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_shweta98

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Loved it!

Keep writing...

Always waiting for more of your works!!

Thank you soo much for the PM

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MeenAkshi Kalra

@dreamyp

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Dear

Phle to for title..It was so cute..

U r sooo busy still u wrote the os..Hats off.. very well written.. a proper bike ride jo shyd serial me nh milegi..

Tynakewww..

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Azraa

@Azraa01

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

This was soo well penned. Loved Sameers confession and how he convinced Naina to skip class and go on a date.

Naina also took her revenge in a loving manner by wrapping her hands around his waist and shocking him.

Very cute.

Thank you for the pm.

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Radkam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: bushraurooj
wow! I want to see this exact scene in the show tooo... loved how you closed the open loops... Sam's confession was so sweet... and his urge to hold her hands and kids them, so natural...

hahaha thanx! Guess v t nt gonna get exact same in the show, but deco some progress... guess it was nice today, hv to watch it yet!

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Radkam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: dreamyp
Dear
Phle to for title..It was so cute..
U r sooo busy still u wrote the os..Hats off.. very well written.. a proper bike ride jo shyd serial me nh milegi..
Tynakewww..

CVs love to spoil all their cute moments under the pretense of "hamari life mein kabhi kych seedha hua hi nahi hai so I modify it as I wd want to c it...creative liberty 😉