SS- when destiny forces you to cross the path!Chp 20 pg 90(updated) - Page 44

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Komalp1391

both the updates are fantabulous.

ur story is really a masterpiece
naina is fighthing for sams case its wonderful
the smile over sams face after seeing naina would be priceless
the preceedings in the court were beautifully explained
all the best for ur exams



thnx u DEAR!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Veda1125

Nia, Excellent updates! Hope ur exams are going well! Good luck for the rest of the papers! Thanks for the PM!


exams Wer ok...thnx u so much dear!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: arshuaar

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">All the best for your exam.👍🏼
amazing...
read all parts in one go...
loved it...
amazing write up...
8 long years Naina is back ...
sameer's happiness...
Let's hope for their best.</font>





thnx u dear!!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Nia! Pehle to terribly sorry for this super duper late reply...I took some time to read the past few updates n then to comment upon them. I always wanted to type out a big fat reply for each, but then life has really turned hectic for me...

So I'll start with where I left off...the bet revelation was as expected sad...but what touched me the way Sameer realized just before that he was in love with Naina...you are my light...the hill convo is my personal fav! And then Naina's anger on Swati...thinking she chose love over friendship...which she kind of did..
Sameer's guilt n pining for her...n then never getting a chance to explain...Nanu's death n Naina sealing their separation fate for a while by leaving for Delhi...she wanted him to come, believed that he would come...but post that...she only listened to her mind. I love how you've represented an alter story here with Sameer already being in love with her..Naina's guilt for being unjust to Sameer was heart wrenching...if only she'd asked for an explanation...how lack of communication complicates things...Sameer's belief that she would come back...
The courtroom scenes were epic...I cried...no jokes here as Naina paced ahead n rapped Malhotra for declaring Sameer guilty without any proof..
I was reminded of that movie...Akshay Kumar, Priyanka Chopra, Kareena Kapoor...kya naam tha yaar...the movie like your story represented the side of a man accused in a physical assault case.

After all, being a man doesn't make one guilty...image n respect are same for both genders...kudos to u for bringing it out...I loved how the love brimming deep down was rekindled as their eyes finally locked...I was hoping Naina would run n kiss Sameer fair n square...obviously imaginative...but this is what your update made me do...feel good n romantic n hopeful of a reunion of estranged lovers!
Love,
Sur



m so glad that u took out time n read n gave such a wonderful analysis in the form of reply...thnx a ton dear!!!!

The movie name u Wer talking abt is aitraaz...n d story is inspired frm there!!!

I really believe in it that if no frm a girl means no...then that same applies to guyz as well...no means no!!!

Thnx u so much for liking...I will soon continue...as it is story is nearing its end!!!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey!!! Hi!!! Please do update ur story...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Uv78

Hey!!! Hi!!! Please do update ur story...



I will soon update it dear...in a day or two pakka!!!

Actually exams k baad dimag chalna band hogaya hai...n nw to m suppose to write the climax...Maha Milan...which shd b interesting...so taking thoda time!!!

Bt pakka in a day or 2
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Posted: 7 years ago
Have been a silent reader... reading your story from start... it's wonderful... please update the next part soon and do pm me
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CrazyGirlRashi

Have been a silent reader... reading your story from start... it's wonderful... please update the next part soon and do pm me




thnx u dear...will definitely pm u...n will update soon!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Please please please update soon...eagerly waiting for them to meet
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: surbharati

Please please please update soon...eagerly waiting for them to meet


Monday or Tuesday pakka there will b one short update!!!

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