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Originally posted by: Samaina_1990
Hello friends!
Lo main aa gayi is story ka update lekar! Finally! I was actually going to pause this till I finish EU..but then got in a mood to write, so updating it!Please give in your feedback! I know it's been ages since I updated this one. Many of you might have forgotten this! 😆This one's for you Aarti aka Anjali33! ❤️ Thank you for motivating me not to give up on this one! Love you! ❤️
Finally Di...Aapne iska update de hi diya.Pehli baar SSN pe review likh rahi hun.Mera note thoda bada hone wala hai.Main pehle warn kar rahi hun.Please end tak padhna cause ab tak ki story ko yaad kar kar ke likh rahi hun.
SSN was one of the intial stories I had read here.Though I am yet to complete LIMB,I felt SSN could be read without the prequel since I had landed on LIMB after having read till the rainy rendezvous at Darjeeling 😉 in SSN.
I loved every bit of SSN.Your style of narrration was so simple and an absolute visual treat.Special mention for the introduction scene of the Sameer Swag Maheshwari(sach main it was almost like a hero's entry in movies),those stolen kisses in some hidden corners of colleges,Sameer's preparation for Naina's birthday and surprise,his act of being completely ignorant or having forgotten her birthday till almost 8 PM(bande main bahut patience hain),the BIG confession,all friends chipping in for the event in their own ways,Sameer reminiscing about his Nanu and the death scene (with Special Sur Di wala Tadka),Sameer meeting Chachaji,Sameer's need for his Mom's approval even though he never had her as a mother,the other love stories,the meeting of the families,the BIG wala twist with Rohan,the Lalita-Pawar mode of Mr Somani and the laalchi cheap Rakesh falling for Mr Somani's bait of money.
Di your subtle expressions of love between Sam and Naina were so sweet that it could make even a non-believer like me yearn for love.I loved your version of the death scene,Nanu could see his bahu in his wife's saree before leaving this mortal world.Sameer giving so much importance to his Mom's approval even though he has been mother-less all his growing-up years and to Chachaji's acceptance increased my respect for him.The best was during the shaadi talks Vishakha giving back to Mr Somani when she denied anything as dowry and wanting only the girl her son had chosen for himself.
But DI,Rohan was the surprise element of this story.I loved the twist.Aapne show ke positive character to villian banane ki jurat ki which according to me required lot of himmat.But I would name him Rotlu Rohan cause isse kuch hona nahi hai.Bas apne Papa ke saamne do aansu baha deta hai and apni baat manwa leta hai.Di I want aap iss gadhe ko auur iske baap ko ek baar yeh zarur sikhado ke marks se zindagi nahi chalti...
Somani stooping so low so as to lure Rakesh using money was horrible.But aapne Rakesh ko usse bhi zyada gira hua dikha diya.In retrospect I found it so real and true.This happens and happens even today...
But what had my heart and soul was Rakesh taunting Sameer ,Sorry I don't remember whether he knows ki Arjun stole the papers.Though what he said was absolute truth.What was hurting was it was not that he chose Arjun over Naina,but rather he found self-respect in money and social positions.
I loved Sameer's interaction with his Mom.Rakesh and Somani's taunts leading to the outburst gave an insight into Sameer's father.Aapke charan kahan hain DI.That was a BLOCKBUSTER...Now all I want you to show is the ACTUAL SWINDLER being Somani.Maza aajayega!!!But the resulting conversation between Vishakha and Sam was like a pain balm for Sameer and the readers alike.Felt like an actual Mother-son conversation
Now coming to this update.
Di.meri demand already rakh chuki hun.For all the horrendous mental torture Sameer had to go through,please show Somani as the real culprit.Karma has to strike this Idiot.
My respect for Sameer increased when he did not give up,rather took it upon himself to prove it to the world.
Loved,infact delighted at that "Rohan Bhaiya".Bande ko uski aukat dikha di.Bada chala hai Sainya banne,bhaiya banne ke layak bhi nahi...Rotlu Gadha kahin ka!!!
Naina trust in Rohan was so misplaced!!! If I have interpreted right probably Somani ne usse business auur ghar dono se nikal diya hai.Mujhe aise kyun lag raha hai ki Ghar apne naam karne mein bhi Somani ne Nanu ke saath koi chal chali hai!!!
Di,I cried while going through the paragraph jahan banda puri raat raaste pe sone ke baad ,ek hotel mein freshen up hoke pura din bina kuch khaye,infact bina pani peeye naukri dhundta raha.I SALUTE this Sameer for his determination.
Munna Pandit jaise dost hon toh life kitne aasaan hojaati hai na...Aise dost aaj kal kahan milte hain DI.They are the real family of Sameer.Stood by him when even his own mother abandoned him on the streets.Loved it when their first question was "tune kuch khaya?" and Munna's Marwari-wala sauda!!!
PS:Di,what i love in both SSN and EU is you have made Sameer give it back to that Somani...Wahan Sam ne ussi ki dubti business ko best bana diya and yahan I am sure Sam - Somani ki takkar kuch aisi hogi ki Somani uske saamne khud jhukega...Bas this time don't let Sam forgive Somani if Somani is found the culprit and not Sameer's Dad...
Waiting for the roller-coaster you have planned for us...Rohan ko dhul chatane ki and Somani ki chori saamne laane ki.Wishing more strength to your creative instincts,
Loads of love Di,
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