Sameer-Naina SS- Unanticipated Moves (Part-10 Updated)PG-44 - Page 25

Originally posted by: Hitanshivyas

Are are ho kya raha hai confusion confusion confusion... Sunaina ko pyar ho gaya wahh .. so sameer jasoos ko abhi our jasoosi karni padegi hmm interesting please update soon and thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: AlishaSyed

Oh my God .. this story so interesting and every part is so good

What actually is happening .. hayyee these suspenses will kill me .. a a eagerly waiting for next part

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Wow !! now this is a surprise...Swathi also involved...did Sunaina give wrong time table to Swathi?? Yaar Minu , please update the next chapter soon...please hamien zyadha tadpana math... 😳 Eagerly waiting for your next update.

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

Yeh kya ho rha hai bhaiya yeh kya ho rha hai 😆 ... With each update suspense is increasing ... Pls update soon dear

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

This update reminded me of those Nancy Drew and Hardy Boys books that I used to read in school a lot!!! Sameer is completely immersed in his Dectective avatar :)

Sunaina was so sweet and innocent is this chapter.. she reminded Sameer and the readers of Naina in her prem deewani mode!

And that kiss related conversation! Yes, it should be only a way of expressing a deep emotion. Perfect BF!!

Loved it Minu!

Originally posted by: KhwabonKiRani

Awesome update

Originally posted by: shravyarao

Minu, why was the a lil bit short than all the previous ones?

Maybe it's me who is not getting enough of the story 😆

Loving the way the story is shaping up yaar, i seriously thank you for not making sunaina fall for sameer here, thank you, thank you so much. i kinda got fed with everybody falling for sameer in the college 😆the seniors giving flying kisses made me puke🤢 in the show, but thats just me wanting sameer only for naina 😆.

This story is giving me thriller vibes with all the sameer jasoos kaam he is hell bent on doing, i don't know why i end laughing when he goes into questioning mode. You are giving such unexpected twists dear, can't really even guess where the next one goes. It's got me hooked up to ur story.

Awesome one Minu!! Keep coming up with more and please longer ones de do na!!

Thanks for the PM love.😳

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Minu...pehle to sau baar sorry! Itni late comment kar rahi hun...

Part 4 and 5: Yaar...First of all, I must applaud you for bringing out the suspense in this story...Initially I thought, it was more of a romantic getaway pe story on Samaina...but it wasn't. At every stage, you've proved your readers wrong n kept them guessing as to the next line of plot. Me being a huge fan of crime and suspense, was hooked onto this one. That reminds me- what happened to Keshav's murder story? Do you not have plans to continue it?

Again coming back to this one, Sameer ka Detective Byomkesh Bakshi avatar...haaye I love it. The changed behaviours of Naina, Swati, Sunaina, Kartik, Priyank and trying to decipher what exactly happened at the Brains Meet n Sameer trying to decode all was a treat to read. Why would his Naina lie to him? What has happened to Swati? How did the best buddies Priyank n Kartik end up fighting? Why would Kartik want to help Naina? And of course, the twist with the videshi angrez. The humour in this story is another of it's plus points. You are quite good at it Minu. You should explore that area more. Videshi angez vs. desi angrez convo was a treat to read. I could so imagine Mundit's reaction. And yahan, Sunaina ne ek hafte mein kiss bhi kar liya...n Samaina ab tak atke hain! Kya hoga in dono ka haha! But I'm very curious about the guy Sunaina has fallen for...doesn't seem one bit right to me!

A wonderful job Minu!

I'm eager for the next one now!

Lots of love

Sur

Originally posted by: bushraurooj

very interesting story, hope ke jasoos sameer ki jasoosi safal ho...

You write very well, thanks for the PM...