SamAina OS: Redemption - Deleted - Page 2

Loved it! Wish CVs had incorporated 20% of what you have written Moumita!

I had goosebumps on this line

"None of them knew how long they sat there in each other's arms - one trying to heal the loneliness he had endured for three years, the other trying to save memories to be able to endure the loneliness of a lifetime."

It was simply beautiful!!👍🏼

Yes, she had accepted how selfish she had been in their relationship. She had thought of him, but never really about him. In every difficulty, she had blamed him rather than standing along with him. Instead of being his emotional support, she had broken him emotionally. Never once, had she stopped and considered the impact of her words and actions on him. Did she even deserve him? She didn't. But still, she wanted him. She wanted his love back in her life. For now she realized, that even her breath was futile if she couldn't love him.

I have no words for this piece of yours...

Though u tried to mislead ur readers totally with that start...and the lyrics of the song ...something which are definitely not ur style... As I read through the os... I started falling in love ... The depth in which u have drawn out the characters is the sheer beauty of this os... Small nuances added by you to show the drift in the relationship of samaina was brilliant... Sam not offering his hankerchief to Naina... Him not looking out for her in class...u know...as I read these lines...I could feel a tinge of pain... We are so used to the caring side of Sam...that it hurt...and trust me it hurt bad...

I could guess the os was from a seasoned writer... But those lyrics kept on confusing me...

You have an amazing talent mou... U know how to touch the nerve of readers...

And you know y I finally voted for this one as the second best entry ???... These lines just took my breath away...

Loved this story! I was so disappointed in the makers for ruining the build up break up track and most importantly Naina's character! All the logic was thrown out of the door with characters being butchered left, right, and center.

Realization of Naina of what she has done to Sameer, planning a surprise for him, Sam's self respect and staying away from persuading Naina was on point. Sam deserved an apology and reassurance which you gave beautifully😊 The impact on Naina when she thought of losing Sam forever was much needed. Honestly, if not for Only Him this was my number 1 for sure!

Again congrats and great job👏