Samaina FF: Expectedly Unexpected #2 (Part 25 on Page 130) - Page 73

Originally posted by: Ashusanj

Waiting,

Waiting,

Waiting,

Plzz update soon

With love

Ashu

Originally posted by: Archie0405

pls post next update...it has been ages now

Originally posted by: doublecross

Dearest sur

I am here to compensate for my absence since the last update. Am touched at your gesture, since when you are wallowing in your own sorrows all you seek is some solace and friends like you helped me through my tough times and here I am back yet again. I just hope I stay as a ligament fixture and never again do I have to leave just pray that I never again face the ordeal I did. It was the worst of the nightmares that I lived yet they were made bearable because I had for support friends like you.

Aww my dear...hum dost kam behene zyaada hain! 😳
Love you n Prishu a lot! And ab sab theek hoga don't worry! ❤️

Broken, shattered

I could see the pieces scattered around

They hurt like hell

I tried picking them up

Getting back at you

The betrayal

The pain

It's all so unbearable

I tried pushing your thoughts away

Tried every vice

Even cheated on our love

Yet everytime I looked into the mirror

I could see my hollow soul staring back at me

Your love nurtured it

Gave it a new lease of life

My hardened heart learnt to beat

The rhythm of love was no longer alien to me

I started breathing love

I started living you

Yet I remained unaware

I felt an exhilaration like never before

But now I know

It was all a game

A mirage

A dream painted by your deciet

You were never to be mine

You broke me

Shattered me into pieces

Uprooted that very sapling of love, the seeds of which you had sowed in my heart

And now I stand broken

Bereft of emotions

Both my eyes and soul and hollow

Yet still I pine for you

Still my heart thuds at your very mention

Still am waiting for you to run into my arms

Drench me in your love

Make me live again

Make me love again

Make me yours again

But...

Again...tere andar ka kavi! I'm honoured yaar! And it just summarizes what Sameer is going through at this point of time so aptly! Make me live again- Dean Holder! 😳

I can't choose one line of this poem over another! You have a gift girl- a gift to express- through both prose and poetry! ❤️

So sur I have summed up sameer's feelings for you. He has been through a lot. For a guy who had sworn of relationships naina had been his solace, his only hope, somebody who had pulled him out of abyss and made him live his life, made him believe in love. She brought in a sense of calm into his turbulent life and somewhere after many she seemed like that anchor whom he leaned upon and hence it's a lot for him to take upon when she left him. He seems to be bereft of all emotions except melancholy. His mourning has led him on a path of vengeance wherein he is looking for ways to hurt her to get back at her for her betrayal. And hence the dalliance. He has actually started believing that once he gets back to his old ways then he would be able to shrug naina off from his thoughts. But little does he know that naina is not only in his thoughts, but she is ingrained into him, he is the reason for his survival since she never ceases to leave his thoughts. His heart still yearns her return while his soul still seeks her peace. And finally his patience is rewarded when he sees her after eons. Stunned and perplexed, he is at a loss for words. Somewhere he has the urge to run take her in his arms and never leave her yet he retaliates with his anger. He simpers seeing the signs of marriage. Whatever little hope he harboured that she might not have been married is shattered and he wants to punish her for choosing another man over him by getting harsh. The confrontation between the two just took my breath away. I could only imagine the two soaking in each others presence while perusing each other with their eyes. The confrontation brought to the fore all the ugly wounds that had been camouflaged by time. For naina too it was that moment of reckoning. She was yet again face to face with her past. A past that that made her do things which she had never ever imagined doing. The very past that had made her reckless, that very past which she believed to be love. But today the love is replaced by venom in her eyes yet her mind and her heart are not attuned with each other. She believes that she hates him, that she has outgrown his love yet at the very first instance of laying eyes upon him, her heart skips a beat, she could feel her muscles thrum and her eyes seeked love. Her soul searched for that same man with whom she had fallen in love. Her eyes scanned through his appearance taking in the minutest of changes. I loved it all is all I can say. Naina's past intrigues me. What had actually transpired after that phone call with shefali? Where had she disappeared and whether she is actually married to a different man? Too many riddles! And it is these riddles which make this story such a charmer. Every part is left off as a cliffhanger and it seems you are a subject matter specialist in it. In this current one as well when sameer is seen drowning in his sorrows and naina being pensive while she remnicised her past, all of it is metamorphosed with precision. He is angry because she left him, while she believes he betrayed her, shunned her love and now must be back to his old ways of dalliance. In all of this we have a little one sleeping peacefully. Her presence is riddled. Is she sameer 's? Or is she arvinds the very man whose deep baritone presides over their lives. But who is he? Her husband? Friend? Saviour?

You know sur I was literally holding my breath while reading the update especially when sameer bumped into naina and Met diya by chance. I could only imagine the plethora of emotions that must have crossed sameer 's face, of confusion, of misunderstanding, of pain, of anguish and hate and hence he stormed off in his quest for vengeance. Vengeance and hate led him to simmi and somewhere he wanted to drown out his sorrows and deny his feelings for naina with an act with simmi but alas! Naina led him off the path of vengeance the moment she reentered his life and realization dawned upon him that whatever he was doing was ruining his life further and hence he backtracked in the end bringing himself and simmi back to their senses.

Bravo! For coming up with such complex parts where in so many emotions are involved. You have stunned me and am at a loss for words and the pace of this particular ff is a winner. Am really looking forward to reading more. Hope I did justice.

The beauty of this story lies in its steady stream.

What a beautiful review my love! Wow! I don't even know if I can do justice to it with my response! You know- sometimes I go back and reread the updates and the comments! I really feel overwhelmed at the response this story has been getting. Frankly, I could never have imagined it! I can only thank you guys for believing in me and my story, in trusting me despite moments of immense despair in the story! But I won't say thank you to you...coz hum dost hain haina 😃 ...the way you've described the emotions racing through Sameer's mind in the poem and the way his life has shaped out in the past few years had my heart! Especially the part 'Naina led him off the path of vengeance the moment she entered his life'- why so true!

Even if he can't seem to accept her marriage- is incredibly furious at her and then dumbstruck with the revelation of a daughter- Sameer just cannot move on with any other girl. It has been Naina for him since the day he met her- much before he realized he was in love with her!

For Naina yeah- I know I've kept her and her past shrouded in mystery for a while...but I needed some time to shape out Sameer's life- his realization of his love and then the subsequent tragedies that were inflicted upon him...the way she and his Nanu were snatched away...how he picked up the pieces and strived to live again...and then when he's almost there- feels he is confident, he sees her and boom- he crumbles...back to square 1! But this time, Naina too has a grudge...I hope you like the way I unfold the story ahead too! 😳

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Caught up with the last three chapters and i must say, what all i missed...so many revelations and so much progress, this story doesn't fail to make me scream with excitement like when am at the highest point of a roller coaster ride..but that is what this is, an emotional roller coaster ride where it fills me with joy seeing sameer picking pieces of his broken life or finally feeling the fuzzy feeling of respite by reading about naina and being aware that she is safe, sometimes pondering about diya on who her biological father might be, or feeling guilty about cursing arvind, a man with a heart of gold and sometimes even arousing mixed feelings inside me- resentment and pity for vishaka, a failed mother!

Hey Shreya! I'd been missing you! 😊 And thank you yaar...I'm so happy that the story has managed to retain the interest of my most loved readers! 😳 Lots of things happened...show mein nahi hua, but I took a leap 😆 so time has passed...Sameer seems to be in control, but is he? It takes a moment for him- when he sees her again to fall for her! Diya is again a mystery- as to who her father is and the past behind Arvind- I hope you like the way I unfold it! 😊

i need to give a big round of applause as you seem to ace descriptive writing...the lovely june had turned lovelier with your beautiful and rightly penned words! 👏

OMG! Thank you dear! I think this was my first foray into such elaborate descriptions! 😊Hope to improve! 😳

Mrs. Reena Mittal and the Somani Publication Agency...sur di, i didn't even dream about this angle on making the tortured lovers meet...naina's dream to be a writer used skillfully by you! Though I had binge-read the chapters, you had kept the suspense element intact successfully and i was proven right when i skimmed through a few comments!

Ohhh...I'm so glad I was able to surprise you with this twist! 😊 And that's a true test for a writer- if the reader feels curious enough to turn to the next page or not! I'm really honoured that you felt that the suspense has been maintained till now! Hope I can continue the same in future updates too! 😊

The whole confrontation between dear samaina was heart-wrenching to read but much needed, the emotions which were locked into one of the chambers in their heart suddenly burst out, there were no keys needed as all are aware that they are keys to their respective hearts.

Agreed- they never had the opportunity to shout it all out- yell at each other- fight or for that matter discuss...they've built up illusions about the other based on what they know or got to know or maybe the way circumstances shaped out.

i think this story fits in all genre except i guess, paranormal! 😆

Haha- should I bring in stylish dadi ki aatma? 😆 But nahi yaar...bechara Sameer is already so frustrated...I've hurt him the most in this story and feel really sorry for him!

Rita and simi, i feel glad to see that at least whatever women entered and exited his life were sane and not some clingy person like one meghnaa with a double 'a'..

When you mentioned HDDCS in the theatre screen, that's when i realised too how similar their lifes' were...

Haha- Meghnaa was one chipku! 😆 I really like the movie HDDCS...I inserted it coz it matched the timeline, the storyline a bit and then obviously because Salman's name is Sameer too...so Sameer Maheshwari is able to relate to Sameer of HDDCS! 😊

How can emptiness be so heavy?

It is...😕 I pray to God no one has to go through such loneliness in life!

I am so excited for upcoming chapters! 😃 And i apologize for the combined comment, it's due to time constraints...but i am loving it so far! Bundles of love! 🤗❤️

Nah! No worries dear...I know how busy you are...still you are able to follow the story and put in such a fabulous review- I'm really overwhelmed dear!

Thank you! ❤️ Really means a lot to me!