Samaina SS : The Bet Reversal (ON Hold) *Note on Pg 26 - Page 17

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Posted: 7 years ago
Tnx 4 pm Dear.. ot was gud.. relieving those moments..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update. Naina's dilemma is clear in her words. Poor girl. She is completely in love. Really like the way how you are developing the story. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Mere Mehboob Qayamat Hogi...Kishore Kumar
I am loving how you are taking inspiration from songs for your titles, my music buddy! 😳

I simply loved this chapter, filled with romantic moments and innocence I read it last night before drifting into sleep and today too, twice...❤️

The conversation that played out between Swati and Naina...a temporary happiness that will only provide a permanent wound if not healed properly. Righteousness in her blood, Naina felt playing with a pure emotion like that isn't right but then why did her stance falter just by the stern words of Swati? The answer was simple to me, her love for him overpowered her rationality, his happy face overpowered her. The future was on God's hands, she just wanted his happiness and somewhere, being with him brought solace to her and made her feel complete.

Kabootar 🤣 Perks of being too much filmy? You get to think everything in the most uncommon way...😉

I wish you could see me beaming with happiness, I was actually waiting to see how were you gonna introduce the two ring signal and you have left me speechless, amazing! 😳
Love you so much! <3

I loved the whole exchange between Sam and Naina there, the stubbornness displayed by Naina in there had left me giggling, she indeed is showing a side of hers to Sameer that not much were aware of.

His speech was rapid when he was asking her phone number and how could anyone say NO to him?! The innocence his voice might have held could melt away anything.
And also Sameer's way of asking her number was too cute, haaye!

Okay Ayu, this is random, Naina's hand would have touched Sameer's when scribbling the phone number, atleast a slight graze, right?

The sheer impossibility of that happening had left me amazed too, their pen taps is a bliss as always and then haha, they were laughing so badly outside the class especially that reaction was unexpected and I loved it...
I didn't miss Sam getting mesmerised seeing her laughing form, this guy is outright falling for her! 😳

Enjoyed the interactions between SaMunDit and Nanu..them pulling his leg was so funny! 😆 Another thing was I missed Nanu badly and reading about him here touched my heart! 🤗

Sometimes just hearing your voice is all I need...
Though you didn't write their phone conversation, it was still special as hearing your loved one's voice solely for you is a completely another feeling. ❤️

Loved the instances of PreeDit and Munna-Swati...cuties! Especially PreeDit has my heart☺️
These two couples can be a support for Samaina when they are shattered in the future. Their pillars!

Preeti is smart. Period. And it was high time, she knew everything! I am actually eagerly waiting for the confrontation between the sisters.

The bet is turning more and more interesting Ayu, already waiting for more...⭐️ ❤️

P.S. I just love the voiceovers...it connects me to the story on an another level!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Aayushi Darling!
This was worth the wait and truly engaging.Loved the fluid like flowing of the update.Few things I lived the most...The way now and again Naina was getting lost in Sameer.The way she was completely swayed by his najre...😳 And then the kabootar talk ...that was such a great comic relief amongst the guilt trips Naina is taking now.The padhaku Sameer avatar was really a treat to imagine.
Beautiful plot setting taking in all the characters..I am thinking how this bet phase shall end ...so many imagination s...
The song and voice overs are the cherry on the beautiful my and meticulously designed cake.
Intriguing piece and loved the dialogues... Beautiful and splendid..
Waiting for the next.
Please update soon...
Thanks for the PM and keep coming with your best.
With love -
Minu

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Posted: 7 years ago
So freaking amazing
I love the innocence of the characters that you are so beautifully putting forth in the story
Very well written
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
Mast update,aayu!!😳
Best part toh kabootar wala tha😆
And sameers reaction to that-haan kabootar,kya?😆😆
Aww,kitni koshish ki humari bechari Naina ne bet ke baare me bolne ki...no use whatsoever...
Ab chalu Kiya hai toh bet Ko pura khatam karke chodenge...Sameer Ko jab pata chalega...
Loved the part with nanu and mundit teasing Sam.yeh toh already pyaar ke raaste pe chal Raha hai,ab bus samajhna baaki hai😉
Loved it,and update soon😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ayushi I thoroughly enjoyed reading it ... Bechari Naina she is guilt ridden... But how I wish Ki voh confess Kar deti itna Acha hota sameer am sure usey maaf Kar deta... But Yahn Naina k frds vohi same role play kar rahe hai jo mundit ne serial mei kiya tha ... But Naina ki feelings true hai .. . Eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
A sweet update...
Cant wait to see Sameer's reaction when he finds out about the bet
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Posted: 7 years ago
Absolutely loved it! I always wanted similar like this to happen in the show and now I've gotten to read it if at least not see it.

The idea and the style you wrote it with was amazing. Their interactions, haaye Sameer and Naina are such sweethearts 😳

I loved how you showed the bond between the sisters and friends and you have my favourite couples also Munna Swati and Pandit Preeti... I couldn't stop laughing at kabootar part


Naina struggling with her feelings, and Sameer slowly falling in love. ❤️

Continue soon! Can't wait
Edited by SidNiNiVi04 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Unres at page 21 finally 😊

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