|| SamAina SS || En-route Of Pregnancy || Part 11 (B) - pg 65 *NEW* - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

Very interesting concept

Please update asap


Thanks Anjali😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Its always a delight to read about their after marriage life
And this one is really amezing
Sameer was as expected a " I want my wife's attention all the time " it was soo cute
And off course he is super romantic and knows how to deal with his angry wife
I'm really looking forward to see what you have in stored for all of us

Eagerly waiting for the next part
Come soon

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Samainadeewani

Its always a delight to read about their after marriage life

And this one is really amezing
Sameer was as expected a " I want my wife's attention all the time " it was soo cute
And off course he is super romantic and knows how to deal with his angry wife
I'm really looking forward to see what you have in stored for all of us

Eagerly waiting for the next part
Come soon

Love
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Thanks.
Glad you liked the minor romance showcased here,although iam not so good at writing it.
Hope to hear from you in the further updates as well.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks. 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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First of all welcome dear.. And I must say, it's a beautiful concept 👏

Start was just cute.. Loved it!!

Naina's flashback scene was really nice 😊

I am curious to know that, what Naina will do now

Please update soon and thanks for the PM dear

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Originally posted by: _.SilentHeart._

First of all welcome dear.. And I must say, it's a beautiful concept 👏

Start was just cute.. Loved it!!

Naina's flashback scene was really nice 😊

I am curious to know that, what Naina will do now

Please update soon and thanks for the PM dear


Thanks a lot !
Glad you liked all the scenes!
Your questions will get answered soon😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part - 1(B)-The mess sorted

After coming back home, sameer rushes to his room only to find naina looking outside the window, lost in her own thoughts.
He tip toes towards her and encircles his arm around her waist, startling her. She places her hand on his arms and tilts backwards, her back collapsing his chest. Sameer asks about her health in a slow whisper to which she says that everything is fine. They remain like that for some minutes and then she asks him to freshen up while she would serve the dinner.
He finds her voice low but chose to ignore remembering about her health.

Naina was serving the dinner, while sameer continued to gaze her, her face looked pale and eyes had some questions, unknown to him.
After having completed half of his plate, sameer was not able to bear the silence anymore.

"naina kuch baat hai? Tum pareshan lag rahi ho."
Naina looked at him, her eyes controlling the tears that were threatening to fall anytime.She takes her seat beside him.

"sameer vo...".. Sameer holds her hand and caresses it softly, waiting for her to continue.
Naina relaxes a bit with this gesture and continues " muje pooja didi ki tension ho rahi hai.. Unka 9th month hai na" she tried to ask her answers in an indirect manner.

"ismei tension wali kya baat hai naina? Pooja didi ka yeh second time hai. Or agar itni tension hai toh tum kal hi unse milne chali jana", naina nodds while sameer relaxes a bit on knowing that the tension was not anyway related to her but seeing her face still having the same uneasiness he asked "kuch orr bi hai?".

Naina nodds in a negative, and to lighten the situation she talks about the time when the first baby arrived and how she used to pass her time playing with him. Sameer too recalls the time when he used to play with bittoo didi's daughter.
He laughs and tells about numerous incidents like when she peed on his shirt, pulled his hair and her nakhre on drinking milk.

Naina looks at him with an expression of adore, he likes babies, she thought.
".. Lekin bachhe tab hi cute lagte hai jab shaant ho orr hass re ho, ek baar rone lag jae toh bas shaitan bann jate hai muje toh rote hue bachhe bikul ni pasand"
Naina's smile instantly fades away
"lekin sameer chote bachhe toh rote hi hai na"
"han muje fir bi ni pasand" and he continues eating the food
"tumhe pta hai aaj mai mamaji ke saath kisi restaurant mei gya tha client se milne, wahan chote chote bachhe the, unhone humara baat karna mushkil kar diya tha , itna chilla re the matt hi poocho, pure restaurant mei shor machakar rakh diya tha," and he shakes his head on recalling the scene.

" matlab tumhe bachhe ni pasand? "she asks, her voice quivering.
Sameer doesn't respond , he was busy with his second love" food".. Cooked by his first love "naina"
She realises that sameer still have a bit of immaturity to handle these things. She was still not convinced with the conversation.

"sameer jab humare bachhe honge tab bi tum yahi kahoge?"
Sameer looks at her, the last bite still to reach his mouth.
"naina, ismei abi time hai.Jab time aega, tab sochenge, theek hai?" and he finishes with his dinner.
"TIME?.. Means he is not ready for it, he still needs time for these things",she thought .

In the room.
Naina changes into her night dress,and lies beside sameer who has dosed off due to the tiredness. She caresses his head and hugs him, encircling her one hand around his waist. Sameer smiles and turns towards her, taking her into his embrace. Naina cuddles into his chest and tries to put all the things in order, on what step to be taken.

The next day, in afternoon.
Naina rushes into her room and locks the door behind. She had gone to her pooja didi's house, to ask about her health. Out of nowhere, a topic arised in which pooja told naina that after the first baby they hardly got any time for themselves as the whole focus was now on the new member. After the second one, they dont know what would happen.

At night
Sameer enters the home. He takes his steps towards the room, the dark room.
He was confused, maybe naina has gone out. But he spots a figure sitting on the bed. It was hardly visible. He switches on the light and the sight that met him was enough to take his life away.
His life, his naina was sitting there gazing at something in her hand, her hair messed up, her eyes swollen and red, kajal smudged and cheeks having marks of tears. She hadnt even noticed his presence.
Sameer places his bag on the sofa and sits beside her, taking her free hand in his. Thats when naina acknowledged his presence and looked up at him.
Sameer gulped at seeing her condition, voice lost in his throat.
"naina..naina..kya hua.. Yeh kya haal banaya hua hai tumne..?" he asks worried, pulling a strand of her hair behind the ear.
Naina holds his hand "nahi sameer.. Muje kya hoga.. Thee... Theek hu mai.." she says, hiccups too making the way.
"tumne drink ki hai?" sameer asked with utter shock.And after scanning the room he finds a bottle of alcohol half emptied, on the table

He holds her by her shoulder "naina kya hai yeh sab..? Kal bi tum pareshan thi.. Or aaj yeh! Bolo tumhe kya pareshan kar rha hai..? Bolo naina.. Or yeh kya hai tumhare haath mei..?" he shakes her.. And then takes the thing from her hand at which her eyes were fixated.

It was a medicine, he flips it and reads the content, another shock making the way." pills for unwanted pregnancy" it read..
Sameer looks at her with disbelief "naina tum pregnant ho?"
No response comes from her, he shakes her by her shoulder "answer me dammit" he says angrily
Naina looks at him, her eyes pooled with tears, she nodds in a yes and starts crying, crying uncontrollably, he becomes concerned for her, and decides to forget about this thing for sometime and first take care of her this condition. He takes her into a hug, while she clutches him hard, he rubs her back to calm her down, but it was of no use. Her cries were getting louder and louder.
After some 10 minutes her cries were turning into sobs and then subsidising,when it became silent, he pulls back and finds her asleep.

The effect of alcohol has indeed taken a toll on her and her emotions.It was the first time she has done this and he promissed it to be the last also.

He carefully makes her lie down on the bed and covers her with the blanket.

After freshening up, he looks at the disturbed soul sleeping, with lines of tension still on her forehead.

He goes towards the window and looks at the stars, recalling all what happened since yesterday .Now he was able to place everything in order, the sudden fall in her health in morning, the talks about kids at night, her uneasiness on his remarks of kids naughtiness, questions about their own child, and then the main culprit of all these things, the magazine that he had found while finding his night dress.

He had understood what naina was thinking before doing this, where had the trust gone? He thought. He gazes at the medicine in his hand and throws it away in the dustbin.
Now he knows what he had to do. Naina had done what she wanted to, her overthinking was on the verge of destroying their trust and the sign of their love. He wont take this anymore. She had created a mess around herself regarding this matter, the matter that if was tackled beautifully and carefully could have turned this day into a memorable one instead of horrifying. And now he had to pull her out of this mess.

The next morning
Naina's head ached and she was having difficulty in opening her eyes that seemed heavier.
When she succeeded in getting up, resting her head on the headrest, she scanned the whole room. She was surprised to see blue and pink coloured baloons adorning the room and ribbons hanging from the ceiling. Scented roses were placed beautifully in a vase on the table. To her astonishment, there hung a poster of a baby right in front of her.

Before she could react, there came sameer with a tray of breakfast. He passes his signature smile and takes a seat beside her, placing the tray on the side table.

He hands her a glass of lemonade "sir dard ho rha hai na? Yeh lo pee lo, theek ho jaega.",she takes it without a word, waiting for him to yell at her and demand answers for whatever transpired the last night. Though the memory was a blur one but she remembers that he had come to know about her pregnancy and the pills.

As she takes a sip, sameer says "maine doctor ko phone kardiya hai, vo ek ghante mei akar tumhara checkup kar denge" she nodds

When she finishes her glass, he makes her eat the breakfast, without saying anything. The silence was breaking her. She feared his reactions. She knows what crime she was going to commit the last night under the influence of alcohol and the thoughts, processed due to over-thinking.

After finishing with it, he takes the plates and was about to move when naina holds his arm, stopping him. He looks at her and the next moment she was sobbing.
He takes a sigh and places the plates back.
"sameer yeh sab?" she asks, addressing the decorations.
"yeh sab cheezein vo hai jo tumhe kal karni chahiye thi, iss khushi ko mujse share karne ke liye.. Lekin tumne toh khud hi saaare faisle le liye naina.." he tried to keep his voice as soft as possible, he dont want to scare her but make her understand.
"sameer.. Mai vo.." he cuts her off
"mai vo kya naina..? Han? kal kya karne jaa rahi thi tum ? Humare..bachhe ko..." and he trailled off, tears making way in his own eyes at that thought while naina's sobbs increased and her hold on his arm tightened, her eyes not able to meet his due to the guilt.

"tumne kyu mujhe nahi btaya? Kisne tumhe haq diya itna bada kadam uthane ka?" He asked holding her shoulder. He knows that she needs to take rest at this moment but first he wanted to throw out every unnecessary thoughts that occupies her mind and which could become harmful in their new journey, the journey of becoming parents.

" sameer voo.. Vo mai darr gy thi sameer. Pooja didi ne kaha ki bachha hone ke karan unhe apne liye waqt hi nahi mila, unka pyaar kahi kho sa gya tha. Orr fir tumne abi abi yeh saari responsibilities sambhali hai, mai tumpar or kuch bi force ni karna chahti ti.. Muje laga bacche ke baare mei sunkar tum mere liye han kardoge, or vo mai ni chahti thi" she voiced her feelings with great difficulty, while sameer closes his eyes to absorb everything what she said.

"nainaaa..." he makes her face him, holding her face with both hands. "dekho meri taraf".. She nodds in a no "dekho maine kaha" he orders.
She looks into his dark brown orbs which reflected pain and hurt.

"tumne yeh socha bi kaise ki bachha hone se humara pyaar kam ho jaega? Tum meri responsibility nahi ho, meri zindagi ho naina.
Or rahi baat kaam ki, vo toh puri zindagi chalte rahega lekin yeh.." and he places his one hand on her tummy "yeh toh humari zindagi ko orr haseen banaega naina, yeh humara pyaar kam ni balki badhaega. Yeh humare pyaar ki nishani hai naina"
His look turns into a loving one now and he kisses her forehead.

"sameer tumne hi toh kal kaha tha ki jab time aega tab decide karenge" she asks, his words have relaxed her thoughts to a large extent yet she wanted his answer so that this conversation and these thoughts ends for ever.
"toh naina maine yeh thodi kaha tha ke vo time abi nahi aa sakta" he replies in a slow voice.
This is it! Naina just throws herself in his embrace while he encircles his arm around her protectively.

"naina please aage se aisa kuch matt karna. Tumhe kuch kal ho jata toh mai kya karta. Promisse karo, koi bi baat ho, tum mujse sab share karogi.khud se pareshan ni hogi or bekar ke khyaal toh bilkul matt ane dena apne dimaag mei" naina nodds against his chest "promisse and sorry! Muje humare pyaar par vishwas karna chahiye tha. Mai bi na.. Bohat sochti hu"

He breaks the hug and pinches her nose "vo toh hai... Tumhe pta hai, mai iss news se kitna khush hoon mai bayan ni kar sakta. I love you naina.. " naina gets emotional " i love you too sameer orr muje tumhara yeh surprise bohat acha laga" she places a soft sloppy kiss on his lips.

"vaise naina muje iss poster jaisa hi cute baby chahiye, bilkul meri tarah" says sameer
"han cute toh hai.. Ek minute.. Tumhari tarah matlab? Tum or cute?" she says sarcastically.
Sameer looks at her with narrow eyes and frowns"mai cute nahi hun? ".. Naina nodds in a negative.. Sameer makes a puppy face and naina pulls his cheeks" aww.. Tum cute nahi ho.. Super cute ho.. " sameer smiles and was about to get up when she stops him, he looks at her" thodi der yahi raho na please".. Sameer nodds.

Both sat there in each others arms,adorning the room and silently thanking god for giving them the biggest happiness of their life and also for giving them brains for taking the right decision at the right time. Mentally preparing themselves for the "En-route of pregnancy".

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Edited by tanya119 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice one, keep updating, waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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loved it...Thank you for updating
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Thanx for the early update
I loved it
I want to know what is more dear to sameer his first love or second one ? Lol
It was too cute
Poor Naina was is so much pressure .. Over thinking all the time .. Her doubt became more clear listening to his perception abkut kids ..
You very well scripted the entire scene .. Pooja didi experience also added more to her doubt ..
And then finally sameer got know about everything
Naina's state was seriously miserable
Loved this mature sameer ..
It was Beautiful
They are ready to take this responsibility
Looking forward to their journey of parenthood
Waiting for the next part

Love
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