Munna-Swati OS: Riveting Promises

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umam

@umam

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Loved your OS 😊

We have seen so many facets of Munna's character ⭐️ especially the way he takes care of Sameer and Naina. And, yesterday's school scene - Sanjay was fabulous ⭐️. I wish writers explore his character and Swamun much more and with greater depth...

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Loved it yaar ... I hope onscreen too swamun gets more screenspace ... Munna's charcter has lot of depth glimpse of which we got in last nights episode and u explored his charcter very well in this os ..👏

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

The way Munna trusted Swati and spilled the beans on Sameer was so heart warming. I dont know why but lately a sentimental Munna is clawing at me. And to see the bond between Swati and Munna was really amazing.

We dont realise but its more the side characters that aide the main heroes that we love.

Wonderful OS once again and thank you for the pm.

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Phoenix

@Phoenix100

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Mind blowing minu👏

You wrote such an amazing story for swamun... So so loved it... I've always loved them and wanted their story to move forward... Bt it never happened... Thank you for this wonderful piece of art.

Chemistry lab as a character is something you love... Right?... U wrote an os earlier which had chemistry lab as a character... Loving this writing style.

Munna is one selfless character... He cares for sameer so much that he has sleepless nights thinking about him... Loved how naina sensed something was wrong with him.

Swati is an amazing friend as well... She's a bit bold and mature too compared to naina... I feel she always had a liking for munna.. Her filmy dreams made her think she loves sameer.

The way she understood his pain says it all.. She wanted him to open up to her... He too felt so comfortable sharing his pain with her... Eventhough all they talked about was sameer and naina, the comfort level between them was amazing... Even without confessing anything to each other, their hearts were together... He trusted her too much to share his friend's secret... He knows this secret will be safe with her.

The hug was so soothing... The comforting hug says it all... What they shares is beyond words... Sometimes words are not needed to convey the feelings.. It reaches from heart to heart.

This bandar and his frockwala pandit is love... The names which only they both have the right to call each other... Loved how she managed to cheer him up... Only she can do that.

Munna and swati are the best friends anyone could get... The way these two supports their friends is something beyond words.. Such caring friends are a blessing.. Naina and sameer are truly blessed.

As always u nailed it minu... Loved every bit of this story.

Edited by angelic567 - 7 years ago

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: msdfan
First of all congratulation.. now you are free from exams..😃

After SamAina my favourite pair is SwaMun.. And I'm very glad that you wrote the OS on them 😊

You have perfectly shown the emotional, caring and humorous sides of Munna..👏

I liked that when Swati was worried about Munna while she was with Naina..

Swati was giving funny advice about the lipstick mark on letter.. that was funny 😆

I loved the talks between Bandar and his frock wala Pandit.. It was heart touching and a little funny 😊

The way he told her everything about Sameer.. he trusts her and she gave her handkerchief to Munna for wiping his tears.. she really worries about him

Their hug was very cute and emotional.. Loved it and they are starting their new friendship with Gulab Jamun 😃

Dialogues were beautifully written.. beautiful piece of writing dear 👏

Thanks for the PM dear..

Btw when are you updating Kati Patang.. I'm waiting 😳

Thanks Sona for the appreciation 😃 They have a spark as couple.I love how both are invested in bringing happiness to their loved one's life.Hence thought to bring an aspect to show how vulnerable they are,how they can fall weak and be support of each other.

Swati is someone who definitely has filmy dimag but nonetheless still loves the cute antics of Munna..No matter what transpires..anyone in love can never see his/her partner in tears..😳

And gulab jamun is definitely a mithi shuruwat..Cadbury's substitute.😉

Kati Patang is underway..Would update soon.

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Uv78

@Uv78

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Nice one...loved the chemistry between munna n swati...hope to see something like this on the show too...

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padmalaya30

@padmalaya30

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Minu🤗

It was such a cute story just like munna n swati😳😳😳

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priyanka

@doublecross

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Wow! Such a sweet os!

This budding and blossoming love of munna and Swati touched my heart. You don't need to confess always, since actions speaks louder than words! The words and the support that Swati extended, I cherished reading it. Not only does she pulls him off his depressing thoughts and provides him with the required confidence as friend to talk sense to his friends.

The hug seemed so natural, it was actually a go with the flow kind of feeling and I loved it and the ending with the gulab jamun was just the required cherry on top! !!!

Lovely concept.

Keep coming up with more

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ScarletNiki

@ScarletNiki

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

How refreshing Minu, to see the story from SwaMun's perspective! These two are such pivotal people that I cannot imagine Samaina without them.

I would personally love to see their story progress even in the show.

There were so many cute and deep moments in the story. It was beautiful how you pronounced Munna's concerns, feelings, and musings piece by piece. I feel he and Pandit carry so much baggage from Sameer's life including being his strength that it is necessary they have someone to fall back as well (after all they are teenagers as well).

Swati caring for him was so sweet instead of just snapping and calling him bandar😆

This line was ultimate, true Munna style for his Madhuri😳

Tu aise gulab jamun laya kar main tere liye Taj Mahal le aaunga.''

Dil le lo❤️

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Lakshmi

@lakku19

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Wow .. this is so so good ..
How did u write so well ..too good ..
I was like what will happen next ..
Now waiting for Kati Patang dear.. plz update soon ..

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