Samaina SS : 'Suhana Safar' (*Updated*; Epilogue on Page 85) - Page 47

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Posted: 6 years ago
Thank you so much for the nice story
Loved each update
Read in one go
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Posted: 6 years ago
Finally after long wiat...wow superb chapter
Waiting for marriage track.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Superb update, loved the surprise.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update dear , Dil le lo 😳
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This was really beautiful
loved it
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Lovely update Tashu
The surprise by Naina's sasural was too sweet.
Eagerly waiting for next part
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Aaisha Di,
This story is one of my personal favorites.You will know why if you have had time to go through my dedication and thank you post...Pehli baar iska review likh rahi hun.I am sure thoda lamba hoga cause ab tak ki kahani ke bare mein likhna chahti hun.Hope aap bura nahi manegi.But request hai ki puri padhna.Yeh note update 1-10 ke liye hai...Gyarwa ke liye alag hoga.Normally English use karti hun par aapke dialogues ke asar se aaj pehli baar Hindi mein attempt kar rahi hun.Bhul chuk maaf ho.Aapke jitna acha toh nahi paar aapki iss pyari si story ke liye sabse pehle dil mein yehi khayal aaya...

Teri yeh saadgi bhare afsaane dil ko chhun gayi...
Tu sada yunhi muskurahatein bikherti rahe yehi dua rahegi...

Di,Is story ko agar ek alfaz mein describe karna ho toh I would say "Roohani- mithaas".Yeh kahani dil tak ek ajeeb si mithaas bhar gayi..Sweet simple si story bina kisi external villian ke,bina kisi namak mirchi...Bas pyar,ishq,mohabbaton wali cute si story...

Chapter 1 : How symbollic was the train journey!!!Us ek safar ne kayi sare safarki shuruwat ki...sapno ki,udaan ki,dosti ki,vishwas ki,pyar ki...What I loved was your dialogues and the mental monologues...The innocent note that Naina left for Sameer alongwith her phone number..uff bas puchiye mat...

Chapter 2 : Woh line "majal hain ki ek baar bhi phone busy na gaya ho".Hello farmaish mein woh message mein kitni shiddat thi.Phir in dono ki conversation was just love..love..love!!!I loved jab bhi Sameer says ki "beta Sameer bahut difficult pitch pe khel raha hai"...Preeti is sister goals!!!The teasing was so realistic.

Chapter 3 : Naina ka Sameer se apna dard share karna auur phir Sameer ka jawaab...Sameer ka adhi raat ko Pehla Nasha bajana..And Naina ka Sameer ke iss gesture ko samajhna auur usse best friend accept karna...Phir Sameer ke kahe anusaar Chachaji se uski baatein...Naina ka naye shehar mein adjust karna auur college mein uska pehla din...Sameer ka surprise..

Chapter 4 : Sameer ka Naina se apna dard share karna,phir Naina ke kehne par Rohan se baat karne ki koshish..."Bhai" sach mein iss chhote se shabd ne Sameer ki zindagi mein kitni khushi bhar di..."Arre jao kisi auur ko dena yeh dhamki"...Sameer ke saath badhti dosti..Naina ko competition-organising-team mein volunteer karane ke liye Sameer ki koshish...
Sameer ki izhaare-e-mohabbat in shairana andaaz...Naina ka andaaz-e-ikraar...

Chapter 5 : Pehle pyar ki pehli subah...Padhaku Naina ka Sajna for Sajna...Shefali auur Naina ki bonding as roomates..."Arre subah se tum me hi to khoya hin,bolne ki fursat kisse hai"..Naina ka confession over phone cause phone unki love story ka ek ahem hissa tha..Samhanka ki Naina se mulaqat

Chapter 6 : Mundit auur Preeti apne Bhai auur behan ki attention ke liye kitni nautanki kar rahe hain...Sameer aur Naina ka midnight balcony romance (Aapki description ko SALAAM)...Nanu ka Sameer ko chidhana...Madam ko kuchkuch..gudgudi..ajeeb ajeeb sa ka matlab janna hai...

Chapter 7 : Unke milne ke tareekon se mujhe yehi gaana yaad aaya "Lekin chhup chhup ke milne mein milne ka maza toh aayega"...Preeti ka khurafati dimaag aakhir idea nikal hi liya...Munna Pandit auur unki Bhabhi ka shocking milna...uspar Sameer ka tadka ki usse sab pata tha..Un sab ka teasing conversation...Naina ko yeh ehsaas hua ke Sameer ne uske barson ki wish puri kardi ek family ki...and phir Naina-Nanu ka dil-chhune-wala conversation...

Chapter 8 : Naina ka meetha banana aur saath-saath kitchen romance...Sameer ki respect for Naina's comfort...Sameer's "Itna acha bana hai tabhi toh khaye jaa raha hun.Bolne ke liye time nahi hai"...Shefali ka Naina ko ek ache dost ki tarah samjhana...What i loved is Shefali's respect for Sameer,Naina and their relationship...My respect for Sameer increased many times with the way he put forward his perspective on intimacy to Naina...Pehli hug woh bhi Baarish-wali(Aapke romance ke tareekon ko SALAAM)

Chapter 9 : Notebook ka secret bahar aagaya courtesy devar-bhabhi...Ek chhote se bacche ke dil-ka-dard kitni ache tarika se bayan kar gaya woh essay...Rohan ka apne bade bhai ke liye stand lena yeh darshata hai ki woh Sameer ko sirf bhai bulata nahi manta bhi hai...Phir Mr and Mrs Somani ki Koshish...Bina bole Sameer ka yeh samajh lena ki isme Rohan auur Naina mile huye hain...Devar-Bhabhi ki Birthday surprise...Naina ka proposal woh bhi using Sameer ki shayari...Sameer ko Birthday pe dhamaka-par-dhamaka milna.."Main tumhare har faisle mein tumhare saath hun"...Reality check for Naina ki agar gharwale nahi maane...Sameer ka Naina ke sapno ke liye motivate karna...Is baar Naina ka Sameer ko train mein surprise...

Chapter 10 : Aapne toh Engg College se vacation mein ghar aane wali yaadein taza kardi...Bharat milap normally aise hi hote hain..Chachaji ka gussa on knowing about ladka in Naina's life jayaaz tha given ki unhone itni mushkilon se Naina ko Delhi bheja tha padhne.Kisi bhi parent ko jhatka lagna zahir si baat hai...Preeti ki tashanbaazi ne aakhirkar Chachaji ke gusse ko samajh mein badal di...Bechara Ramdhari ko kaise pata hoga ki two-rings matlab Bhabhi ji ka call...Unki har conversation mein aap jaan daal deti ho apne dialogues se...Toh Chachaji ne Sameer ko station par hi parakh liya
tha,By God parkhi nazar!!!...Chacha-Chachi ka Sameer se kehna ki Naina par unse zyada Uski Papa ka haq hai...But undono ka Naina ki khushi chhuna was so heart-warming...

Aapki ki kahani ki khubsurti iski sadgi se hain..Chahe woh rishton ki hon ya romance ki...
Yeh joh bhi maine upar palon ko kaid kar payi hun iss note mein,yeh iss kahani ki khubsurti ko nikhaar gayi...

Aapka notebook wala idea was superb kyunki Sameer jaise log khud se kabhi kuch nahi bolte...
Bas ek khalish reh gayi...Aapne unki shuruwat wali journey ko itna yaadgar bana diya toh wapasi wali journey ke liye bhi ek mast dialogues wali chapter banti thi...Anjaan hum raahi se Dil-se Jude humsafars ka transformation dekhne milta...

Par fir bhi iss sadgi bhare Roohani mithaas ko hamara salaam...
Love,Ria.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: JaySee

Beautiful update. Loved the way how entire family planned and executed the surprise party for Naina. Sameer is best in making Naina special in any occasion. Hoping that you will be able to update the next part soon.



Thanks a ton. Naina and Sameer always are there for each other😊

Will update today 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Dharapriya

Such a sweet update. Lote of love.Totally loved it.



Thanks a lot 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: kb_always_96

Haye! Too good & lovely😳

Just love your writing dear! Sameer & Naina's characters are well written 😃



Thanks sweetheart 😳

I didn't know you are following this SS. Makes me happier 😳

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