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Originally posted by: SixteenAgain
What a brilliant update Sur! You are just tooo good at writing emotional scenes and giving the characters the right voice and tone.
May! Thank you so much! Glad to see you are able to connect with the emotions of the characters I've tried to portray here! 😳
Once again I cried every time I read this update! My heart went out to both Naina and Sameer... but a little more to Naina. It is clear that there is some MU or someone has deliberately fooled her into believing the worst of Sameer. She was thinking Sameer might still be with some specific HER. Sameer was not with any other girl for a long time... so someone must have mislead her.
Ahaan...good guesses! Yes- there has been a MU for sure...ab hero heroine dono ek dusre ko galat samajh ke baithe hain! 😕
You described Arvind as a familiar face... familiar to whom? Sameer?? So many questions running through my mind!
Yes to Sameer! Remember he'd seen his photograph when Naina told him about the alliance back during college? His sub-conscious is stirred on seeing his face, but he doesn't pay heed to it- reeling over the shock that Naina now has a daughter as well.
Naina yelling and crying here reminded me of the Naina crying in the bathroom in the college her cries echoing off the walls.Wow! I actually wanted to draw a kind of a parallel between that scene in college and the scene now...both the times Naina knew she couldn't escape the fact she was in love with him and both the times, she'd thought Sameer had wanted distance from her.
I hate the thought of them missing out on all these years together as a family which could have been filled with love and laughter and have instead been full of loneliness and pain.
That's true yaar...infact everytime I read a romance with a leap and a MU between the leads, I feel the same! 😕 Infact I want leaps to be as small as possible! This was initially three years- I changed to five later!
Lastly the little surprise package - Diya.. not quite a surprise though... Shefali had found just one wrapper after all! Hum bilkul bhi bhule nahi hai 😆
Haha! Hamara fandom CID se kam to hai nahi! 😆 But my lips are sealed for now! 😲
Diya's straight nose, rose petal like shapely lips.. sounds very familiar 😉 plus you have mentioned Arvind as a good father figure in Diya's life... so I am extra hopeful!
Haha...dekha CID pakka! 😉 Umeed pe duniya kayam hai! 😆
So eager to see where this heads now.
I would try to be more regular now May! 😳
Big hug for this fabulous update! I LOVE this story so much!!!!Thanks for so much love May! I'm truly honoured that someone as talented as you enjoys this story this much! 😊
Lots of love,
May
Hey May!
My late-lateef reply shining in blue here! 😃
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