Samaina SS : 'Suhana Safar' (*Updated*; Epilogue on Page 85) - Page 22

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Dear Aaisha!

I'm so sorry for commenting this late!
Don't be sorry di. I completely understand. You have so much at your hand. Aur Mai to khud slow hun to mjhe to mat sorry bolo 😆

This update really moved me to the core. The way you dealt with Sameer's past- the way he was sent to the hostel- just a 10 year old kid, who wanted a papa. And then how he locked everything inside him for a few years there- stopped talking to people. I almost cried there. His anger is justified. Vishakha n Somani acted as per their whims n fancies- whenever they needed him, he was welcome 😡. But Sameer never left her side when she was in need. I loved how Naina instilled sense in him and the way Rohan-Deepika-Sameer bonded was lovely. Aisa kuch nai dikha sakte the CVs? Sameer sharing his problems with Naina n Naina advising him!
I know right. I was not at all happy with the way they ended Delhi track without even giving us a proper justification as to why Sameer was left all alone in the hostel at such a young age. The justification which Vishakha gave was Meh and tha t is the only reason I still can not connect to Vishakha. And So I had to write something about it. I am happy you liked it.

Yar di even I want samaina to share things with each other on the show. Theek hai time pass baatein bhi kro but atleast once Naina should ask him about his Delhi stay. Even when he was in Delhi, Naina never asked and he never shared. Jaane kab show me Aisa kuch aaega


Then comes the event coordinator preparing part- aah...the DU fests! I so miss them!
N Naina usme khoyi rehti hai n I loved the VO how Naina was thinking is buddhu ko pata nai chal raha hai ki I'm in love with him n kabse. The best part of your story are the flawless voiceovers. It is as if I'm watching the show- the same 90s feel, no exaggeration, the innocent romance!
Hehe didi Apne DU se pdhai Kri hai kya? You seem to be in love with DU.😳
Haan ji both had fallen for each other since long yet couldn't muster the courage to tell each other. Buddhu dono hi hain.
Aww sachi? I used to love the earlier VOs in the show so didntd want to part away with them


The way Sameer holds her hand n then says sorry! He can do anything for Naina- kyun main uski har baat maanta hun! 😉
And then the proposal! Jabse dekha maine tujhko...mujhko shayari aa gayi...ab to pure college ko pata hai ki Naina n Sameer are inseparable...n obviously pure college ko ab pata hi hoga ki Sameer ne wo kavita Naina se apne dil ki baat kehne ke liye likhi...the way Naina used to wish Sameer before every basketball match reminded me of Kuch Kuch Hota Hai! Such lovely college feels! I could imagine a sweaty Sam in a sleeveless basketball jersey on court, n Naina cheering him from the stands! 👏 Kudos!
Haan didi Sameer Majnu Maheshwari ban ban Gaya hai. Are haan this songs suits him. he Doesn't careee about anyone else. Khullam khullam pyaar ka izhaar kr diya. 😳

Aur kya college vale buddhu nhi hAin PVKM ke bacho jaise😆
Hayeee sachi. Maine vo movie bohat bar dekhi haI. Apne b kya?😉 Didi yar aap best ho. Apni imagination se mere scenes me chaar chaand Laga dete ho


ndd the best part was the silent acceptance of love. I'm happy you didn't go overboard n none of them said I Love You, yet they conveyed their love for each other. Exactly like the show! 👏 And the way Naina silently held his hand, and looked ahead, n their fingers entwined as they walked!
Love! Pure love it was!
Thanks 😳 I fell in love with Samaina because of their simple, subtle yet beautiful romance. So I can not imagine Samaina going overboard with anything. Even in future if I make them do something special in this story, I won't ever do away with the simplicity they carry.
And btw ye mere romance ke sapne hain. mjhe b Aisa hi sb chahie 😆

Aaisha! I'm falling for this story as Sameer n Naina are falling for each other. I know you are busy with your studies, but trust me, I'm stalking your thread for updates!
Aapne mujhe emotional kr kr diya. I never imagined you would love this story so much
This story is magic! It reminds me of why I fell in love with this show! It is YUDKBH Season 2 for me! ❤️
Keep up the amazing work dear!
Love
Sur

Didi, I can not tell you how happy I am after reading this comment. Itna bada aur pyara comment. I have lreadyy read it atleast 10 times. Screenshot bhi le kar rakh liya hai.I can never thank you enough. You are finding it to be YUDKBH season 2, there can not be a better compliment for me. You made my day. Thanks a ton 🤗

I am not lying but I am a big fan of your writing. aur aapse itni tareef milna is not a small thing for me.

II will try to update soon. Love youloads 😳

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😳di, I can not get over this comment. Mjhe bohat accha lag Raha hai ❤️
Edited by AaishaM - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Samainadeewani

I was waiting for you to update ..

And this one was the best till date
It was filled with all kinds of emotions .. In short it was a roller coaster rude which I enjoyed to the fullest
Sameer's back story left me in tears .. Your words had that impact .. Rohan sameer were the highlight of the update
Loved it
I just can't get enough of this story ..
Its beautiful
So sameer was literally a bholuram not understanding that she was lost in him
The poem was just beautiful ..
And naina's reaction to it was cherry on cake
Now I'm eagerly waiting for the next part


Love
Laalchi reader

Thanks a ton sweetie for such sweet comments always😳

You found it to be the best one, that's awesome. I am so happy 😊

Aww you were in tears. I really don't know what to say. I am glad you could connect to my writing. It is a huge compliment.

Haha nahi Sameer Samajh gya tha bs bstane se dar Raha tha

😳poem achi lagi uske liye shukriya


Will try to update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: shravyarao


Yes, this is longest update and i loved it. Sameer opened up to naina, i'm glad he said everything that was troubling only naina could have helped him come out of this, even though she was scared with his outburst she still stayed and explained him about rohan and deepika and what they are feeling. Nice progression from friends to partners. I loved the poem dear.. a complete sam's way of expressing his love, can't wait for their romance.

Thanks for the PM love 😊


Thanks a lot sweetie. I am glad you liked it.

Yes yes, conversations are always important in a relationship, be it friendship or any other relation. So that way samaina has indeed progressed. I am waiting for them to have a heart to heart convo in the show too 😳

You liked the poem, thanks a lot. You are right, that's typical Sameer's way of expressing his feelings 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AaishaM

Didi, I can not tell you how happy I am after reading this comment. Itna bada aur pyara comment. I have lreadyy read it atleast 10 times. Screenshot bhi le kar rakh liya hai.I can never thank you enough. You are finding it to be YUDKBH season 2, there can not be a better compliment for me. You made my day. Thanks a ton 🤗

I am not lying but I am a big fan of your writing. aur aapse itni tareef milna is not a small thing for me.

II will try to update soon. Love youloads 😳

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😳di, I can not get over this comment. Mjhe bohat accha lag Raha hai ❤️

Aaisha! You deserve every bit of appreciation here and tonnes more! 😳 You are a gem seriously! Mujhe is story se sach mein pyaar hai...sweet, innocent romance...❤️ I would love to see how you portray their intimacy (if you plan to do so in this story! 😳)
Hehe...btw...I'm still not over the description of Sameer in basketball court which I gave (hotness overloaded ☺️ OMG what will my hubby say? 😆)
DU mein padhna mera bachpan se sapna tha...my dad has been a professor there...so I know it in and out..bachpan se wahan aate jaate rehte the n college life dekhte the...but I happened to do engineering! 🥱
Keep it up dear!
Love
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago
Didi, main aagayi😆
Mujhe laga ki I have reserved my comment par actual mein nahi kiya tha

Sameer gusse mein kuch bhi bol deta hai🤔
His hand her wrist is something I am imagining now Aur Naina ka reaction, pyaar mein paagal😉

His past made my eyes well up with tears too...Ek maa aise kaise ho sakti hai. Didn't Sameer's teary eyes haunt her? She abandoned that child who introduced the world of motherhood to her, he made Vishaka a mother for first time...Was she that busy that she couldn't visit Sam and show her affection to the neglected child, reassure her love for him whatever her situation was...I won't forgive Vishaka!
My hearts goes to the younger Sam, I understand him completely, when you want someone's attention, you do mostly something that they don't like...Sam toh sirf maa ka pyaar chahtha tha joh Vishaka nahi de paayi🥱; Some people are born mischievous like me😆 but some people do mischief to grab attention of who they want.

His reunion with Nanu, how I miss both of them together😭😳 Nanu is his everything after all he is his mummy too😳
And this shows how good Nanu's parvarish was, after whatever his mom, Somani family did to him, he still stood there, by their side during their bad times...Sameer didn't forget his duty, his family👏

Naina so beautifully convinced him to talk to his siblings, sach mein unki kya galti hai aur woh Deepika wali baat bilkul correct, aakhir main bhi toh ek behen hu😉

Aakhir Naina ka jaadu chal gaya😳 Her words affects him and that's a step!

The sibling reunion made me so happy..Sam is being addressed with an endearment he never thought of- Bhai/ Bhaiya😳 The reunion was very subtle, very much realistic...Dil le lo aap❤️

The scene after that made me laugh, of course both of them can't stay without talking to each other😉
And that judgement on Rohan was so correct, in the show too whenever Sam threw things everywhere Rohan didn't scold him at all instead he slowly took things and placed it at the right place...I liked his character a lot, aur abhi main gusse hu kyunki CVS didn't use the character properly🤔

Haaye, no secrets between them so it means, there were many open up sessions between them If whole college knows about their close friendship, I hope no madhumakkhis are there hitting on our guy par I don't mind a slight possessive Sam😉

This is so adorable, Sam was helping and motivating her, just the way in the future too they will be each other's support, their flaws will only be known to them😳

Oh my god, Naina realised her love for Sam, I am dancing right now...The love realisation by the voiceover was very different but the same time aesthetic😳 I have read that 'Mere bhuddhuram' innumerable times especially that 'mere' 😉I can sense the right here!

The poem, Wow! 👏
Aap toh bohot achi poet nikli, you really need to start a thread of your poems on the scenes of YUDKBH, potential toh hai aap mein...Their journey was beautifully summed up with those lines...Maine woh poem screen shot kar liya hai, raha nahi gaya😳

Sameer loves her too, I am overwhelmed with happiness😭😳 And the last part, their handhold and the beautiful silence which just expressed 'Love'...They don't need words, such is their understanding!

I can't wait for the next!


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Posted: 7 years ago
Arey aaisha di itna accha kyu likhti ho ki next part ka wait nhi ho pata😛
Loved this😳
Sameer ka gussa hey bhagwaan ldka kuch bhi bol deta hai fir baad me pachttata hai 😆vaise accha hua ki he shared his past with naina tbhi hume pta chala vrna na chalta
Naina ki baat maankar rohan se baat krna then rohan sameer deepika are sibling goals😆
U gave a logical and reasonable past of sam family bg
Lst me vi shayri poem hayee dil lelo oh sorry vo toh aapke paas already hai kitni baar loge❤️
Naina ka yu sameer ka haath pakadna mtlb gal bn gayi😉
Aaraam se dena agla update vacation enjoy krna apni

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Didi, main aagayi😆

😆Tum to meri behan ho, Mai bhi yahi line likhti hun sbse phle 😆

Mujhe laga ki I have reserved my comment par actual mein nahi kiya tha
😛hota hai hota hai

Sameer gusse mein kuch bhi bol deta hai🤔
His hand her wrist is something I am imagining now Aur Naina ka reaction, pyaar mein paagal😉
😆han thoda impulsive hai na pr hath bhi to pakda fir ❤️


His past made my eyes well up with tears too...Ek maa aise kaise ho sakti hai. Didn't Sameer's teary eyes haunt her? She abandoned that child who introduced the world of motherhood to her, he made Vishaka a mother for first time...Was she that busy that she couldn't visit Sam and show her affection to the neglected child, reassure her love for him whatever her situation was...I won't forgive Vishaka!
I couldn't understand the same when the makers introduced Vishakha. No matter how shararti your kid is, no matter how happy you are in your married life, how could a mother forget her own kid especially the one who gave her the honour of becoming a mother. No matter what justification anyone gives, even I cant forgive Vishakha for leaving her skall child all alone. And I desperately wanted to close this track. Show me to kuch bhi nahi dikhaya 😕

My hearts goes to the younger Sam, I understand him completely, when you want someone's attention, you do mostly something that they don't like...Sam toh sirf maa ka pyaar chahtha tha joh Vishaka nahi de paayi🥱; Some people are born mischievous like me😆 but some people do mischief to grab attention of who they want.
Exactly, he wanted his mother to meet him and look after him and that is the only way he could think of making her mother come to him. But alas some people don't understand their own kids. Accha to aap shararti bacho me aati hain 😛

His reunion with Nanu, how I miss both of them together😭😳 Nanu is his everything after all he is his mummy too😳
And this shows how good Nanu's parvarish was, after whatever his mom, Somani family did to him, he still stood there, by their side during their bad times...Sameer didn't forget his duty, his family👏
Yes, that was his nanu's teachings only that didn't let him leave her mother in times of need despite everything she has been doing to him. Kids are so naive, one can easily mould them. While Vishakha couldn't see that her absence was responsible for Sameer's behaviour, Nanu easily adjudged his situation and made him into the man he is today. He gave him the love and c are he craved for. I miss Nanu too.

Naina so beautifully convinced him to talk to his siblings, sach mein unki kya galti hai aur woh Deepika wali baat bilkul correct, aakhir main bhi toh ek behen hu😉
😆haha smjh AA Raha hai TM kaisi bacchi ho, pyari si aur shararti si 😉

Aakhir Naina ka jaadu chal gaya😳 Her words affects him and that's a step!
Aur kya, Apni Naina kum thodi hai 😉

The sibling reunion made me so happy..Sam is being addressed with an endearment he never thought of- Bhai/ Bhaiya😳 The reunion was very subtle, very much realistic...Dil le lo aap❤️
Hehe le liya. 😳 I fell in love with this show because of it's simplicity so I can never part away with that. And you are right, he never thought someone would give him that love or rights. When his own mother left him, how could he expect someone else to provide him with the love he has been yearning for. Rohan proved him wrong. And jitne HAQ se Rohan ne use bhai Bulaya to Sam Ko bhai ka farz to nibhana hi tha 😉

The scene after that made me laugh, of course both of them can't stay without talking to each other😉
And that judgement on Rohan was so correct, in the show too whenever Sam threw things everywhere Rohan didn't scold him at all instead he slowly took things and placed it at the right place...I liked his character a lot, aur abhi main gusse hu kyunki CVS didn't use the character properly🤔
Mai bhi gusse me hun. I wanted to see Romeer bonding so badly. Cvs could have used Rohan and Deepika's characters to give us a beautiful plot but nahi unhe bas manhoosiyat failani thi. Rohan is a gem. Since his dadi has not really let him have that exposure, he is a little naive but Dil ka pyara aur saccha😳

Haaye, no secrets between them so it means, there were many open up sessions between them If whole college knows about their close friendship, I hope no madhumakkhis are there hitting on our guy par I don't mind a slight possessive Sam😉
Haha Han there were, I would write about two three things more as the story progresses.
Hye Rabba sbko possessive Sam chahie, Naina ne itna paka diya kya possessive ho ho ke 😆


This is so adorable, Sam was helping and motivating her, just the way in the future too they will be each other's support, their flaws will only be known to them😳
Yes, yes, yes they will always be each other's support and strength. That's the beauty of their relationship ❤️ they are their true selves in front of each other 😳

Oh my god, Naina realised her love for Sam, I am dancing right now...The love realisation by the voiceover was very different but the same time aesthetic😳 I have read that 'Mere bhuddhuram' innumerable times especially that 'mere' 😉I can sense the right here!
Thanks, love. I am glad you liked it.
Oh yes, usne already apna HAQ man Liya hai Buddhuram pr 😉

The poem, Wow! 👏
Aap toh bohot achi poet nikli, you really need to start a thread of your poems on the scenes of YUDKBH, potential toh hai aap mein...Their journey was beautifully summed up with those lines...Maine woh poem screen shot kar liya hai, raha nahi gaya😳
Bohat acchi Kahan yar aise hi koshish kr leti hun. I so miss Sameer's shayari in the show islie compensate krne ke liye try krti hun kuch kuch. Thanks a lot 🤗

Are baap re alag se thread itna nahi ho paega mjhse 😲
Awww screenshot le Liya. That's so sweet. Mjhe bohat accha laga😳

Sameer loves her too, I am overwhelmed with happiness😭😳 And the last part, their handhold and the beautiful silence which just expressed 'Love'...They don't need words, such is their understanding!
Han some moments don't require verbal confirmation. 😳

I can't wait for the next!



Thanks a lot Shreya for such a detailed reply. I always wait for your comments. Everytime I write something, you easily understand the hidden meaning and there can be nothing more satisfying for a writer. It's always a pleasure reading your take on the updates. Thanks again 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Komalp1391

Arey aaisha di itna accha kyu likhti ho ki next part ka wait nhi ho pata😛 bas islie hi Komal Kyunki mjhe tmhe wait Krane me maza aata hai 😆

Loved this😳
Sameer ka gussa hey bhagwaan ldka kuch bhi bol deta hai fir baad me pachttata hai 😆vaise accha hua ki he shared his past with naina tbhi hume pta chala vrna na chalta
😆komal TM har jagah Apne punches daal deti ho aur Mai Hasti rhti ho paglo jaise.
Khair ab to tmhe pata chal gya na😉

Naina ki baat maankar rohan se baat krna then rohan sameer deepika are sibling goals😆
Bas kar behan varna mummy fir dekh lenge 😆
Sab goal hi goal hain 😉

U gave a logical and reasonable past of sam family bg
Lst me vi shayri poem hayee dil lelo oh sorry vo toh aapke paas already hai kitni baar loge❤️
Chalo reasonable Laga na, thank god 😳
Haha Han vo to maine rkha hua hai Apne paas smbhal ke. Thanks baby 😳


Naina ka yu sameer ka haath pakadna mtlb gal bn gayi😉
Aaraam se dena agla update vacation enjoy krna apni
Han gal ban gayi ab to Banti hi jaegi bas 😉

Han yar m finally kahin ja rhi hun


Thanks sweetheart 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
Unresd On Page 26..😊😊

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