Sameer-Naina SS- Unanticipated Moves (Part-10 Updated)PG-44 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow good one dear..
Please update soon ..
Give s longer update next time
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
Excellent start Minu.
Reminds me of the head boy preparation days.
Naina clearly knows which points she needs to press to make Sameer study. Continue soon.

Best of luck for your exams.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23
Very very cute update Minu!!
Loved the way Naina threatened/incentivized Sameer to study hard. It will be fun to to see Sameer's style of breaking the news to Naina!!

Loved the last line playing the games with no rules. Nice touch! 😳😆

Please PM me whenever you update next!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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First of all please naina ke bhi le aana 76% se zyada! After CVs keep pushing her down, I'm too scared for her. Don't go their way😆😆
I loved the story! It was so cute, looking forward for the next parts😳

Btw all the best for your entrance exams! 🤗
I particularly liked their phone conversation, flying kiss milegi, usse bhi bahut zyada damnn☺️
And the way Naina was behaving all safari suit style🤣
Loved the bonding of the gang and Swati and Preeti teasing Samaina

Update soon and thanks a lot for the pm!
Much love
Aayushi ⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
Niceee !! Loved it Minu..college romance any day is a pleasure to read . I loved the way you started the story...the way you closed this chapter..makes me wonder if things would be as easy as it seems. Will there be road blocks?? hmmm...eagerly waiting for the next update..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: NikiAries

Minu loved the different take. Tumhara sense of humor by god😆 It was fun to see the teasing banter between the two. After a long time SS ki reentry hui dialogues mein hi sahi. I had forgotten his famous thapads and Sam😉

Finally koi toh brains ke bare mein soch raha hai. I sometimes (not always!) get bored with all the jealousy, mushy romance, and dancing...too much overdose. Absolutely pleased at you showed our Sam can do other things than jugad and looking good with girls drooling over him😃

Looking forward to see how he conveys the message to Naina, some fun on the way😆


Thanks Neha for appreciating the piece 😃and can see through your kind sweet puns 😉 Hum to sirf aur sirf brains ke baare mein sochte hein..😆 Its time to break the monotony and present something different.The concept kept me awake till mid of night and I got really excited to pen it down.Hope this keeps upto your expectations and interest.
Fun and not so fun definitely on way.😉


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Posted: 7 years ago
#27
Minu... I read this in the flight on my way back... 😃
Fabulous one... 👏👏
Are you going to make this a rom-com? The dialogues are kinda giving me those vibes...

The beginning in itself is awesome... College me kahan se assembly aa gaya... 😆😆 SMP and their antics... Competition ke baare me dur dur tak nai soch sakte the... But why fear when Naina is near... Loved the way she threatened Sameer and he bowed down... Hubby goals all the way...!

Aww the cold drink kiss...It raises temperatures, it does... Be it in the show or in your story. Leaves us in anticipation of what's going to come. ☺️

The phone convo was lit... Samaina's phone conversations are always a treat and it was no less here... The way she motivates him, the way he is ready to do everything for her... and that ending... flying kiss se bhi zyada kuch... Aww... Sameer to padhega hi na... kahan jayega aise promise ke baad... She dangled the perfect carrot... I hope he gets to bite into it... 😳

Sameer scored...!! And now he wants to tell her in his own way... Two are playing the game... and I am sure I am going to love it, rules or no rules... because love is a game both can play and both can win... 😃

Great start sweetheart...!! 🤗
Eager to read more...!
All the best for your entrance exams and hope you find time to update this soon...! 😊

Love,
Mou
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Mayashika

The first chapter has perked up my curiosity more than before...this was a lovely update!

This Romeo and Juliet quite often forget where they are and start their romance, not that I mind😉
Haha, Naina with her father's attitude is very interesting as much as it's dangerous...
Dayumn, that phone call was my favourite part...Naina's being a tease but she needs to think about the consequences too as they are gonna be together in Nagpur😉
So, Sameer got the marks what he wanted it seems..
Can't wait for the next!
All the best for your entrance exams and hope you are fine now😳

Thanks Shreya for the appreciation.Glad you loved it.Actually while they are romancing no one should mind.😉😆
Thanks for the wishes.and yeah fine now.😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Kangana_11

Minu as always it was fun to read your writing one can never get bore reading your one fan fuction again and again I still rememeber I have read confusing nightmares two times (I think that was the only name of the ff in which sameer transformed to Johny liver🤔) it was very funny I was laughing like a maniac ..


Thank you dear for loving that story so much..😃

When I read the teaser of unanticipated moves I was so much waiting for your 1st part the thing which attracted me the most in teaser was eyes to eyes lips to lips😆

Ek baat bataun tumne bhi B.COM kiya hai costing, job productions ..ne wah ! Tum toh chupirustum nikli 😆

I am M.A. in English literature.Commerce ke saath dur dur tak koi rishta nahin.Bas iss story ke liye thodi research kar li.😳

It is always fun to see a bold and dary naina how naina blackmailed samundit
Rakesh ki aatma and all ..waise kitna maza aata hai naina jab bhi sameer ko pyaar vaali daant deti hai ..haaye

And principal ki speech over hona was a relief to samundit and excitement to naina

Sameer bhi sameer hai us phone convo ke baad finally 76% se bhi zyada 76.4% le aaya ..and now I am wondering phir hum dono I mean phir yeh dono??😆

Phir yeh dono kya...?😉

Leaving fb in question mark jaise tumne humme most awaited moment mein chod diya

(Sorry for typos)

Regards
Shagun

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Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

My my! The last lines Minu...iraada kya hai...ab Sameer is laying down the rules of the game...to Naina ne Sameer se padhai karwa hi li...safari suit ka mention haha...I was imagining Sameer stooping to kiss Naina n Tayyab Ali yelling...baalon ki dukaan lol! N Preeti aur Swati ki lines...hum bhi hain yahan pe...hum log to yahin the...tum dono hi kahin kho gaye the hehe...so hilarious n ekdum lag raha hai show ke jaisa...loved it Minu...all the best for your entrance dear...

Love
Sur

Irrada bilkul ssaf aur nek hai..😉😆 I knew you could imagine so well.😉 Glad you loved the lines.Thank you darling for appreciating and loving it.

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