Sameer-Naina OS: Forever - Page 4

Originally posted by: sweetylina

Writing it in Odia.

Kan lekhichu?

BIL kan katha bhabhuthilu?

First part ta to story.

Emotional thila..Mun pura numb padijaitili.

Kan heichi mo baby ra.Emti kain lekhilu?

Aau candle part..Mora mane achi eita kouthi thila..

But jaha bi hau..It was good.

Gharaku aa.Bahut heigala.

Love always and forever

❤️

Originally posted by: Radhika03

Woow...wooww...wooww...Lovely OS Minu...😳

Loved it...how after lot of convincing finally Naina give up...and how mundit make Sameer feel the pain Naina going through coz of his jinxed soul mood...Beautifully written 😳

Originally posted by: lakku19

Wow ..loved it so much minu ..
Awesome one ..

Originally posted by: sweetylina

Writing it in Odia.

Kan lekhichu?

BIL kan katha bhabhuthilu?

First part ta to story.

Emotional thila..Mun pura numb padijaitili.

Kan heichi mo baby ra.Emti kain lekhilu?

Aau candle part..Mora mane achi eita kouthi thila..

But jaha bi hau..It was good.

Gharaku aa.Bahut heigala.

Love always and forever

❤️

Originally posted by: Anjali33

First part ta taro story!! Sata Re??

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Hospital part is me..😆

Originally posted by: Mayashika

What's better than to start with a Kumar Sanu song...

How aesthetically you have described Naina's anguish...Tears welled up in my eyes...How can you write so beautifully with such knowledge!?

Life teaches..

When you rest your head on a pillow and tears start flowing subconsciously...that's when you know you're really broken...

Thats the lowest point...

When two people are in a relationship, communication is very necessary. That's what Sameer lacked to know and in the process both of them got hurt.

My respect and love has increased ten times more for Munna, Pandit, Swati and Preeti due to how beautifully they play their role as friends/sister. They are literally a blessing in Samaina's life. Friendship goals.

Glad you loved them and connected to them so well...

I absolutely loved how MunDit knocked sense into Sameer's manipulated mind. He deserved it completely.

The last part was sheer beauty...

I felt, the candle as a gift had a symbolic reference towards the story.

I don't know how to put in words...There was darkness everywhere in their life and this candle when lit would take away it and bring a ray of light to their life. Just like how your one shot ended, them reuniting and bringing back light and happiness in each other's life...

Whenever Samaina wanted to feel each other's pain by causing themselves harm, they have usen wax...did you use it purposefully in the story? If yes, good move Minu di..

The candle had so many symbolism..also if you have noticed then its rainbow in colour.The light is there like the beautiful rainbow after rains of pain.

All of us are smitten by the concept of 'forever'. But the fact is that 'Change is Constant'. You never know what happens next. So its better to confess what you feel that day, that moment.

Exactly!

They finally satisfied their carnal urges. They kissed and sealed their relationship into something more beautiful...

Physical gratification is also an important sometimes.Sometimes words don't materialize.

Love you!

Love You.🤗