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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: moumita04

Hey Shravya - read both the parts in one go...😳


This was sensuous to the core... They way you described Naina trying to zip up her blouse and Sameer being irresistibly pulled towards her. Poor girl thought she was imagining him but he turned out to be too real for her...

That "Mine" was just perfect... had a shuddering effect on me... Simply loved the way you described how Naina understood and recognized him as hers, the sense of acceptance and belonging, and that with him she could be free and do as her heart desires... If Sameer uttered Mine possessively, Naina left that stamp of possession on him by nibbling his throat... Superbly worded... and perfectly described how the desire and overwhelming need for each other crashed down all defenses and snapped all control so much that finesse was not given and was neither required... It was just the urge to touch and possess, to wallow in the hunger they felt for each other...😃

The sisterly bond was again amazing to read... how they can talk of anything and everything under the sun... Their friendship is so natural... and loved the enacting.😳

Keep coming up with more such work... Loved to read it...👏
And please drop a PM to me for your next update...

Love,
Mou




Hey moumita,

So glad u liked the story, and happy that u are finally back and healthy.
You girl, are after my own heart. Such a beautiful comments and stories u give.

You have described the pulse of the story in one comment. It truly feels amazing to read comments such as yours. Who take time and effort to pen down ur thoughts on someone's story giving them encouragement to write another one.

Will surely come up with more stories, thanks again for the lovely comment love.

And yes, will pm you my next one. 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey dear...Had an attack reading tat passionate encounter☺️...Oh Gosh it was sensuous n intense...pretty hawt how they both had an urge of arousing desires flaming them inside...i loved how Sam made her aware of that finall push of his need...tat thrust vich made her aware of what they both were cravjng for...The act was really turn on!!☺️ n the build up was perfect!!..
So can v hve more of ur stories now...Probably smething on the coll track...As v all r so anxious n xcited abt it...How abt a barsaat OS?? or a jealousy one ...anything that can mellow all of us down...!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehraan

Hey dear...Had an attack reading tat passionate encounter☺️...Oh Gosh it was sensuous n intense...pretty hawt how they both had an urge of arousing desires flaming them inside...i loved how Sam made her aware of that finall push of his need...tat thrust vich made her aware of what they both were cravjng for...The act was really turn on!!☺️n the build up was perfect!!..

So can v hve more of ur stories now...Probably smething on the coll track...As v all r so anxious n xcited abt it...How abt a barsaat OS?? or a jealousy one ...anything that can mellow all of us down...!!



Hey mehraan, i was just waiting for your reply man! Always a pleasure to read ur comments 😉

Sam baba is intense and passionate with his eyelocks, especially during Pooja di's shaadi track.
Had been watching all the old episodes on repeat from last few days. So, thought about another wedding setting, with SamAina engaged, to lit the stage on fire 😆 😳

So glad u like it, surely will try to come up with something soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey dear, thank you. Glad u liked it 😊
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SamAina OS: First Adventure of Naina devi



[NOCOPY]




[ Guys, frankly when i penned down my first OS, i wasn't quite sure how it would come Or how anyone is gonna receive it.


But the appreciation you guys showed!! 🤗


It was quite amazing because i wasn't expecting this kind of encouragement,Even if i was new here, and nobody knew me, all everybody said or did was, pat my shoulder saying you go girl, write some more, we are here to read.


That was all i wanted.So, whatever i write, the credit totally goes to those taking the time to comment and like.


You guys are rocking!! This one's for you all]




[This is after Naina hears sameer saying he is manhoos, i'm not dealing with that stuff in this though, this is just a lighthearted OS of naina trying to reach sameer after that incident]




She needed solid advise, someone who can clear her muddled thoughts and give her a clear view of things messing up her brain, thought naina.



"Shefali!!" Naina yelled suddenly, the lightbulb lit up now, somehow she forgot the perfect person who would've cleared everything for her.



"I wasted a lot of time" thought naina hurrying towards shefali's house, ringing the bell impatiently. Shefali opened the door, slightly confused and irritated at the insistent bell ringing. Seeing naina ringing the bell, she was left even more confused. When shefali opened the door in half, naina literally pushed her, and rushed inside closing the door herself.



"Shefali, i need to talk to you urgently, aunty ghar par he kya"? Asked naina hurrying over to the sofa.


"No, what happened naina? Is everything alright"? Asked shefali.




With no time to waste, Naina told her everything that's been happening and what she was feeling since last fewdays. About seeing sameer in the college, and what he had said. Almost in tears now.



"Naina, i'll help you in whatever way i can, I have seen the bond between you two during pooja di's wedding, i have seen the love between you two. Don't you remember? i was there from the start of your love story ".



"Now naina, let me ask you something, what is that you want to do right now"?

said shefali, stunning naina into a prolonged silence.



"I want ur advise" replied naina placing her hands on her face trying to rub the tiredness from it.



"About"? Asked shefali.



"How to talk to sameer directly, confronting about this issue, the place for this, everything shefali, the college doesn't start for another 5 days, and i can't wait that long" said naina.



Shefali thought for a few seconds and said,



"Ok, listen to me, first we will try to solve this issue, by dividing it into categories ok"?



First thing, If sameer is here why did he avoid you? There should be a solid reason for that.



Second thing, And from listening to what you said, something happened in delhi that had affected him to such an extent that, he is forced into thinking like this or someone should have said something of that sort to him and made him believe it.



Third thing, Girl, you need to hold tight for this, it is going to be a tough journey of convincing him. And you don't have time. He thinks, he is the reason for every bad thing that happens in your life. So, even a small incident for us, is a big issue for him. Think in that light and talk to him patiently trying to understand to what he says, and make him understand you.




For that to happen, you should do something which may sound crazy, but is perfect for you and gives you enough time.




Here goes nothing, thought shefali, ready to face the wrath of naina for devising this complicated and dangerous plan.





"Ok, once again i'm telling you, this is going to sound crazy, but if u want to talk to sameer, and he is avoiding you as per what you say, then this is the only thing that comes to my mind" said shefali discussing the plan.




After listening to her, naina's jaw hung open, and she yelled loudly


"What??? You want me to do what"? Asked naina still fumbling for words.

"Naina, do you want to talk to sameer?" Asked shefali.


"Yes" replied naina.


"This is how you are going to do it" replied shefali firmly.


"But what about.. "??


Naina didn't get to even finish the sentence before shefali replied.




"I will take care of everything, you just be ready, And discuss the plan with everyone in the gang, we need all of their support in this. So that, nothing goes wrong ok"?



"Ok" replied naina dazedly, going towards her home.



As planned, naina explained the plan to preeti, who is yelling and hyperventilating after listening to the plan alternatively, and she still has to convince munna and pandit thought naina, trying to call them, she lifted the receiver dialing the number.



After explaining the plan to them, naina ignored all their blubberring and replied in a firm voice.



"Either you help me or you don't, i'm going to go through with this" replied naina disconnecting the line.



As expected everybody were ready by 10:00pm, munna and pandit were downstairs waiting, preeti was arranging pillows on the bed trying to cover them with the duvet making them look like they were sleeping on the bed. The ladder was placed directly below their balcony, the bedroom door locked from inside. They already played the part of being tired and going to bed early.



Naina was waiting for the signal from shefali, as she told her she will take care of it. though naina was still skeptical how this is going to workout, but she needs to try, thought naina determinedly.



"There is no other option" naina tried prepping herself.



Everybody were sleeping, the roads quite desserted. Naina uttered a prayer and quickly got on the ladder climbing down without making much noise. Preeti quietly followed suit.



Shefali who was waiting downstairs for them, quickly hustled them out of their society and into the car that was waiting for them outside. Quickly opening the door preeti and naina slid inside and yelled loudly




"Arjun bhaiyya, aap"?




Shushing them shefali quickly explained, how arjun will be helping them out in this.



"Right Arjun?" asked shefali quite threateningly, causing arjun to swallow with difficulty.




"Dekh naina, i know that you love that ameerzade, although i'm not entirely convinced he is the right one for you, i have seen u cry for days after he left, so i'm just doing this, so that u will be happy, Understand? Nothing is important for me, more than your happiness. Even if it lies in that Ameerzade" said arjun in one breath.



"Thank you so much bhaiyya, we will talk about this later, please tell me what's the plan now, shefali" asked naina.



"Ok, here is the plan, i will go to your room and sleep on your bed, so that if anyone comes, i can cover for you, and arjun is going to drop you guys to sameer's house. Munna and pandit are following you on their bike. And they will help you get into sameer's house as they know it quite well ok"? said shefali trying to explain everything.



"But naina, remember dealing with sameer is your issue and you only have three hours. For your safety, it's better if it's two hours. But three hours is the limit. Anything more than that is risky, arjun will pick u up again and drop you home".




"All the best!", now leave, i'm going up, she said.




Everybody sat in silence in the car, arjun silently following the bike that was leading them to sameer's house. Unable to believe what happened naina and preeti sat at the back, still trying to grasp everything.




Suddenly preeti exclaimed, teasing arjun,"Waise bhaiyya, aap tho bade chupe rustom nikhle ho, shefali haa"? Asked preeti making even naina grin widely, seeing their innocent brother blush furiously.



After a 20min drive, arjun slowly stopped the vehicle infront of a big building, turning the engine off, turned around and said



"Listen naina, i'm going to drop you two here as i can't take the vehicle inside, i will wait for you here, complete whatever that you are here for, and if u want my help please don't hesitate to ask, ok"? said arjun trying to calm down naina who has been fiddling with her fingers, trying to calm her nerves down.



"Yes bhaiyya", replied naina gathering all the courage needed.



Preeti and naina got down the car slowly and saw munna and pandit waiting for them at the entrance, the four tried to keep quiet, slowy walking near the house, and stood directly below sameer's bedroom.



"Now bhabi, directly above where we are standing, is sameer's bedroom" said pandit.



"Haa bhabi, what do you want us to do"? asked munna.



"Ok", replied naina preparing herself.



"Now, i want you to get me a ladder and arrange it here, so that i can climb through the balcony and go inside sameer's room, before i can do that, i need you to check if sameer is still in the bedroom or not. Then only i can go, preeti will wait downstairs. Once you saw that he is alone, you come down, and then i will go up".



"Please keep an eye down here. I will manage upstairs", said naina to pandit and preeti, trying to sound confident,even though she was completely terrified and unsure about everything.



Munna and pandit got on with searching the ladder, while naina and preeti tried looking into the house through the window, checking where sameer is.


When munna found the ladder, he got onto it and quickly climbed up, jumping into the balcony and entering to sameer's room without making much noise. Seeing sameer still listening to songs on the walk-man, he got down slowly and explained everything to naina.




Naina sending a quick prayer to god, climbed the ladder trying to be cautious, and slid into the balcony, heart thundering, sneaked into his room. Seeing him lying on the bed listening to songs with his headphones, a strange peace settled on her.


And then came the confidence. She slowly moved to the bedroom door, closing it from the inside. Came near the bed, tapping on sameer's shoulders twice, before placing her hand on his mouth.



Sameer, who was listening to the songs, reminiscing his school days with naina came back to the reality with the tap on the shoulder.


Seeing naina there, sameer shook his head, trying to get out of his dreamland.



"Don't yell, ok"? said naina.



Moving his head up and down sameer nodded in agreement.


As soon as naina removed her hand,



"Naina, whaa...!?" uttered sameer completely lost.



Crossing her arms, Naina stood there tension building in her frame, remembering all the year struggles with the distance separating them, and with no phone calls to even listen to his voice, and the toll it had taken on her. The thappads she had to put up with. With each minute, naina transformed into a raging volcano.



"So"? She uttered calmly, just like the calm before the storm.

Staring blankly at sameer who stood frozen between shock and elation.



"Naina, are you really here"? Asked sameer completely forgetting all his manhoos track.



"Yes, i'm here, why!? shouldn't i be? With the way you have been avoiding me, i think that's what you want, isn't that it?Tell me sameer"? asked naina, firing questions at him.




"Oh! You are really here", said sameer completely flabbergasted. And then uttered the first thing that came to his mind. His concern for naina.




"Naina, what are you doing here, at this time of the night?Have you gone mad? What if taiji or chachiji comes to know about it, and your father, he is going to kill you", said sameer completely in a diff track.



"And how did you come here, don't tell me you walked! Did u come alone?

Naina this isn't right, where is preeti?" asked sameer almost hyper.



"I didn't come alone, arjun bhaiyya dropped us, and preeti is downstairs with munna and pandit" replied naina calmly.



"What!! Preeti, munna and pandit are downstairs? And arjun dropped you!!

Has everybody gone mad, or is it just me"? mumbled sameer furiously.



"Yes, if you are done with ur enquiries. Can we get back to the topic" asked naina.



"Naina, tum pagal ho gayi ho kya? Agar tum ko kise ne dekh liya tho? Do you even know what would happen"? Asked sameer now getting furious with this stupid act of hers.



And suddenly they heard voices approaching near the room.




"Sameer.." he could hear his bhabi calling his name about to enter his room.




Sameer rushed naina into his bed, covering her with the duvet from head and toe.

Naina tried getting up, asking "What are you doing sameer, she will know, let me go, and who is she? Did u marry someone secretly without telling me"? asked naina, earlier preeti's words still ringing in her head.



"What? why would i marry someone else, when you are here? she is my bhabhi" replied sameer, unconciously slipping out his hearts desires, tucking her down, asking her to shutup and close her eyes and not to even move a muscle.



He went and opened the door slightly, not giving enough space for poonam bhabhi to enter his room.



"Haa bhabhi, do you need something"? asked sameer trying not to fidget.



"Bhaiyya, you did not eat anything in dinner, just wanted to ask if u want to eat some snacks? And what is that pile on your bed,"? said poonam pushing him inside and entering the room anyhow. Seeing a huge pile of covers and duvet lying hazardously.



"Who is this"? asked poonam trying to look at the persons face which seems to be completely covered.



"Who? looking here and there, looking everywhere but the bed, where naina why lying. Oh, that! sameer spluttered, trying to cover his nervousness, Bhabhi, that is, i mean that is, hmm munna, yea, yea it's munna bhabhi, he came here to give me company it's been so long right? That's why" said sameer sweating now.



"Oh accha, munna bhaiyya hein? Ok then, he seemed to be asleep already? When did he come? I didn't see him coming" asked poonam bhabhi.



Bhabhi he came here just before an hour, we didn't want to disturb you, so didn't make much noise.



"Ok bhaiyya, then you also go to sleep, i'm leaving as well" saying poonam turned around and saw munna in all his glory climbing the ladder.



Sameer following her gaze also saw munna and muttered,



"Aaj to mein gaya"


"Why does, all this happen to you sameer" he muttered to himself.



Munna entered the room trying to remove the dust on his clothes, fumbling in the darkness outside, completely missing the signals he was receiving from preeti and pandit who already came up before him, and were trying to tell him not to enter.



Without looking up, munna blurted out "Bhabi, did he say why he is avoiding? You don't have much time it's just 3 hours remember? We need to hurry up" said munna rushing up and seeing poonam bhabi there, and not his naina bhabi.



"3 hours? Why do i only have 3 hours bhaiyya? And avoiding? Who is avoiding who? If you are here, who is under the duvet then"? asked poonam now completely getting an idea who is under it, seeing sameer's fluttering as well as munna bhaiyya's entry through the balcony only confirmed it.



"Bhabi, that is pandit, you know pandit right? The one who came with munna in the morning haa, that's him" sameer said trying to cover up, and assure himself to believe the nonsense he has been sprouting.


"Accha? I didn't know pandit wore ladies sandals, when i saw him in the morning, he looked completely fine to me" said poonam trying to play the role to perfection.



Looking at his bhabhi, who was trying not to laugh, sameer knew he was busted. And that she has an idea who was under the duvet.



Sameer blushed saying "Bhabhi, woh.."



"Sameer bhaiyya, after you settle down the fight between you two, please send my devrani through the back door, and not from the ladder, i will make the arrangements. Ok"? said poonam smiling.



"Yes bhabi", sameer said the redness still not leaving from his cheeks.



"And please introduce me to her, in the daylight, officially and outside the house", said poonam moving to the door now.




Sameer replied in affirmation, nodding he said "Thank you so much bhabi",

poonam just smiled and left closing the door quietly on her way out.



Naina, who was under the covers, blushed furiously after nearly getting caught. And slowly rose lifting the covers above her.



Munna who stood silently watching what happened, burst out laughing.



Slowly preeti and pandit who were just hiding from the view too came out, smiling sheepishly they entered the room.



And looking at eachother all the friends burst out laughing, knowing deep in their souls, everything is going to be fine after this.





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Edited by shravyarao - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This was awesome Shravya..enjoyed to the fullest reading this piece...
Your A/N did give me the idea of to expect something lighthearted but the Poonam Bhabi twist you gave was unexpected...
Glad you bought Shefali here...I missed her love guru avatar😃
Hamesha Pandit messes up in the show but in your story Munna did😆
Superb!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Such a lighthearted and funny OS! Loved this gangs adventure.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mayashika

This was awesome Shravya..enjoyed to the fullest reading this piece...

Your A/N did give me the idea of to expect something lighthearted but the Poonam Bhabi twist you gave was unexpected...
Glad you bought Shefali here...I missed her love guru avatar😃
Hamesha Pandit messes up in the show but in your story Munna did😆
Superb!



Was missing the gang's adventures and the shaadi track, where everybody was trying to bring Naina and Sameer together, so tried this one.😉

Glad you liked it yaar.😊



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Such a lighthearted and funny OS! Loved this gangs adventure.



😆 thank you, Glad u liked it.

Was missing all of them in one frame.😊


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awesome update. dear..
loved this
Thanks for pm

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