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Posted: 7 years ago
#91
Superb update. Loved it very much.
Unknowingly my eyes are also getting moist by seeing the difficult situation of Naina. The way how she hides her pain shows how strong she is. Sameer is so determined to get her out of her pain. That shows how serious he is towards her.
Even though I am not able to understand full meaning of your poems, I am loving them very much. I am getting the emotions that you are conveying through them.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92
Very nice and interesting update! Feeling tensed reading about Naina's stepdad...my god she is living in hell..now let's see how Sameer manages to help Naina and give her a beautiful world... Continue writing...very different and beautiful story!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93
Loved the update Sims!!❤️
Majnu Maheshwari is incredibly confident that he'll be able to make Naina fall in love with him😆
It's amazing how he watched her dance exactly once but could understand her pain and read her emotions so well...truly there are very few people with such excellent chemistry.
Ah well,the road ahead is not easy for him,but anything worth doing should be done in style😆
Aww swamun are so cute😳
Swati has a designated 'gharwali' voice😆shes going to use it a lot, undoubtedly😆
I found her list of reasons hilarious-munna saying that Sameer is a good guy tak thik tha,but she was definitely happy that Sam is so good looking😆
I loved how she was looking out for her best friend,and wanted someone to match Naina in both beauty and inner goodness😳
Raman frankly gives me the creeps😡
Uggh...everytime he makes an appearance,I'm terrified for Naina...but I adore her spirit...she deserves some amazing revenge,and I hope she herself does it,I don't mind sameer supporting her,but it's awesome when women take up a stand for themselves❤️
Update soon
Lots of love❤️
PS: are you planning to make this story 18+ at some point?coz Naina will have a lot of issues with intimacy,given her unfortunate childhood,it'll be interesting to read how she gets over it and learns to trust...afterall,Sameer and that awful creature she calls stepfather are 2 very different categories of men.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94
Sims...Another great update ❤️
People say Beauty of a woman must be seen in her eyes because it is the doorway to her heart and Sameer is just lost in Naina's eyes.For him, those eyes were so pure that a sweet soul gleamed in them. Her eyes etched poems that he could decipher.It also held the dark demons of her life.He sensed the fire in her eyes with a glimmer of hope even in the depth of despair. She is a gorgeous chaos ⭐️

He loves her madly, crazily and deeply today, tomorrow and forever. He feels she is the light that has awakened his spirit, his sun, moon and stars. His heart and soul is wrapped around her.

Swati and Samundit bonding and convo was fun which had lot of warmth of their friendship.😊

Poor soul Naina , its disheartening to see her shaking in fear of the demon she knows.
It has sucked the happiness out of her, leaving her with sadness and anxiety. That devil has taken control of her thoughts that she ends up finding negativity everywhere.😭She should not bow down to him and settle for mediocrity in life. She needs all the confidence in the world to eventually defeat the demon and emerge victorious.

Sameer would be that simple touch which will heal her broken heart. He will definitely break down her barriers and will let sunshine in.

Sameer's love is so real that he is not ready to give up on her, he is determined to win her. Their journey would be breathtakingly beautiful when he would make her insecurities to sleep and cure her off all the fears. ❤️

Btw awesome lines 👏

Lots of Love🤗

Eager to see how their story will progress further with Preedit also in ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
Lovely update..
Will there be a Preedit as a couple here or just as friends?
And will Naina melt towards Sameer soon?
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96
So so so so Beautiful update
Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97
Excellent dear.. I was waiting for ur story.. it's different..Loving it..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98
😭👏😊
I freaking loved it
This part was so good
God that f**king Raman ugrhhh I hope Sameer will beat him black blue
Hayeee so finally my PreeDit will meet
Hahaha that Swati Munna scene was cute ..
Awww my poor Naina my babygirl
My boi Sammy is in deep love
He want to remove her sorrow n pains
He want her to be happy
Hayeee I'm so excited to read how will he help her to break n get free from that hell
Eagerly waiting for it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Booklover94

Loved the update Sims!!❤️

Thank you Viji dear!

Majnu Maheshwari is incredibly confident that he'll be able to make Naina fall in love with him😆

Well yes he is Majnu maheshwari with the swag after all

It's amazing how he watched her dance exactly once but could understand her pain and read her emotions so well...truly there are very few people with such excellent chemistry.
Ah well,the road ahead is not easy for him,but anything worth doing should be done in style😆

Indeed that is true. Sameer is irresistable when he is just being effortlessly charming self

Aww swamun are so cute😳

I know I love them so much, miss their funny banter in the show!
Swati has a designated 'gharwali' voice😆shes going to use it a lot, undoubtedly😆

A lot! She will be using it all the time

I found her list of reasons hilarious-munna saying that Sameer is a good guy tak thik tha,but she was definitely happy that Sam is so good looking😆

Isnt it the same thing that happened in the show too, kinda😆😆

I loved how she was looking out for her best friend,and wanted someone to match Naina in both beauty and inner goodness😳

Yes she just wants Naina to have a happy life. I will show Naina's past a bit from her perspective too in the future

Raman frankly gives me the creeps😡
Uggh...everytime he makes an appearance,I'm terrified for Naina...but I adore her spirit...she deserves some amazing revenge,and I hope she herself does it,I don't mind sameer supporting her,but it's awesome when women take up a stand for themselves❤️

Yes I hate writing his parts. But I just think that Naina is going to take such an amazing revenge in the future that it will be fun to write and read. Just you wait and watch.

Update soon
Lots of love❤️
PS: are you planning to make this story 18+ at some point?coz Naina will have a lot of issues with intimacy,given her unfortunate childhood,it'll be interesting to read how she gets over it and learns to trust...afterall,Sameer and that awful creature she calls stepfather are 2 very different categories of men.

Yes actually a huge part of this FF is Naina trying to understand and get over her intimacy issues with Sameer. You will love the future updates.


Thank you for your comment Viji dear. My answers are in blue.

Bundles of love,
Sims <3 <3
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow!! Iamlbe! I don't know your name so using you ID instead! You know we have some really great writers in this forum and the stories that they write are awesome as well! But I had decided not to read a new story till it has a few chapters written already!!! If I read one chapter at a time then I keep thinking about the story the whole time till u write the next one... but I was really curious so could only wait till 3 chapter :/. But oh boy this story is so awesome... kinda like Tezaab movie.. I loved that movie! Please please update quickly.. everyday of possible hahahah just kidding...
keep up the good writing!

Thanks
Pinal

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