Occasionally in life there are those moments of unutterable fulfillment which cannot be completely explained by those symbols called words. Their meanings can only be articulated by the inaudible language of the heart...😳
Mou! You have really set the benchmark.👏 I would only say keep raising the bench.👍🏼Apt words for apt situation.
In a criticism of Shakespeare's works,I remember a critic commenting that a Man other than simply being homely or warrior should also sometimes be beastly.To fest upon his lady other than food and wine.
Hence I loved the backdrop of Sameer you have built here.He was tired and frustrated from the journey and here this girl was testing his waters.Damn.
And for Naina she had two -three lessons to learn.If first was the physical kiss then the eternal subject was that when we give freely, we feel full and complete; when we withhold, we feel small, petty, impotent, and lacking. We are meant to learn this great truth, that giving fulfills us, while withholding and trying to get causes us to feel empty and even more needy.
All in all a beautiful piece and a feather in your cap of storyteller.Keep up the good work and keep coming with more.
With love-
Minu.😳
Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 7 years ago