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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: mystique123

Aww...what an update !!!!

The dressing up and them adoring each other was so cute.
Jealous Sameer and Naina always ends up in something special and this time it was yummylicious romance in the rain.
Rain always have a beauty in itself and you just made it marvelous with your writing. Admire it to the core.
Just like Rain quenches the thirst of mother-earth, it also helped Sameer-Naina to quench theirs as well.
The red lipstick as sindoor was so symbolic of how much they have progressed and their acceptance of lifetime.
Loved it sooo much ❤️

Hey dear! Thank you so much! BTW...what do you like to be called? 😊 So you too like rains! 😊 I'm honoured that you felt I could do justice to their first kiss and the sindoor part as symbolic of being together. It is actually a difficult story for me to write, can't say why, but I'm glad you guys encourage me with your wonderful comments! 🤗😳
Love
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Hi Sur, Sorry about the late comments. I just came across these on my phone and realised that I wrote them when I was offline and forgot to post them! I tend to write reviews sometimes when I am on the tube but cant post then right away due to lack of network connectivity.

Ohh no worries May! I was actually missing your comment on this one! 😊 Thanks for posting it! Hope you had a good birthday btw! 😊

Wow! Jis din ki shurvat hi Tie romance se shuru ho.. wo din toh khas hi hone wala hai And loved that line kyunki tumhare sath jeene ka haq sirf mujhe hai !! How romantic yaar...

Hehe...this story is my way of expressing all filmy romance...😃

It was so much fun reading about the jealous Samaina on the dance floor! Good Sameer got to experience it too Big thanks to Mr Ajit Khanna from the whole fandom Loved reading about their slow dance...

Haha...definitely Mr. Ajit Khanna didn't even realize hua kya Mr. SJM ko! 😆 Unki biwi pe chance marne ki koshish karenge to kya hoga 😆

When he suddenly asked Honeymoon ke liye kaha jaye?' I was like.. what?! Isse toh bohoot jaldi ho rahi hai - Slow dance se fast dance pe move hone ki And then his apprehension ke kahi char dham ki yaatra par hi na Naina le chale was so funny!

Haha Sameer is already planning for his future with her...now that's he's gearing up to take control of his business fully and the college would end in two years...plus ladka jawan ho gaya hai! 😆🤣

And the final Rain scene... was just magical.. the ambience, their emotions of love and desire... just too good! And then that dance to Kaate nahi katate din ye raat... so sensual... and then the build up to the kiss and the actual kiss... so hot!! Aur phir sindhoor.. completely nailed it!

Thank you so much May!! I'm so glad you liked the kissing scene and the build-up to it! 😳😳

Sur, this piece of writing was just so beautiful.. the flow and the build... the setting... the emotions at play.. all was just perfect!
Aww May! I'm truly flattered! Thank you so much! 🤗

Love for such beautiful comments May! 😳 My replies in bold.
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago

Sur am so late on this so am a bit embarrassed. But since you understand my predicament at this moment so I won't apologise.


First kiss, it's that special moment when you have your first brush with intimacy. The fact that lips can unleash a riot within and make your inside churn and turn in the most special ways making you flutter is often unknown to us apart from all the romance novels, that regale us with the importance and the connection that we make with our beloved. So first kiss is important and special.


What I loved about this update was it had a mix of everything. In the very beginning the way naina sets sameer's tie it gave me hubby wifey feels imagining the scenario. It was beautiful how they remnicises their time spent in mount abu any and the little details that come back in flashbacks is endearing to read about. Though the culmination of the trip had led naina to know about the bet but it was because of the very culprit that she and sameer are together today.


Often we are chiding the cvs on this forum for making naina jealous all the time. When I was reading the part here I felt as if it was a repeat performance but sur you never cease to surprise the way naina have it back to him, that t it for rat smirk and then when she relented to a dance with a stranger that was all so Good, I loved the way sameer reacted. He had to literally snatch her off that strangers arms, it felt as if he growled through his eyes making the world know that she was his and only his and no man on earth has the right to hold her, to caress her, to love her, protect her and keep her close. It felt as if he was shouting 'mine' with that gesture.


Am often commending Mou for the vivid imagery that she paints with her vocabulary but here you bowled me over. The rains and the vivid imagery that you painted of the locales, the must, the alluring weather and the snowballed Himalayas felt like the perfect setting for romance. I could her the pitter patter of the rains and feel the cool weather, infact it made me shiver too.


Now the kiss, well I am stunned and dumbfounded by it. The very prelude to it, the dance in the rain, the sensuous moves of naina and those silent exchange through eyes. The blushes and those steamy desirous eyes of them both gave me goosebumps. Especially sameer assessing Nina and her curves while naina glued to his rain drenched physique was tantalizing to read about. Their miss started off slow and steady only to break into a rhythm and the rhythm matched with that of the rains. If it came down in sheets unleashing the wild side of nature the kiss too helped unleashing all their desires that they had been harbouring for each other for long. They were careful with their caresses but the thirst to explore could clearly be felt in each of their touches and then the boldness of naina when she pushes him across the tree to have her fair share of way with him was simply enchanting. If it surprised sameer answer then it all acquiesced one thing that naina too is pining for him the same way as him.



The gesture of sameer when he fills her maane with indoor rather lipstick since they had crossed the very boundary that she had set for them was simply superb to read about. Shows how much regard he has for her principles and values.

Perfect kiss and a perfect update
Waiting for more

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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi, Sam (Sur),

I just completed all the parts till now, to the sequel of your extremely popular and amazingly written Mt.Abu series.

I absolutely love the Mt. Abu series and the subtle way it depicted the romance, anger, anguish and the realization of love. And this sequel takes it from the love in school phase to the next stage in the journey of Sameer & Naina.

Stupendofantabulously written and expressed. I just loved this Darjeeling episode. And there is a definite reason behind it other than being masterfully written by you.

I guess you have already guessed the reason.

Yes! You are right! (If you were able to guess it)😃

Right after the eventful night of "NIGHT AFTER REUNION", we booked a long 2 weeks holiday covering the entire North East. (Darjeeling, Shillong, Cherapunji & Sikkim) I had an upcoming Conference with my lecture in it. Hence, other than attending the lecture, we made it into a vacation.

And some of the incidences you explained in your story, I experienced similar instances and could draw the analogy. This part just took me on that trip again.

Hence, right after a week of the events of the Night of the Renuion, my realization & confession followed by the intense acts of love, we were on the trip. As I explained in that part, the mind was unshackled and completely consumed by love, lust & desire. And the Darjeeling trip was gonna add some more spice to the mix.

Here are some of the connecting points with this part of your story:

1) Being Calm:

(Reading your story: Sameer was nervous about getting on to the stage. But seeing Naina, made him calm & relaxed. Once he was on the stage he just owned it. True Love always has that calming effect because he knows even if he does not do well, she will be waiting to shower him with love to do better the next time. That assurance of love can make anyone excel)

Connection:

It was the chilly Shillong Morning. We were at the Auditorium as my PPT was the next with video surgery demonstration. I was jittery because I hardly revised, prepared or slept the previous night. It was so unlike me. But what can I do? I and my partner in crime were so consumed with desire that nothing else was important than acting on the intimate desires.

And now I was jittery on stage. But from the stage, when I gazed at the beauty sitting among the delegates in the auditorium, she smiled and signaled love with fingers. That was all the tonic I required. I started and went on with the lecture. In fact, I showed some extra swag to show off to her.

Throughout the lecture, we had eye contacts (oblivious to anyone else) hungrily eying each other, and we both wanted the same thing. Finish this lecture and back to the suite to enjoy fulfilling the carnal fantasies.

But as pointed in your story, the slight loving assurance can make you do better than you think you can.

2) Jealousy:

(Reading your story: Jealousy was so well depicted between Sameer and Naina. First Naina was jealous seeing the attention Sameer was getting from all the girls and in fact giving to one of the girls. And next, it was time for Sameer to get jealous when a hunk approaches Naina and tries to mingle with her)

Connection:

It takes me back to that auditorium again. The lecture was going on in full swing. I was busy explaining all the points of the treatment plan. And in between, I will catch her eye, and when found, she will give me an assuring smile (for the things to come after the lecture when we are alone again). Women! They know you inside out!

She was looking unapologetically gorgeous in the blue-red saree adorning her fair skin. Soon ... we would be alone again! But, in that instance, I also noticed many doctors looking at her intermittently! From a practical POV I can't blame them. She was, as usual, looking stunning that day.

After the reunion confession night, she was more expressive and made it her mission to make me ogle her whenever she is in front of me.😆

But all through the lecture, I could see that she had eyes only on me with that cute silly love lorn proud smile.

But seeing others looking at her, I felt Anger and Jealousy. As explained before (in my story), due to my self-imposed isolation, I hardly experienced this kind of jealousy ever before. It was jealousy of love and protection! It was strong! Grrr !!!! Shooo !!! She is mine!

The lecture got over, and then there was the customary Q & A interactive session. Among the delegates, there were a good number of intelligent and pretty female doctors! They were quite animated in their discussions. Q & A sessions are essential to make a name. I knew she will get bored hearing my medical mumbo-jumbo.

So, I had asked the siren to sit near the AC till the Q & A gets over in a short time. And then in between the session, I looked at her, and I could feel her fuming with jealousy seeing me interacting with many female doctors. Her perfectly feminine nose was red with capital J. And as I was explaining the facial prosthesis on the face of one of the lady delegates, My Lady was fuming with Jealousy with redness extending from nose to cheek.

Once back in the suite, she expressed all her jealousy & frustration of waiting whole day by claiming me with authority and vigorous intimacy. That was the day I realized the power of healthy jealousy in love and how it can add spice.

You expressed this aspect so nicely in this part of your story.

3) Rain:

(Reading your story: There is something so special about rain! You have used it perfectly to explain the first kiss of Sameer & Naina with the throbbing ache to get more intimate. The initiation of desire filled days and nights. Rain makes both of them notice more aspects of each other increasing or intensifying their hunger for each other)

Connecting point:

Rain played a significant role in my trip too. Shimla and Cherapunji were excellent with the cute amount of Drizzles. The evening walk in Shimla among the drizzles was the most memorable.

We did buy umbrellas but didn't use it. Rain has a way of enhancing beauty. Her Sleeveless Tee and knee-length skirt were breathtaking in the rain. It was chilly (10*C) with rain showers. One hour of getting wet in the drizzle we were running back to our suite to generate some body heat to quench the intense heat of desire that that rain had induced.

That day I came to realize the true meaning of "Aag Barasti Hai Sawan Main"

Point to Note: Sameer & Naina should not stand or romance under a tree when it rains! Why? Lighting can strike under trees as trees act as a conductor. 😆

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So, thanks again for reconnecting me back to that trip on a Monday evening.

Also, you have rekindled in me the interest to watch the show YUDKBH again. I am a loyal fan. However, after the school phase got over, I could not connect much with the story progression. I became an irregular viewer.

So, I was happy watching the saved episodes from School phase including the Mt. Abu Episodes. But after reading your story, I will watch it tonight to check the growing level of love and intimacy.

Thank you again for a great story. Btw, the amount of romance and feelings you express in your stories, you should better plan a North East trip with your better half.

Here are some of the pics I took during my trip.

Hope it motivates you (If you haven't yet visited) to visit the places with your partner in crime. 😆



(View from our Suite 5 AM)



(Sikkim -- Snow Romance -- Who needs Swiss Alps)



(Tea at the Himalayas)



(Tsongo Lake - Chilly Romantic)

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Hey dear! Thank you so much! BTW...what do you like to be called? 😊 So you too like rains! 😊 I'm honoured that you felt I could do justice to their first kiss and the sindoor part as symbolic of being together. It is actually a difficult story for me to write, can't say why, but I'm glad you guys encourage me with your wonderful comments! 🤗😳
Love
Sur


Hi Sur

I am Isha. Really love the way you pen. Keep on writing and do give more and more to cherish.🤗

Rains...I adore them. From the smell of mother earth...the cool breeze ...the tingling droplets...the lullaby it sings...everything related to rain is soothing. Like a dear fiend, it brings in lot of solace.I have a bundle of childhood memories, the vacations I spent in Kerala feeling every droplet that wiped off every pain.

Oh..I can keep on writing when it comes to Rain, the maniac in me wont stop 😆😆

Lots of Love
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 1
Heyy Sur!
Chalo ab iska mahurat aa hi gaya😆
I wanted to do each chapter individually,coz love in Mt Abu ke liye nahi kar payi-uske liye pura saal lag jata😃😆
So Sameer is late to college...somehow I can imagine this happening everyday😆uska shakal dekhte hi lagta hai ki yeh Banda late Latif hai😆
He obviously has some plan up his sleeve for nainas bday😆
Loved loved Sameer jealous maheshwari😆
Pata nahi show me kab dikhega,ab toh main tum logo ki stories hi padhke khush ho jati hun😛
He was so cute, childishly demanding ki woh dusre ladkon se baat nah kare😆
Banda Naina ke saamne bilkul baccha ban jaata hai
Aur Naina toh usse manana bhi Jaan gayi😉
Aww man...bell ne "ek baar'' ka band baja diya😆
Warna Sameer chodne walon me se thodi hai😉😉
Ab baki chapters padhke aati hun😉
Love,
Viji
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: doublecross


Sur am so late on this so am a bit embarrassed. But since you understand my predicament at this moment so I won't apologise.
Hey Pooja...don't worry! 😊 I know how life is for you these days...and you still find the time to read n review...I couldn't be more grateful! 🤗

First kiss, it's that special moment when you have your first brush with intimacy. The fact that lips can unleash a riot within and make your inside churn and turn in the most special ways making you flutter is often unknown to us apart from all the romance novels, that regale us with the importance and the connection that we make with our beloved. So first kiss is important and special.
Wow Pooja! You are right...a kiss is the first step to intimacy...and though one would have seen people do it on screen or read about the most passionate of kisses in romance novels, it is a completely different thing to experience it first hand...especially when the moment is one whom you ardently love! 😳

What I loved about this update was it had a mix of everything. In the very beginning the way naina sets sameer's tie it gave me hubby wifey feels imagining the scenario. It was beautiful how they remnicises their time spent in mount abu any and the little details that come back in flashbacks is endearing to read about. Though the culmination of the trip had led naina to know about the bet but True...the bet is now, nothing but the reason they came closer, together and understood the real person behind their facade! Sometimes, I wonder how things would have been if the bet had not been placed...perhaps Sameer would have continued to ridicule "the behenji and teacher ki chamchi" along with his friends n may never have even have extended the hand of friendship to her...Well, all's well that ends well! 😊 I'm glad you liked the way I tried to change the mood of the story and the incorporation of their earlier experiences! 😳

Often we are chiding the cvs on this forum for making naina jealous all the time. When I was reading the part here I felt as if it was a repeat performance but sur you never cease to surprise the way naina have it back to him, that t it for rat smirk and then when she relented to a dance with a stranger that was all so Good, I loved the way sameer reacted. He had to literally snatch her off that strangers arms, it felt as if he growled through his eyes making the world know that she was his and only his and no man on earth has the right to hold her, to caress her, to love her, protect her and keep her close. It felt as if he was shouting 'mine' with that gesture.
Well, he actually did shriek "mine" (only that he did it with his eyes!) 😳 I know...even I'm tired of Naina being jealous all the while. Well, most often in these kind of relationships, the outgoing person (apparently more good-looking) tends to tease his partner and make her jealous. He/ She enjoys their possessive streak. But then, it is again not uncommon to see their own envy multplied a hundred-fold, when they get a taste of their own medicine. They can't take it when some intruder dares to take an interest in the person they ardently love, even if it had been only offhand. They have it very clear in their minds that their partner is not for sharing, even available to be stared at. I've tried to show Sameer and Naina as such a couple here!

Am often commending Mou for the vivid imagery that she paints with her vocabulary but here you bowled me over. The rains and the vivid imagery that you painted of the locales, the must, the alluring weather and the snowballed Himalayas felt like the perfect setting for romance. I could her the pitter patter of the rains and feel the cool weather, infact it made me shiver too.
Aww my dear! I'm honoured...thank you so much...I'm glad I could present the entire scenario in a way, which was easy to picturize! 😳🤗

Now the kiss, well I am stunned and dumbfounded by it. The very prelude to it, the dance in the rain, the sensuous moves of naina and those silent exchange through eyes. The blushes and those steamy desirous eyes of them both gave me goosebumps. Especially sameer assessing Nina and her curves while naina glued to his rain drenched physique was tantalizing to read about. Their miss started off slow and steady only to break into a rhythm and the rhythm matched with that of the rains. If it came down in sheets unleashing the wild side of nature the kiss too helped unleashing all their desires that they had been harbouring for each other for long. They were careful with their caresses but the thirst to explore could clearly be felt in each of their touches and then the boldness of naina when she pushes him across the tree to have her fair share of way with him was simply enchanting. If it surprised sameer answer then it all acquiesced one thing that naina too is pining for him the same way as him.

Thank you so much dear Pooja! That's right...Sameer and Naina have been in a relationship for over two years now...they have transcended from adolescence to adulthood...I wanted to show that both of them indeed harbour feelings, and desires of being together- not just emotionally, but physically as well. Sameer in fact, being a boy, would be more eager to explore the new emotions creeping up inside him, whenever he's with Naina, yet he restrains himself so as not to make her uncomfortable...but once he too realizes that she too may be desirous of the same thing as him, he decides to make a move. He wants their first kiss to be special and he wants both of them to enjoy it. And Naina, well, she is the simpleton, but she is a woman deep down. A woman, who's ardently in love with a man. She is shy to give voice to her emotions, is bound by her morals and her virtues, yet love does give in sometimes. And when two people truly love each other, a kiss, I feel is like a seal to their togetherness- a promise to surrender wholly, unconditionally to the other, when the time is right!

The gesture of sameer when he fills her maane with indoor rather lipstick since they had crossed the very boundary that she had set for them was simply superb to read about. Shows how much regard he has for her principles and values.
Yes...I wanted to express the fact here that Sameer has already decided that Naina is going to be his wedded wife. He's crystal clear on that and doesn't have any qualms in being close to her. Yet he respects her moral values, her boundaries and knows they should keep certain limits till they are married for real. Glad you appreciated it! 😳
Perfect kiss and a perfect update
Thanks Pooja! 🤗
Waiting for more

Pooja...sorry for the late reply dear...my comments in blue.
Love
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Booklover94

Chapter 1

Heyy Sur!
Chalo ab iska mahurat aa hi gaya😆
Welcome aboard dear! 😃
I wanted to do each chapter individually,coz love in Mt Abu ke liye nahi kar payi-uske liye pura saal lag jata😃😆
Arey haan! I totally understand...that's so sweet of you Viji! 😳
So Sameer is late to college...somehow I can imagine this happening everyday😆uska shakal dekhte hi lagta hai ki yeh Banda late Latif hai😆
Haha...school me bhi late...college mein bhi late...Naina college mein na hoti to banda class mein aata bhi nahi! 😆
He obviously has some plan up his sleeve for nainas bday😆
He has! 😉
Loved loved Sameer jealous maheshwari😆
Hayee...fandom ki demand yaar...show me kab milegi...maine to bhadas nikal di apni! 😆
Pata nahi show me kab dikhega,ab toh main tum logo ki stories hi padhke khush ho jati hun😛
Ditto!
He was so cute, childishly demanding ki woh dusre ladkon se baat nah kare😆
Banda Naina ke saamne bilkul baccha ban jaata hai
Aur Naina toh usse manana bhi Jaan gayi😉
Aww man...bell ne "ek baar'' ka band baja diya😆
Warna Sameer chodne walon me se thodi hai😉😉
Ab baki chapters padhke aati hun😉
Haha...haan bachha to ban jata hai Sameer Naina ke saamne...innocent type...but zyada bhi innocent nai hai...chance pe dance maarne ka mauka nai chodta...koi na...ye part present me tha- their final year of college...next section (past events- 2nd year) mein tumko kiss bhi milega! 😆
Love,
Viji

Dear Viji!
Happy reading! Hope you like the other parts as well! My replies in blue!
Love
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Dr.Don

Hi, Sam (Sur),

I just completed all the parts till now, to the sequel of your extremely popular and amazingly written Mt.Abu series.

I absolutely love the Mt. Abu series and the subtle way it depicted the romance, anger, anguish and the realization of love. And this sequel takes it from the love in school phase to the next stage in the journey of Sameer & Naina.

Stupendofantabulously written and expressed. I just loved this Darjeeling episode. And there is a definite reason behind it other than being masterfully written by you.

Hey Doc! Welcome back! I read & re-read your comment the day it was posted...but then my tight schedules don't allow me to be on time these days! 😕 My apologies for that!
I'm glad you could catch up on the remaining parts of Love in Mt. Abu and the sequel too! Thank you so much Doc! I feel so happy that you still have the same love for the story as you had before! 😳 Makes me feel the efforts are worthwhile! 😊

I guess you have already guessed the reason.

Yes! You are right! (If you were able to guess it)😃
Haha...I actually kind of guessed the reason! 😆
Right after the eventful night of "NIGHT AFTER REUNION", we booked a long 2 weeks holiday covering the entire North East. (Darjeeling, Shillong, Cherapunji & Sikkim) I had an upcoming Conference with my lecture in it. Hence, other than attending the lecture, we made it into a vacation.

And some of the incidences you explained in your story, I experienced similar instances and could draw the analogy. This part just took me on that trip again.

Hence, right after a week of the events of the Night of the Renuion, my realization & confession followed by the intense acts of love, we were on the trip. As I explained in that part, the mind was unshackled and completely consumed by love, lust & desire. And the Darjeeling trip was gonna add some more spice to the mix.
Ahan! I'm sure! 😃 North East is a really beautiful place...I really love it! 😳

Here are some of the connecting points with this part of your story:

1) Being Calm:

(Reading your story: Sameer was nervous about getting on to the stage. But seeing Naina, made him calm & relaxed. Once he was on the stage he just owned it. True Love always has that calming effect because he knows even if he does not do well, she will be waiting to shower him with love to do better the next time. That assurance of love can make anyone excel)

Connection:

It was the chilly Shillong Morning. We were at the Auditorium as my PPT was the next with video surgery demonstration. I was jittery because I hardly revised, prepared or slept the previous night. It was so unlike me. But what can I do? I and my partner in crime were so consumed with desire that nothing else was important than acting on the intimate desires.

And now I was jittery on stage. But from the stage, when I gazed at the beauty sitting among the delegates in the auditorium, she smiled and signaled love with fingers. That was all the tonic I required. I started and went on with the lecture. In fact, I showed some extra swag to show off to her.

Throughout the lecture, we had eye contacts (oblivious to anyone else) hungrily eying each other, and we both wanted the same thing. Finish this lecture and back to the suite to enjoy fulfilling the carnal fantasies.

But as pointed in your story, the slight loving assurance can make you do better than you think you can.

Wow Doc! The incidents in my story correlated so closely to yours! And that you were in Sameer's situation with your Naina supporting you from the audience- oblivious to all. Like Sameer n Naina shared their lone moments through their eyes, you did so too with your wife! The only difference being poor Sameer and Naina aren't married here...infact haven't taken the first step to intimacy as yet! 😆
As I've said before, I really enjoy reading your comments and your story! You should definitely write more! 😊

2) Jealousy:

(Reading your story: Jealousy was so well depicted between Sameer and Naina. First Naina was jealous seeing the attention Sameer was getting from all the girls and in fact giving to one of the girls. And next, it was time for Sameer to get jealous when a hunk approaches Naina and tries to mingle with her)

Connection:

It takes me back to that auditorium again. The lecture was going on in full swing. I was busy explaining all the points of the treatment plan. And in between, I will catch her eye, and when found, she will give me an assuring smile (for the things to come after the lecture when we are alone again). Women! They know you inside out!

She was looking unapologetically gorgeous in the blue-red saree adorning her fair skin. Soon ... we would be alone again! But, in that instance, I also noticed many doctors looking at her intermittently! From a practical POV I can't blame them. She was, as usual, looking stunning that day.

After the reunion confession night, she was more expressive and made it her mission to make me ogle her whenever she is in front of me.😆

But all through the lecture, I could see that she had eyes only on me with that cute silly love lorn proud smile.

But seeing others looking at her, I felt Anger and Jealousy. As explained before (in my story), due to my self-imposed isolation, I hardly experienced this kind of jealousy ever before. It was jealousy of love and protection! It was strong! Grrr !!!! Shooo !!! She is mine!

The lecture got over, and then there was the customary Q & A interactive session. Among the delegates, there were a good number of intelligent and pretty female doctors! They were quite animated in their discussions. Q & A sessions are essential to make a name. I knew she will get bored hearing my medical mumbo-jumbo.

So, I had asked the siren to sit near the AC till the Q & A gets over in a short time. And then in between the session, I looked at her, and I could feel her fuming with jealousy seeing me interacting with many female doctors. Her perfectly feminine nose was red with capital J. And as I was explaining the facial prosthesis on the face of one of the lady delegates, My Lady was fuming with Jealousy with redness extending from nose to cheek.

Once back in the suite, she expressed all her jealousy & frustration of waiting whole day by claiming me with authority and vigorous intimacy. That was the day I realized the power of healthy jealousy in love and how it can add spice.

You expressed this aspect so nicely in this part of your story.

And so you are a plastic surgeon! Wow!
I'm actually thinking it's so uncanny no? Again jealousy...that too from both the ends...while it is normal for Naina to feel jealous whenever a girl approaches Sameer, it is easy to see how protective Sam instantly becomes whenever he gets a taste of his own medicine.
Loved to read your parallels to this one! Thanks for sharing Doc!
Well, her jealousy served you well! 😃😆

3) Rain:

(Reading your story: There is something so special about rain! You have used it perfectly to explain the first kiss of Sameer & Naina with the throbbing ache to get more intimate. The initiation of desire filled days and nights. Rain makes both of them notice more aspects of each other increasing or intensifying their hunger for each other)
I love rains Doc! And the reason I enjoyed your updated story all the more was because of the rain factor. I feel rains have a way of expressing different emotions- be it happiness, carnal desires, love, or morosity or even nostalgia...I can relate to rain anytime! 😆

Connecting point:

Rain played a significant role in my trip too. Shimla and Cherapunji were excellent with the cute amount of Drizzles. The evening walk in Shimla among the drizzles was the most memorable.

We did buy umbrellas but didn't use it. Rain has a way of enhancing beauty. Her Sleeveless Tee and knee-length skirt were breathtaking in the rain. It was chilly (10*C) with rain showers. One hour of getting wet in the drizzle we were running back to our suite to generate some body heat to quench the intense heat of desire that that rain had induced.
I don't believe in buying umbrellas these days! 😆 It doesn't rain much where I live though and even if it does, it's hardly intense!

That day I came to realize the true meaning of "Aag Barasti Hai Sawan Main"
Haha...you realized the meaning...when would our dear Naina ask this to Sameer? 😆

Point to Note: Sameer & Naina should not stand or romance under a tree when it rains! Why? Lighting can strike under trees as trees act as a conductor. 😆
Oh of course Doc! Rains would make a tree a conductor...😲😲 How did I overlook the fact? Blame the romantic in me to overlook science! 😆 Well, you'll see a similar thing in one of my One shots, titled the same, "Aag barasti hai sawan mein!"
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So, thanks again for reconnecting me back to that trip on a Monday evening.
My pleasure Doc!😊

Also, you have rekindled in me the interest to watch the show YUDKBH again. I am a loyal fan. However, after the school phase got over, I could not connect much with the story progression. I became an irregular viewer.

So, I was happy watching the saved episodes from School phase including the Mt. Abu Episodes. But after reading your story, I will watch it tonight to check the growing level of love and intimacy.
I totally relate to you Doc! I too can rewatch the episodes till Mt. Abu umpteen times...yet after the pathetic execution of the Delhi track and without exploiting the avenues in college much, I really don't blame you here. Though I still have hopes of the show jumping back to its former glory and initiation of some level of intimacy. Some episodes have been good in between, like when they get back together in college, the chemistry is as sparkling as ever. Then the recent two-three episodes...let's hope for some moments now! 😃

Thank you again for a great story. Btw, the amount of romance and feelings you express in your stories, you should better plan a North East trip with your better half.
I did travel to Bhutan last year Doc..though Darjeeling n Sikkim were also planned, but couldn't complete them due to the Bengal bandh last year. And we both made sure, the trip was during the rains...though of lesser intensity (so that we don't get stranded on the mountains, not that I mind that 😆). I've also been to Meghalaya long back, but yeah, as I've said before...it still tops my list of the most beautiful places to see in India! 😳

Here are some of the pics I took during my trip.

Hope it motivates you (If you haven't yet visited) to visit the places with your partner in crime. 😆
Your pics are lovely Doc! Thanks for sharing!
I'm pathetic at photography, except for a few lucky clicks😆! So all the more credit to you! 😃



(View from our Suite 5 AM)



(Sikkim -- Snow Romance -- Who needs Swiss Alps)



(Tea at the Himalayas)



(Tsongo Lake - Chilly Romantic)

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Thanks for the detailed review and sharing your experiences along the same lines Doc!
My replies in BOLD RED.

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