Baby! I hate tears-OS ( my first piece of writing)

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suma_yudkbh

@suma_yudkbh

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Prizi
Lovely os

Thank you for ur appreciation😊

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suma_yudkbh

@suma_yudkbh

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: JaySee
Beautiful OS. Pain of being away from each other is evident in Naina's behavior. Do write more.

Thank you😊

surely i will write more

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suma_yudkbh

@suma_yudkbh

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: vidrev
Really fabulous. I think you are inspiration to those who are interested in writing. The os is nice. The pain is evident in naina. She was not able to control her tears. The way Sam comforted her was nice. Great job dear. Plz do write more.

That's reaaly sweet of u. Thank you so much.

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suma_yudkbh

@suma_yudkbh

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Anjali33
The OS was very good for a first attempt
Distances hv made Sameer n Naina grow fonder of each other

I am glad you liked it. 😊

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Inayat

@Princesswarrior

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

That was fantastic.👏. Loved it. It really did not seem like it's your first OS. Would love if you write more.. It was adorable.

Regards

Inayat

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suma_yudkbh

@suma_yudkbh

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Princesswarrior
That was fantastic. 👏. Loved it. It really did not seem like it's your first OS. Would love if you write more.. It was adorable.
Regards
Inayat

Thank you for your appreciation. Here's the SS I have begun, it might turn to a ff.

Pure love amidst pristine mountains

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