SamAina OS:- Close Apart - Page 2

Originally posted by: NikiAries

Loved the flow and intrigue in the story! One of my favs from the OS contest :) Of course Sam cheating on Naina was not easy to take, almost unimaginable nonethesless it is very gripping. Felt there would be a part 2 or not?! 😆

Originally posted by: Priya2910

Wow!!

That's it?? Got blown away totally. Sameer and Amrita angle. This story totally deserves to be continued.

Please please please continue.

Originally posted by: asmita21180

Seriously if you ask me I did like this OS in the contest...Not only for the different angle and concept..But the way u weaved the story was so so beautiful ..and trust me if this your first attempt then you definitely did a good job...

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! This wasn't my first attempt at writing, but definitely a first at writing with a given theme...I'm glad to hear you liked it!

the revelation that the girl was anyone else then Naina was a bit shocking ..But we all agree that Sameer and Delhi was the bitter phase of his life...He was on the verge of breakdown anytime soon..His company had been very bad effect for him...And somewhere this was what worried me if only if Sameer had a slip of his character could he ever tell Naina ...

True that. This idea popped up in my head when I realized Sameer never confronted Naina about his bad company and hardships in Delhi...though this wasn't the extent, I thought of incorporating the idea into this OS.

He never told.her about his Delhi experiences so far..So I guess in his heart Sameer also agrees he was wrong...And if Naina Knew what else he had done on Delhi she would not be taking it easily...

Exactly. This was something I wanted the makers to show...however, they didn't and so I decided to pen it down 😳

But all this is part of growing...We all make mistakes and learn from them...After growing we realize how big or how small those issues where...( Which again I like about the show...It never takes characters to extreme level of Goodness or bitternbess..And kept the characters as normal and human as possible..)

I totally agree. We all make mistakes. But what makes a difference is owning up to them. And this is what indeed distinguishes YUDKBH from all the other Hindi TV shows. The similarity to reality, the simplicity, everything brings the magic in the show!

With CV's we have issues of non-clousre so I hope u will not hang us here 😆 and give a proper closure to this OS as well..Pls elaborate it and write more..

I hate to say this, but alas this will remain an OS and open to imagination...do let me know what you think might happen if a second part were to be added to this story 😃

Will wait for your updates ..

Thank you so much for the encouragement, Asmita!

Originally posted by: Azraa01

Honestly i have never thought Amrita and Sameer could have been more than just casual friends. This was an amazing twist to the plot.

Originally posted by: VandyP

Muskaan...this was seriously out of the blue...

Wen I first started reading the os... I actually thought it's mou's coz of the descriptive way u started...but as I read through the os... I knew it wasn't hers...but I could never even dream that it's yours

Hey Vandy! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing...I feel honored! I consider myself fortunate and blessed for have being associated with Mou Di's writing style; her stories are one of those I admire! Lagta hai thoda shocking lag gaya! 😳

To tell u very very frankly... I liked the start ...and as I kept on reading through the os... I kept on hoping against hopes that it's just a dream of Sam... But it turned out into reality...

Since it was edited in the competition...I wasn't even sure as to wat exactly transpired between Sam and amrita...

Sometimes what you hope to become a dream turns out to be a dreadful reality...I have no idea how that idea popped up in my head...but somehow it did, so I decided to pen it down. It was edited due to the regulations of the competition, which is one of the reasons I decided to post this separately too...hope this was clearer

But the ending left me totally confused... Had it not been for the confused ending... I would e voted for it as the out of the box thinking os... Coz nobody definitely could think of such a scenario between Sam and amrita.

Basically, Sameer's guilt takes over everything else. Everything that transpired between him and Amrita was true, but the events that took place between him and Naina was just his imagination. However, if we go back to the start of the story after the dream, we get to know that Sameer had asked Naina to meet him near Law Garden at 7:14 AM. And now, when Poonam Bhabhi brings him out of his daze, he realizes it is indeed 7:14 AM. And thus he fears history might repeat itself too soon and he might actually lose Naina forever.

Wat I really liked about this os was that it captured the fears, insecurities and the problems faced by teenage boys...esp of Sam's age... The dialogues used were apt...

Thank you so much Vandy!

I don't know if you will like my comment... But u always ask for honest opinions that's y u decided to give on this one.

I loved it, Vandy! Thank you so much for giving me honest reviews; I feel honored!

Looking forward to more writings from u...which also reminds me that I have to comment on ur latest os.

Thank you so much once again, Vandy! Jao jao, jaldi padho...I'll be waiting for your reviews on that one too!

Take care

Originally posted by: Prizi

Amazing os

Originally posted by: AMereWanderer

Thank you so much! I feel honored...I don't know what I was thinking when I penned this down, especially the bit in italics 😆

Unfortunately, there won't be a part 2 to this story. Some stories have the magic in open ends, filled with suspense. This one is as such.

Thank you so much once again!

Muskan 😃