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Seema

@JaySee

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Wow... super hot. Sameer is unstoppable now. Only God knows how Naina can cover up her passionate husband in front of her conservative family. Continue pls.

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gugul

@gugul

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Hotness overloaded... Uff... Can't wait to read what happened next... Please continue further.. don't stop here 😉

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Alisha

@AlishaSyed

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Fantastic ..

It was hot man ..

girl I loved it.

Hahaha ofcourse it's hard to control when Sameer have a wife like Naina and Naina have a husband like Sameer ..

But why you finished it

It should have second part ..

Khair thankyou for the pm

Wiatkng for more spicy os or drabble or FF

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Archana03

@Archana03

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Hi shravya 😊 Am a silent reader and juz started to comment on the stories..

Juz want to ask u dat Wil you come up with such romantic stories when ur bored up am surprised 😛 and dat was an Amazing update 👏👏

Loved to see married sameer and naina 😳 and he is not borthered about whom is surrounded by and what's happening around him poor boy can't control himself having his wife in front of him 😆😆

But y did u end it so soon yaar do cum up with the next part na coz eager to know wats going to happen 😛

Such stories are needed for the upcoming week coz I dont want to see der break up and no one wants to 😭

Edited by Archana03 - 7 years ago

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Anmol

@Anmol333

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

What a intensive drabble.

Very nice 👍🏼

Sameer is shameless brat 😆 and making Naina too.

Very nice.

Keep it up.

Thanks for pm.

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Shravya why did u leave it at such a point. . Hope u add part 2 to it.. I liked the fact how sameer admired the relation between preeti and naina alot and how he considers her family his own.. Married samaina is always treat to read.. Loved it as usual

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Ishq-high

@Ishq-high

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Impactful and wonderful

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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Ha Shravya, you know I have a soft spot for Drabbles as I started writing with them so this one attracted to me even more. 😳

Oh my god, Sam adoring the two sisters was beautiful, how he admired Preeti for standing beside them through thick and thin. Serously, Preeti darling is a gem😳 Loved how you gave a special mention for her!

Staring Naina with all the flashback playing in his mind, the desires turning more intense if its possible and him scanning her body, searching for the unconcealed love bites was love.

And the ending was superb, raised my heartbeats too!☺️

Come with more!😃

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Aisha

@Samaina_16

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Ayyo, I am at loss of words. Kya hot update thi boss. Without explicitly mentioning the details of the last night, you set everything on fire.

Sameer's admiration for Preeti was so genuine and sweet. He was absolutely right about Preeti. Glad, that he acknowledges her love for them.

The intensity with which Sameer was scanning Naina for the marks he had left on her left me blushing. His fixed gaze was enough to transport Naina to the happenings of last night. Haha bechari she was caught on spot by Sameer. I can very well imagine how difficult it would have been for her to control.

I loved how you ended the drabble. After trying hard to resist her feelings, she finally surrendered to her husband notwithstanding the situation they were in. Hayeee Sameer ka charm hi kuch Aisa hai, kitna resist Karti.

Kitchen romance always gives me feels. Maza aa gaya pdh ke.

If this is what you write when you are bored, I hope aap Baar Baar bore Hoti rhen ;)

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MSK04

@MSK04

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Hi Shravya - sorry for being so late in commenting.

This is beautiful... The way you progressed with it, a situation in-front of family and the newly married couple reminiscing their first night, was commendable.

Loved how Sameer was thinking of his saali's support... Preeti truly is a blessing for Samaina... and PreeNa bond is fabulous...

The temperatures escalated with every line and every thought... Yes, Sameer will totally remember each and every place he has marked her, claimed her... and I loved the description of Naina being the liquid fire beneath him.

Just a look, and it is enough for both of them to know what's going on in each other's minds... and there is surrender... Sameer surrendered to the burning desires only she could arouse in him, and Naina surrendered to the searing response that only he can awaken in her.

Loved it... and hope to read more from you. 😳

Love,

Mou

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