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UnknownJhalli

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Woww dear awesome OS

It's like a dream come true as we wanted a Samaina scene on periods

Omg how maturely Sameer handled the situation I just loved that scene in which Sameer told her that in case of any emergency she can ask for his help

And how comfortably she asked for his help aww

Sameer Maheshwari is the best boyfriend ever 😳

Lots of love for you

Aishwarya

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Loved it !! Loved it !! Loved it!! I wish our CVs would give us something of this kind ...

I really liked it ...wonderfully written. 😳

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Marvelous...👏👏 The piece is one of your bests..

The topic is itself interesting and confidential.And the high point comes when Sameer becomes the confidante even when they were in the worst phase of their relation.

Sex education in school have been limited to 1-2 chapters which teachers tend to rush through.When teachers feel embarassed to talk about things such tabooed and sensitive ,then all sorts of misconceptions and miscommunications regarding the topic develop.

Another topic is about wet dreams in boys.There are many such issues in adulthood which neither parents,nor teachers address leading to various myths and notions,which is unhealthy for society at large.Ignorance has done none good and rape culture/sexual violence are worst manifestations of ignorance and avoidance.

This chapter is love and I am going to make it read to all my near and dear ones,irrespective of gender.This is a great read.😊

Keep coming with such beautiful stories.

With love--

Minu.

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@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: -vandy-
Loved it... Brilliantly written...
Had this been picturised on samaina... The whole thing would've looked more decent and understanding...

The school scenario was totally relatable... Been there done that...
Only difference is that never got a male hanky coz we were a girls school... But imagine the wonders a huge male hanky did...

I loved how sameer behaved as casually as possible...Without making naina uncomfortable

Please write more

Thank you dear 😊

Yes, I think Sameer's character has been presented as a more sensitive and open minded person. Definitely a little ahead of his time... and very practical too. He did gift her a Anti-lice shampoo and tried buying wax for her 😆

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@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: mystique123
Very Well written...
The way you have portrayed the understanding between Samaina speaks volumes.

And lot of love for choosing this topic for the OS. 👏👏👏

Thanks dear! I am so pleased that you enjoy both the topic and the story so much 😊

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@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Komalp1391
Awesome loved it
Sameer behaved so normally loved it
Naina trusted him so much
It was too good
Write more please

Congratulations for goldie dear

Thanks for both your comments and congrats 😊

I think though we are all affected a lot by the times and society that we live in, our individual personalities and perspectives go a long way in defining our behaviour. And then Samaina do share a very special bond!

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@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Azraa01
This would have been much better pictured on Samaina than Shefjun..
Loved how you portrayed this.

Thanks dear! So glad you liked this OS. I wrote it inspired by so many members here wishing it was a topic brought up between Samaina. 😊

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MeenAkshi Kalra

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Brilliant yrr.. I wanted someone to write a samaina story on this topic n u wrote it beautifully.. nxt tym pm me whenever u write..

M just confuse about title..Wat is it??

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

May!! I adored this piece. You are a master in bringing out the emotions in a story! I always feel such a deep connect to the characters in your tale. The way you brought the topic out post the bet revelation, Sameer pacing near the girls' loo, his prompt handkerchief...n Naina used it too...n then Sameer's realization what exactly had happened to Naina thru the ink test on sanitary napkins...marvellous! And his gesture the next day was extremely sweet. Agar tumhe kabhi bhi kisi cheez ki zarurat ho to main pass ki medical shop se le aaunga. And Naina trusting him enough to remind him that she did need it now. It was an emergency for her. And moreover he was the first and only male with which she shared this info. And Sameer was so understanding...koi dawai le aaun? Pain hota hai maine padha tha. Nai mujhe zyada taqleef nai hoti. She does trust him now. And wo kya bolna hai dukandaar ko...his hesitation wasn't because he felt awkward to go n buy it...anything for Naina...but poor guy hasn't had a female around his life...exactly kya bolna hai dukaandar ko...

And of course, my not-so-innocent mind kicked in here at the last line...there are many more things to share Naina darling! Haha...I almost imagined Sameer at a chemist's shop, asking for you know what!

But you've portrayed the scenario really convincingly...me being a 90s kid could relate to the hesitation bit here...it was a taboo for us!

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@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: mehraan
Ok i had been avoiding all the ffs /OS In the forum for a month😆..bit ur title intrigued me...n witout scanning further ahead what it could be about...Great i read it!!...n Voila i loved it!!
When tis scene was on Shefjun...didnt liked a bit n was wondering how it wud had been on Samaina...Thanku for writing it so brilliantly...cud very well relate to the awkwardness n then the trust she has on him...The connection with past n present was well bought in...n lovely how Naina approached him...despite of the inhibitions ..she had that immense faith n trust on him !! n Sam being so casual just not to mke her uncomfortable takes my heart away!!!..i want to read further ..like Sams thoughts on this matter as how he felt about her coming forth to take his help n what happen next...like tgey could talk about it!!

Thanks Meher! 😊

So pleased that the title was able to grab and hold your attention! Actually I was not able to come up with a satisfactory title while writing the OS. It kept playing on the back of my mind.. as it had to be something catchy. Thought of this just before posting!

Yes, I wanted to bring out the contracting feelings and comfort level of Naina from the past to the present. I believe the different reactions would be a combination of both age/ maturity and the changed dynamics of their relationship. And Sameer is definitely mature for his age, probably to do with living on his own in the hostel since a very young age.

I hadn't thought about writing a 2nd part and covering more of their conversations/thoughts on this. But, will have I think and see if I can come up with something 😳

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