OS/TS Naina please come back part 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Naina come back please

Sameer,'s anger jealousy and frustration new no bounds. Was he taking revenge on naina or really moving now with Sunaina the question he never knew the answer.
Sameer holding hands with Sunaina went away. Naina was just left starring. She wondered the first hand touch of sameer which still lasts in her heart could be replaced just in few moments by some other person is he feelingvthe same goosebumps when he held Sunaina 's hand. She jerked herself out of the thoughts.
Preeti was watching her sis silently dying. Sameer and destiny both had planned to test Naina. The next day he came on bike with Sunaina hand on his shoulder. She looked at both if nothing less to bother Munna and Pandit called Sunaina bhabhi. Once again she was reminded of her bike ride and the feeling that transpire through her all body that eagerness that tickling feeling the joy excitement the ownership belonging and the pleasent shivers near her spine she could feel it even now and a smile unknowingly danced on her face and faded that can this be felt with any other person is he feeling the same with Sunaina. Something inside her died again. He announced that his and Sunaina jodi was best and wrote Su in front of naina. She gave a wry smile and said to herself I could nat stand Sunaina name joined with you on Black board and here you are standing joining your hands with her in front of me something died again inside her. Finally she remembered Sameer saying I love you to Sunaina. She recalled her words sau bar dil dhadakta hai isse Kehne se pehle kay uska dil Sunaina key liye dhadka hai. There was nothing left inside her to die now. Her engagement was cancelled with Sharad she did it herself to safe her father and tauji from an insult from sharad. Yes now her marriage did not matter because their pride was more important. When chachaji and preeti tried to break the marriage for her dreams it was crime. She smiled ironically at her family. Yes no body noticed a suside committed by Naina as there was no sign outside the suside was committed inside she said to herself Saans chal rahi hai tum jinda ho. The news of broken engagement reached Sameer he did not know how to react he had already created a mess named Sunaina. He felt like yes he is deep in water and the safety guard is near his arms reach and his voice is stuck and he is not able to call for help and he is drowning. Here Naina was thinking all things change a marriage alliance which was so important did not matter now. She who was so important for Sameer now he did not care about her. Every thing changed. What will stay with her she picked up her books and hugged Preeti. Preeti was shattered she said Naina please behen aansu baha le warna mar jayegi. Naina said saase chal rahi hai iska matalab zinda ho tum. Her eyes were just like a stone with no emotion in it. Sameer told munna pandit that he needs to meet preeti to know about Naina Munna Pandit arre Yaar woh to mar dalegi ha Swati se puchta ho par tu saath mat aana. In college munna coaxes Swati to talk with him. Munna woh naina kaisi hai? Swati tumse matalab . Preeti came there to call Swati there listen to all the conversation. Preeti kya janna chahte aur kyu. Jan ke karoge kya samazh paoge. Ha tuzhse puchti hu munna sameer ke nanaji mana karte aur uski Maa phasi ka fanda lagati toh sameer kya karta dadi Ke Keh dene ke bhar se usne naina ko chhoda tha to kya naina ne kisi aur ka hath pakda tha. Yeh toh tay hai ki gharwale pyar ko nahi samajhenge toh kya sameer ke sath ghum Phir ke aur yaaden banati taki usse dur Jane mei taklif ho. Pyar karna toh meri behen janti hai jis Baap ne uski kabhi chinta nahi ki uske liye apne pyar ki bali chanda dhi. Apne chacha ke liye armanon ko ghot diya. Sameer ko taklif nahi ho isliye usse roz marte hui dekha hai.
Munna pandit hum sameer ko Dard mei dekh nahi paye woh sanyas lene wala tha.
Preeti snapped Dard hadd se gujar jata hai toh kya hota hai pata hai. Aur ha jinda log sanyas lete hai. Meri behen mar chuki hai.
Munna Pandit gets shocked . Sameer who is listening from a corner comes out near preeti with tears in his eyes preeti kya hua hai naina ko batau na
Preeti tum toh mere samne aao hi mat.
Sameer jitna naraz hona hai ho lena par bato naina ko kya hua
And just then there is a sound of footsteps Naina is walking with her bag and books in her hand. A straight face with stoned eyes just like a statue she stares at munna pandit sameer swati no expression she says kaise ho.?. Preeti mai library Jaa rahi hu sidhe class Aa jaongi.. Swati gets shattered she and preeti starts crying swati says Yeh mar jaayenge . Naina turns and comes near Swati takes her hand brings near her heart and says Saas chal rahi hai jinda hu mai...


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On everyone's demand I wrote part 2 on page 3
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey the topic is naina please come back
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Omg..this made me cry..please write another part..please please one with a positive end..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi need your comments to finalise to keep os or ts
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was so emotional... I had tears in my eyes while reading... Yeah Naina is jinda laash... At home all the drama by family members and in college by Sameer and Sunaina... Please continue the story
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Please continue this story it's really amazing and emotional
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I would like to read part 2 as well. .. N yes saansei chalne ko zinda hona Kehtey but still all her feelings all her emotions are dead.. Really hope in part 2 u show how sameer revives all her feelings brings back lively cheerful Naina
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Posted: 7 years ago
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The last line just pierced my heart
Preeti's dialogues were fab
Please make it a TS or maybe SS n continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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omg that saans chl rhi hain zinda hu main made me cry 🥺
it's wonderful
what will Sameer do now to bring her Naina back
plz update soon dear
I can't wait
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautifully portrait continue soon

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