Sameer-Naina TS: Fulfillment (Part 2 updated on Page 7) - Page 10

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Posted: 7 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Shiraaz

I have read this thrice...and I know will read this for God knows how many times😳 again and again..

So sensuous and passionate..absolutely in love with this❤️
Please do care to write part 3..:)
Ps: while I was reading this, my mom was sitting beside me..and saw me blushing☺️


Hey Shira, Thank you so so much for your appreciation!! 😳
Thrice..!! Oh goodness... I am feeling humbled and motivated... This one is just a two-shot story, but I will try and write another story or OS... 😊

Goodness... Hope your mom didn't ask why you were blushing... 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Occasionally in life there are those moments of unutterable fulfillment which cannot be completely explained by those symbols called words. Their meanings can only be articulated by the inaudible language of the heart...😳

Mou! You have really set the benchmark.👏 I would only say keep raising the bench.👍🏼Apt words for apt situation.

In a criticism of Shakespeare's works,I remember a critic commenting that a Man other than simply being homely or warrior should also sometimes be beastly.To fest upon his lady other than food and wine.
Hence I loved the backdrop of Sameer you have built here.He was tired and frustrated from the journey and here this girl was testing his waters.Damn.

And for Naina she had two -three lessons to learn.If first was the physical kiss then the eternal subject was that when we give freely, we feel full and complete; when we withhold, we feel small, petty, impotent, and lacking. We are meant to learn this great truth, that giving fulfills us, while withholding and trying to get causes us to feel empty and even more needy.

All in all a beautiful piece and a feather in your cap of storyteller.Keep up the good work and keep coming with more.

With love-
Minu.😳
Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: moumita04


Hey Shira, Thank you so so much for your appreciation!! 😳
Thrice..!! Oh goodness... I am feeling humbled and motivated... This one is just a two-shot story, but I will try and write another story or OS... 😊

Goodness... Hope your mom didn't ask why you were blushing... 😆

Oky now I have read both the parts again..😳 fortunately This time mom was not nearby..😆
Great..I'll be waiting for your pm for another story/ OS...😛 hope That would be asanskari too😉
Haha actually she did ask me what happened.. and I just gave her a lame reply..
Edited by Shiraaz - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow that was amazing
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Occasionally in life there are those moments of unutterable fulfillment which cannot be completely explained by those symbols called words. Their meanings can only be articulated by the inaudible language of the heart...😳

Mou! You have really set the benchmark.👏 I would only say keep raising the bench.👍🏼Apt words for apt situation.

In a criticism of Shakespeare's works,I remember a critic commenting that a Man other than simply being homely or warrior should also sometimes be beastly.To fest upon his lady other than food and wine.
Hence I loved the backdrop of Sameer you have built here.He was tired and frustrated from the journey and here this girl was testing his waters.Damn.

And for Naina she had two -three lessons to learn.If first was the physical kiss then the eternal subject was that when we give freely, we feel full and complete; when we withhold, we feel small, petty, impotent, and lacking. We are meant to learn this great truth, that giving fulfills us, while withholding and trying to get causes us to feel empty and even more needy.

All in all a beautiful piece and a feather in your cap of storyteller.Keep up the good work and keep coming with more.

With love-
Minu.😳


Minu!! You left me speechless... I read your comment 5-6 times and trust me, I am grinning like an idiot right now...!! Thank you so so sooo much for such an amazing note... 😃😃😃

I am simply so happy, that I don't think I can do justice with a proper detailed reply right now!! But, it's so wonderful to know that you completely understood the fulfillment I was trying to describe in my story...!! Hugs to you for that... 🤗🤗

Lots of Love,
Mou
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Shiraaz

Oky now I have read both the parts again..😳 fortunately This time mom was not nearby..😆
Great..I'll be waiting for your pm for another story/ OS...😛 hope That would be asanskari too😉
Haha actually she did ask me what happened.. and I just gave her a lame reply..


@Bold: You are making me happier and happier... 😃😃
Thank you soo much Shira...!! As for the OS, I haven't planned anything but will surely try to fulfill your wish...! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97

Thank you so much dear!! 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Aye Haye!
Just awesome😉😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: kb_always_96

Aye Haye!

Just awesome😉😉


Thank you so much Abhi...!! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hmmm...the bed shud had been here😆!thy wud hve probably made out several times .!! Such hotness n such passion ...jus made me go numb!!Electrifying kiss n Sammy beta demonstrating his long impending skills na jabe kab se...!wat i loved is the detailing of each act..tat very aspect of moving towards her .holding her tight n demonstrating wat his desires r for her...wat she actually means to him...the unsatiated hunger that needed a sort of release ...a respite that both were craving for...i loved him lifting her off the feet n tat vision mkes for a sensuous lovemaking posture...can jus imagine how difficult is for Sam beta to control n how Naina must hve felt!..Tat jus made me feel so hot...😆All in all Mou..jus njoyed reading it n will really wait sme day for palangtod romance from u...im sure u wud do justice in fulfilling our demands!!

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