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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AaishaM

Ayyo, I am at loss of words. Kya hot update thi boss. Without explicitly mentioning the details of the last night, you set everything on fire.

Sameer's admiration for Preeti was so genuine and sweet. He was absolutely right about Preeti. Glad, that he acknowledges her love for them.


The intensity with which Sameer was scanning Naina for the marks he had left on her left me blushing. His fixed gaze was enough to transport Naina to the happenings of last night. Haha bechari she was caught on spot by Sameer. I can very well imagine how difficult it would have been for her to control.

I loved how you ended the drabble. After trying hard to resist her feelings, she finally surrendered to her husband notwithstanding the situation they were in. Hayeee Sameer ka charm hi kuch Aisa hai, kitna resist Karti.

Kitchen romance always gives me feels. Maza aa gaya pdh ke.


If this is what you write when you are bored, I hope aap Baar Baar bore Hoti rhen ;)



Aaisha dear always a pleasure reading ur comments 🤗 thank you man. Preeti i think is one character everyone needs to appreciate, that character is pure love. Sameer's eyes have always had this intensity when it comes to naina, but after being intimate, the intensity of it increased. Haha yes poor naina was stuck and couldn't understand what was happening with her, with sameer's charm it would be unabke to resist. Haha everyone wants me to get bored now 😆 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: MSK04

Hi Shravya - sorry for being so late in commenting.

This is beautiful... The way you progressed with it, a situation in-front of family and the newly married couple reminiscing their first night, was commendable.

Loved how Sameer was thinking of his saali's support... Preeti truly is a blessing for Samaina... and PreeNa bond is fabulous...

The temperatures escalated with every line and every thought... Yes, Sameer will totally remember each and every place he has marked her, claimed her... and I loved the description of Naina being the liquid fire beneath him.

Just a look, and it is enough for both of them to know what's going on in each other's minds... and there is surrender... Sameer surrendered to the burning desires only she could arouse in him, and Naina surrendered to the searing response that only he can awaken in her.

Loved it... and hope to read more from you.😳

Love,
Mou



It's fine mou, even i have to read lots of stories and have to comment man,so totally understand what u are going through. Yup, preeti is one fabulous character!! Poor babies what they had to go through they just had their wedding night and their family tapak pada early in the morning 😆 😆. Yup their intensity leaves everybody breathless. Will soon come up with another one. Thank you so much 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehraan

Ok im feeling hawttt☺️...n i can actually feel the heat of those intensity gazes till here😳😳...Gosh y r they so lovable?!MAN...

Shravya even tis short drabble has kept my heart racing ...Naina has a tough time handling his pent up passion n desires !!



So you finally read it 😆 😆 , yes, yes they are so lovable 🤗. Their chemistry does wonders for us, making us all blush 😳. Yup naina and us too!! We all have a tough time handling his gaze and the intensity of it 😉

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