Sameer-Naina SS- Unanticipated Moves (Part-10 Updated)PG-44

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@SixteenAgain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Fun start Minu! It's a lovely light hearted read. Sameer ko padhai karta dekhna and scoring good marks are new things for us viewers or readers 😃
Naina has figured out what carrot to use with him... now let's see how he does the vasuli and he will not be satisfied with just the carrot but will want carrot ka halwa !!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Brains meet

This kind of story i always wanted to read..

Naina ordering him to fill form else she will fill

Naina luring sameer for studying like a small kid😆

Sameer is studying coz of naina😆

And then i loved u kept it real to score 76.4 near the boundary rather than making him topper by 99.9 percent

Sameer ab kya krega naina k saath i mean ab uska prize kya hoga😉

Update soon

Hope cvs hire u for their episodes rather than wasting 3 weeks on mr and miss fresher and dancing here and there they would hve shown some sensible content reagarding studies also

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: aman.bindra
Very very cute update Minu!!
Loved the way Naina threatened/incentivized Sameer to study hard. It will be fun to to see Sameer's style of breaking the news to Naina!!

Loved the last line playing the games with no rules. Nice touch! 😳😆

Please PM me whenever you update next!

Thanks Aman for the appreciation.😃 It will be more fun now..Glad you liked it.Sure would PM you.

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Prizi
lovely update

Thanks dear.😃

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: A.Green
First of all please naina ke bhi le aana 76% se zyada! After CVs keep pushing her down, I'm too scared for her. Don't go their way😆😆
I loved the story! It was so cute, looking forward for the next parts😳

Btw all the best for your entrance exams! 🤗
I particularly liked their phone conversation, flying kiss milegi, usse bhi bahut zyada damnn☺️
And the way Naina was behaving all safari suit style🤣
Loved the bonding of the gang and Swati and Preeti teasing Samaina

Update soon and thanks a lot for the pm!
Much love
Aayushi ⭐️

Thanks Aayushi for the appreciation.😃 You have a lovely name.Ahh CVs and me are now different poles.So you need not worry.

Thanks for the wishes.Phone calls are my fav too.Apni baap pe akhri beti jayegi na.😉😆 GLad you loved it so much.

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MSK04

@MSK04

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Minu... I read this in the flight on my way back... 😃

Fabulous one... 👏👏

Are you going to make this a rom-com? The dialogues are kinda giving me those vibes...

The beginning in itself is awesome... College me kahan se assembly aa gaya... 😆😆 SMP and their antics... Competition ke baare me dur dur tak nai soch sakte the... But why fear when Naina is near... Loved the way she threatened Sameer and he bowed down... Hubby goals all the way...!

Aww the cold drink kiss...It raises temperatures, it does... Be it in the show or in your story. Leaves us in anticipation of what's going to come. ☺️

The phone convo was lit... Samaina's phone conversations are always a treat and it was no less here... The way she motivates him, the way he is ready to do everything for her... and that ending... flying kiss se bhi zyada kuch... Aww... Sameer to padhega hi na... kahan jayega aise promise ke baad... She dangled the perfect carrot... I hope he gets to bite into it... 😳

Sameer scored...!! And now he wants to tell her in his own way... Two are playing the game... and I am sure I am going to love it, rules or no rules... because love is a game both can play and both can win... 😃

Great start sweetheart...!! 🤗

Eager to read more...!

All the best for your entrance exams and hope you find time to update this soon...! 😊

Love,

Mou

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
Niceee !! Loved it Minu..college romance any day is a pleasure to read . I loved the way you started the story...the way you closed this chapter..makes me wonder if things would be as easy as it seems. Will there be road blocks?? hmmm...eagerly waiting for the next update..

Thank you Di for appreciation.Things are not easy anytime.Hope you enjoy the ride.😳

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki
Naina ziddhi aggarwal is just so cute kitne haq se sameer k liye she does everything ... Lovely update .. thanks for the pm ... Do update soon

Thanks dear for the appreciation.

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Samainadeewani
It was such s cute update
Naina safari suit pe gai hai lol
My favorite part was " eye to eye lip to lip "
This line .. Uff
Naina is giving him bribe .. So that he study well for the exams
This girl is surely out of Sameer's reach
And this boy will work hard for his prize
Eagerly waiting for Sameer's prize

Love
Laalchi reader

Thank you dear for the appreciation.😃 Both are not easy for each other.😉

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 7 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: dreamyp
Kya yrr I wanted to comment first high
Koi nh..Nxt tym sahi..
It was waohhh update yrr.. naina ke bolder moves pe to me fida hu..Flying kiss se jyada kya hoga hihihi
To ab samaina jaege bahar akele..Kuch kuch to hoga ya bhot kuch.. but sameer kaise btayega apni maina ko ummm waiting eagerly fr next part..
Love..

Koi baat nahin. next time kar lena.😳 Thank you for appreciation.Glad you loved it.Would update soon.