Sameer-Naina SS- Unanticipated Moves (Part-10 Updated)PG-44 - Page 9

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Minu darling...thank you so much for the dedication and wishes. Love you dear 🤗
No update could justify the story title as much as this one did. I am really concerned about how would Naina and Sameer embrace this unanticipated move.

Sameer's love reminds me of : How beautiful is to find a heart that loves you, without asking you for anything,but to be okay. The sole aim of his existence is Naina's happiness. ⭐️

Naina has immense faith in his capabilities and has always been instrumental in fetching him the appreciation he deserved. Be it during the night in Mt.Abu: a casual gathering but it paved the way to let the people around them recognize his talent or the current situation, where in not only the entire college but the families had also gathered. The stage was perfect, Naina became the mere reason and Sameer delivered a stellar performance all for their love, to not let Naina down, to not let the twinkle in her eyes fade away. True Love is when the other person's happiness becomes your happiness:the best definition for Sameer and Naina's love.

I loved the definition for Poonam Bhabhi, the underrated character but the strong pillar of support and love for Sameer. Such a cute bond.❤️

Now the unanticipated sequence, how beautifully you have described it, such minute detailing of Naina fidgeting her fingers, the files ,the restlessness of the people, how the pictures were attached and the pictures itself.The description was bang on that I could feel the tremor in them, the reactions of their families and the embarrassment.I read through the update from here on with a heavy heart. It hurts to see your favorite couple in a mess, that too two individuals who are meant to be together being made mere pawns by the selfish act of someone. The most beautiful night of their life have turned into nightmare and I can fathom they must be just seeing demons dancing around them.

What has happened cannot be reversed, but I really want Sameer to mend all the broken relationships and I have blind trust on him. I want him to use his Sherlock Holmes brain once again and connect the dots and identify the one with the wicked smile behind the curtains.It could be Ved, it could be Priyank, or Kartik .But I wanna go with the Wolf in Sheep's Disguise and I strongly vouch for Ved because he is that character who needs to be explored more and more. I am damn sure the villain would also be unanticipated,knowing the master story teller you are 😊

As the saying goes, it is the unanticipated that changes lives and When you want something, whole world conspires to help you to achieve it...may be this is destiny's way to seal their relationship. ⭐️

Eager to read what transpires next, wanna know how Sameer and Naina will tackle this unexpected twist and how they are gonna deal with the unanticipated villain in their lives.

Love and Love only 🤗
Edited by mystique123 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#82
Minu di! 🤗
Thank you so much for the dedication and the wishes and it does mean a lot as this is one of my favourite stories in here. ❤️

I remembered the same, the antakshari night in Mount Abu where Naina twisted the opportunity to showcase Sameer's poetic talent that he kept hidden.
There's a quote called if opportunity doesn't knock, build a door...Naina built the door this time for Sameer to showcase his speech skills and he aced it and made Naina proud.

When Sameer's stance falters, I like how Naina's face immediately comes to his mind and regains confidence, he wants to do it for Naina and she is way where he is developing his own personality, discovering himself.
I love their love where they both inspire each other to progress in life more and push each others limitations that ultimately leads way to success. ⭐️

The mention of Poonam Bhabi. Truly beauty with brains and many fail to realise it, liked how you appreciated her.

Aah, they are paying price for the prize. It started so good and went downhill, this could be anyone's worst nightmare, pictures that show their personal moment so publicly and leave thier family members head hanging in shame, I wouldn't have minded if someone found out about them and the situation transpired that way but with these pictures, it's another level of humiliation. An insult to their love which cannot be accepted. My heart aches for them especially when Naina left, crying without a single word.

Who could have done this cheap act? Kartik surely first in the suspects as he has many reasons, he could have done this to distract Sameer so he keeps the secret, a secret only. Or else, Priyank or Sunaina, I don't know why the latter's name came into my mind but no one's escaping my list. And you know, surprisingly Ved was the first name that came into my mind, he seemed like a show off yet a good hearted boy but he had said he was jealous of Naina Agarwal. Like you mentioned in the chapter, the deadliest hate comes from the deepest desires.

You are clearly justifying the story's name and satisfying me.
Eagerly waiting for the next. 😃
Edited by Mayashika - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#83
Omg What's happening
Now what will do Sameer & Naina??
Ab toh family ko ptta chl gya
So scary update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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oh god ye kya tha?? Aisi batein family ko pata chale to koi Kya kare? what will naina do now? please update soon...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#85
Minu 🤗
Sherlock Maheswari is back...loved it ⭐️

Coming to the update: It was heart wrenching to see the agony and pain in Naina: the pain of humiliating her chacha-chachi, the people who meant the world to her, the pain of being ridiculed by Prinicpal, the pain to fathom the future when Taiji, Tauji and her father will learn about the incident and her suspension, it hurt to see chachiji assuming herself responsible for it, it does break our heart to know our loved ones are offended by us and Naina writhes in pangs of guilt.😭Even in the chaos, I am deeply moved by Chachiji's gesture to safeguard Naina ,Sameer's reaction to Mami's jibes.Never ever could he hear someone point a finger at his love and Poonam Bhabhi's care for Sameer.❤️

I love the analytical Sameer, his thought process, the way he tries to assess the situation and people and to figure out the probable conclusion ie, I admire you for penning down such awesome analysis. It is your thoughts that I read as Sameer's, its your reasoning that makes Sameer Sherlock , way to go my love 👏👏
This guy Ved is so spooky, I always get negative vibes whenever I read about him😕. But this time I consider him approaching Sameer for the photograph as a blessing. I assume this would be the turning point that will help Sameer to grab the real culprit.

I ran along with Sameer to college, I wandered along with him searching for clues, I visualized the night when they were together, I could feel the warmth of their love and when Sameer got those beer cans my heart erupted in joy, I was there behind him when he searched for his shirt, when he pulled out the tab but I was not fortunate enough to read his mind...I could not Minu...and thats why Hats off to you for this wonderful piece my love.🤗

Eagerly waiting for the next.❤️
Edited by mystique123 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#86
Oh god so who is the culprit? I can't wait for next update.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Minu, peheli bar mujhe Sunaina ko dekh Kar acha laga! You have accomplished the impossible 😉

Vikas ka character acha laga.. whatever he did to start with teaming up with Kartik, at least he helped undo part of the damage. But sadly not the really important part 😭

Naina ke mann mein Kuch alag hi chal raha hai.. she seems disillusioned with Sameer.. and disappointed. I have some guesses.. but will wait for you to reveal!

So good to see that kartik is paying a price for his cheap thinking here.

Love, May
Edited by SixteenAgain - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#88
Minu ek gaana yaad aagya... Jag ghumeya thaare jaisa na koi 😆
I was saying culprit was karthik but ghuma diya mujhko😆 completely UM ... But one thing which I loved in this SS was you potrayed Sunaina in good light , soft hearted but most importantly good intentioned girl ...i was so happy to read how she helped Sam reach his goal along with Vilas munna and Pandit ... You are good at writing suspense genre. ...And so Sameer Sherlock Maheshari will soon turn to Sameer devdas Maheshwari 😆 aakhir inki paro ne apne rang dikhane start kr diye hai ... 😉 ...eagerly waiting for the next part
Edited by suhaaniladki - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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So my guess was right. It is kartik 😡 Must say very well planned. But he forgot truth can't be hidden. Sameer calmly handled the situation. Now kartik will get his punishment. 👏 But what happened to Naina. Is she thinking to break up? 😭 She's thinking they have done something wrong 😭 Ek problem gayi toh dusri aagayi. Loved this part 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#90
Oh God so much was there in this update...and Naina what had happened to her yr ...pls disclose this mystry in no time...huh as waiting for the next update would be very difficult...so pls pls update soon...loved this one🤗

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