distress each time, I hope she would have slapped the guys herself 😡

The build up to Naina walking to the party was amazing. Both Nanu's teasing and Sameer's restlessness was perfect. I like how Sameer is trying his best to protect Naina from himself sincerely. Prem needs to learn his lessons 😆Description of Naina's dress was fairy like, no wonder Sameer fell flat.
Loved the confrontation, it is wonderful how you dont beat around the bush and hash out effective conversations. Now that Sameer knows how he hurt Naina I really hope they have a good heart to heart. Even though it is still lot of lust for Sameer's side hope he knows Naina has always loved him purely without any expectation.
The last sequence was so filmy. Really felt bad for Naina. You built the suspense well whether it was Sam or Prem, so glad it was the earlier. Now the hug, just why did you stop right there 😳 Please update soon this time, can't wait!

P.S. Congratulations on becoming a Senior Member, well deserved 🥳 (Quote)

Thank u so much for the detailed review...

Nanu is awesome, and Sam was really hoping to see her before everyone, but Naina Ko toh late ho Gaya.

Glad u liked the dress part, aur Prem bechaare Ko itna bhi hate mat karo.

Convo jaldi ayegi.

And Sam will come to know her feelings. Abhi time hai.

I thought ki suspense reveal bhi karna chahiye, but then agar main nahi Karti toh readers murder kar dete 😆

Will update soon

Thnx again

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YUDKBHT

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Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#387

shwta16

(Quote)Wow! Again an amazing update. Loved the fight sequence and the interaction of Samaina. Waiting for the next!! Update soon!! :)

And congratulations for becoming senior member.(Quote)

Thank you for your response

Civil will come soon, wait for it

Will update soon

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YUDKBHT

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Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#388

halley66

(Quote)Great work . Nice Update (Quote)

Thnx..

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aditi0410

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Posted: 6 years ago

#389

Kya kare zinda rhna padta h next update k liy. A am very much lalchi reader for your story. So i managed to b alive after reading your beautiful story.

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aditi0410

@aditi0410

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#390

Kya kare zinda rhna padta h next update k liy. I am very much lalchi reader for your story. So i managed to b alive after reading your beautiful story.

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