OS/TS Naina please come back part 2

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Sindhujakumar

@Sindhujakumar

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Wow lovely update sameer's efforts to get naina back was so touching and romantic

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B M RAO

@ratnarao12

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Wowww,I just love the way u end ur update with a perfect line which goes straight to the heart.

Awesome...

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@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Very nice update! So glad you decided to write the next part.

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Radkam

@Radkam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Rula diya! Emotional touching!

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Chatterbox1

@Chatterbox1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Wow loved this update..for the first time I cried so much reading an update..thank you for writing this!

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Prerana167099

@Prerana167099

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Chatterbox1
Wow loved this update..for the first time I cried so much reading an update..thank you for writing this!

Hey this really motivated me thanks

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Yudkbh

@Yudkbh

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Posted: 6 years ago

#27

Beautiful os seriously and you describe their emotions perfectly.

But hmesha sameer hi bali ka bakra kyu banta hai. I mean bet lagai galt kiya naina ka pain dikhaya sabne, manhoosiyat track aaya to naina ka pain dikha pehli bar naina ne sameer ko hurt kiya but still sb log os bana rahe hai naina ka pain I mean really kabhi to sameer ke character pr bi focus karo,

And last but not least naina ki galtiyo ko thik karne ka tarika itna aasan kyu hai har bar cake bhej diya second time madir me baith gya third time chat se kudne chal diye and dusri tarf sameer jab bi galti kare to wo pure dil se use thik karta bina kisi emotional blackmail ka sahar liye mahino tak ghar me kaam kara uske sari khushiya di usko taki wo man jaye but naina wow bas ulte sidhe kaam kar ke emotional blackmail karo aur mafi paa lo, but thik hai kya kar skte hai even cvs bi dhyan nhi dete ispe.

Sorry aapke comment box me itna kuch likh diya. Flow me beh gya me 😆 Want to know what you guys think about it.

Awesome story hai waise 👏