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Posted: 7 years ago
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Okay I have one more.. Sameer's ex girlfriend bumped into him when they are together may be on a date..😉 his ex trying to be chipku with him..he doesn't want but still can't help and when her ex returns he faces naina's wrath..and pacifying her (16+/ or may be ahem ahem)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Mounmita,
It's a great idea especially cuz your writing is amazing!

I have an idea you could write on. Naina and Sameer are in the class and he is bothering her. And JBR takes their name to leave class together and Naina says but sir... but Sameer takes her outside and while standing outside they are romancing... something like that... could be funny ...
thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Great thread mou
My ideas:
Romance during holi... Both of them applying color to each other sensuously😳

Another one is jealous sam... It should not be karthik... Some hot guy enters college... Sam ke takkar ka... And he falls for naina instanly... Trying ways to get close to her etc... This guy should be good at studies too... So that naina and him can be chosen to participate together some quiz or debate competition. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: lakku19

I would like to read something on college trip like all of them going by train to some place , and having some private moment in between the trip
.Naina comes to Sameer home early morning to surprise him and Sammer is not aware and taking bath..
Sameer is unwell and alone at home and Naina taking care of him bunking class
Naina and Sameer first car drive..
Both Naina and Sameer appointed as class representatives and organising an event
Naina helping Sameer in studies at college
Sameer and Naina having ice cream date in rain..
Let me think of more ideas


Noted... Thank you for the ideas... 😳

There are some other ideas for trip as well, so I might combine these in one story. Let me see what I can do.

Ah... Ice cream date in rain?? 😕 Baarish me chai, corn, pakode to suna tha.. ice cream? really?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: shravyarao


Hi moumita, my suggestion is, as i know you are the queen in writing romance scenes, and i love love love reading them.

I want you to write something which is very sensuous whatever the sequence maybe, like rain, festives in colg, anything for that matter.

But the passion should be in the eyes, it should be passionate and very sensuous man. I don't know how or if u would write it. But i really really wanted to read something like this. Where eyes do the talking, and u feel what the other is thinking in your gut, and there is no other option but to melt.. The desire in their eyes should speak volumes, but no touching directly my dear,i think this one goes well with rain seq along with naina in a saree

I seriously seriously want someone to write this.

And

We can go with something like this scene in the song sequence of maine pyaar kiya, where salman n bhagyasree kiss indirectly on the glass door. Even the whole song sequence would be awesome, we can try this with sam climbing the balcony to naina's room with the help of munna and pandit, there you can create some comedy as well.

These two, pretty please mou!! 😳


Nice ideas Sharavya...😃

Quick question - I understand eye romance and write about it of course... But do you really want the OS to be bereft of touch scene? I mean we are talking about college romance... fir bhi no touch at all? Or pehle eye romance and then some touchy scene?

For the second scenario, I have never written a song sequence, but will surely try my best...

Thank you for the suggestions..! 😳
And dear... you are really good at writing passionate scenes too... your OS stories are proof of that... Let me know if you want to pick up some other ideas from this thread to write a story... 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

Sameer Vs Kartik in college elections or bike race.. And obviously Naina-Sunaina supporting their respective guys

How badly I want Sameer Kartik ka face-off..kartik k rich brat thobde ka kuch fayda ho


Full on tashan mode you want ha... 😉
Alright... idea noted...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: 9211

I'm loving this thread already. All of the ideas are great!!

I'll have one that is sameer naina travelling in mumbai local for any reason together and sameer is like covering and protecting her types with some subtle romance😳


Hahaaa... You want to recreate the Valentine IV... 😆
Well... That IV was fab... and so is this idea... noted, will see what I can write... 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

Inki commerce stream h na.. Warna we would've got something based on biology classes😆


Aww... cmon Anjali... Don't you know how romantic marketing subject can be??
I am a business management student... I know it... 😉

Let me see if I can cook something up!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: pixie_dust

Hi Mou,

I have always been a silent reader but have thoroughly enjoyed every bit of your writing
You are such a gem

My suggestions would be :
1.Sam teasing Naina about letter kiss and flying kiss
2. Secret hand holding in on going class (leg romance would also do


Hey dear... Thanks for the suggestions...!!
I am glad to know you love my stories... Just a request, just like you have broken your silence here, please do so whenever you read any stories as well... All the writers put in a lot of effort, don't step back from motivating them... 😳

I have noted your ideas, will see how I can incorporate them. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niakhush

I just love dis thread ...n after seeing the ideas...n knowing u are going to pen it down...m much more excited!!!

Who needs any activity in forum...when v hv such a big activity to get us back to no 1!!!

Ok so now my idea!!!

My ideas are always gang based...so here it is 1st year of college and there is a music competition to b held...1st year is to perform and they form a music band. ...which consist of the whole gang!!! Hardrock music band or something!!!

And in this u cn hv many things as per ur wish like naina n Preeti are the part of team n chup chup ke Ghar se Jana n all!!!

N fir 18+ chaiye to late night music practice!!! Now that is upto u!!!!

Ise bhaut ideas milenge...will update whenever I get new idea!!!!


Hahaha... Thanks Nia...glad that I came up with this thread... I just thought rather than asking people individually about ideas and wishes, it would be better to create a thread so everyone can contribute.. 😃

Love you idea... though I will be honest I have never written anything related to music or songs, but will do my best to incorporate this... That chup chup ke ghar se nikalna would be hilarious, especially considering Taiji... 😆

Cheers!

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