OS: Samina: DO dil Ek jaan part 2 (@pg 3)

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Hi guys

Trying for 1st time here in this Forum

Naina was reading in Boarding school but now due to financial crisis she has to come back and get admission in munciplaity school where her father Rakesh is librarian and elder brother Arjun is reading .

Sameer is local goon who is incharge of Naina Society. He has his right hand and left hand Munna and pandit.

It was 1st day of school .Naina was little nervous little excited and little upset too as she has to come here leaving all her friends. She was asking her bela chachi for Breakfast, suddenly ball came breaking the glass of the window and hit chachi. Naina in anger came out in balcolny and shouted "who has thrown this ball ?

Munna came and said "Hamare Sameer Bhai ne aur tum ho kaun jo itni unchi awwaz mein bol rahi ho, sayad tum yahan ke usool ko janti nahi

Naina: kaise usool aur kya tumhare ya tumhare sameer bhai ke usool ki kitab mein yeh nahi likha ki public place mein criket nahi Khelte, anpad gabar kahin ke

Pandit in anger: oye chokri aukat mein reh kar baat kar. Tujhe pata nahi tum kiske bare mein baat kar rahi ho. Oye bela aunty samjha apni ladki ko nahi to tumlog ko par bhari par jayega

Naina: Dhamki kisko deta hai , himaat hai to apne us sameer bhai ko bolo face to face baat kare , apne chamcho ke bal par kya uchal raha hai, aur haan yeh jo kaanch tode ho uske paise bhi de do.

Bela ask naina to cool down and leave them.

Bela: beta bhagwan jhooth na bulaye, inke muh mat lag yeh log accha nahi hai

Naina: chachi hum inse jitna darege who hame utna darayege...aise sadak chap logo ko unki aukat dikha dena chayie.

Bela:naina chup ho jaa aur chaloo yahan se

Naina was about to leave for the school and suddenly their was knock in the door.

Bela open the door and he face become pale as Sameer- The sameer maheswari was standing in front of her.

Sameer: Aunty ji mujhe apse nahi apki bhatiji se kaam hai. Aap kripa kar ke andar room mein chale jaye.

Bela: beta maaf kar do who nayi aayi hai usko tumhare bare mein kuch nahi pata .bhagwan jhooth na bulaye use mein samjha dogi.

Munna and Pandit ask Bela to go to room in strict way

Naina: chachi kaun hai aur apka chera koi latka hua hai aur app kahan jaa rahi hai

Sameer: koiki humne bola hai.

Naina Turn and see Sameer and even sameer was lost in naina innocent face.

Their was eyelock between them (BG music was going on)

Munna: Bhai yehi hai who ladki jisne apko challenge kiya aur paise mange

Sameer walk towards Naina and naina walk behind . after 10 steps naina was struck in wall

Sameer come near to her , more near naina breathe was abnormal now. Even sameer was uncomfortable but his eyes was freedze on Naina.

Slowly he take his hand towards her . ...NainaDekho tum mujhe aise nahi touch kar sakte. I will call police.

Sameer was still looking her and pinned her to the wall. Slowly slowly he was pretending touchin naina from shoulder to hand. Naina closed her eyes.

But suddenly naina feel that she is free and slowly she open her eyes and saw sameer standing with Cricket Bat which was near to her where she was standing.

Sameer move slowly slowly toeards window without blinking his eyes and continuously he was seeing Naina.He can feel that Naina was nervous and scared. He started breaking all the glasses of windows of the house 1 by 1 and he was looking to Naina. Naina has shut her eyes and closed her ears by hand and tears was coming out of closed eyes.

After few second their was Pin drop of silence , naina slowly open her eyes and found Sameer standing in front of her. Their was very short distance between them and they can hear each other breathe.

Sameer :Munna ab madam ji ko pure glass ka paise de do and inko carpenter ka number bhi de dena. Nayi aayi hai inko kuch bhi pata nahi hoga.

Munna keep amount in table. All 3 left the house leaving Behind Naina in statue position.

Hope guys you like it. If you guys want to continue please leave the comment


Part 2- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4966168&TPN=3&#p146473657

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BinnyP thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice story dear..U hv an amazing writing skill,please keep it up and update it soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Binta13

Nice story dear..U hv an amazing writing skill,please keep it up and update it soon..

Thank You dear😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Imagining sameer as goon 😆 ... Anyways it was a nice idea .. pls continue
Edited by suhaaniladki - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

Imagining sameer as goon


Chickna Goon😉😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hailaaa randeep ismey bhi kamaal ka hi lg rha h ... 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was so good.. 👍🏼
Please do continue..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

Hailaaa randeep ismey bhi kamaal ka hi lg rha h ... 😆


Just imagine randeep after tod fod window ..he is sweating and open up his shirt...😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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A different concept.. Sameer as goon😆... Good start.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Different concept...But i loved it...Pls update soon ...Would like to know more about how their attraction starts their love story😳

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