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Posted: 6 years ago
I know you all waiting for next update...but I am really really sorry...busy with personal and professional stuffs...lot of things going on at professional front...need to dedicate time there

To update one part i need to dedicate 4 to 5 hrs...which is getting difficult..

Will try to update by this weekend

Extremely sorry for this
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks for update but please update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
it's been so long since you updated. eagerly waiting for the next update
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Sorry guys for making you wait...another one hour..I will post next update
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Extremely sorry sorry sorry for making you wait for the next update...Please apologies me...I am here back with next update...Please let me know your views in comment



Part 20

It was around 10.30 pm, Naina was restless because Sameer didn't speak to her entire day & there Sameer was worried, what if Naina's father doesn't accept there relationship...will she still stand with me...or will she leave me. Sameer was scared of thought of loosing her.

He was in his deep thoughts and the phone rang. Naina was on other side. As soon as Sameer picked up the call she started complaining.


Naina: Sameer pure din tumne mujhse baat nahi ki...ek message bhi nahi...Munna ne bata ya ki shoot se bhi tum jaldi chale gaye the...Kya hua hai Sameer...mein keh deti hoon...tum kitne bhi busy ho...jab bhi mein phone karu...tumhe jawaab dena hi hoga...atleast itna ki mein busy hoon aur call karta hoon thodi der mein. Sameer if I don't listen to your voice I become restless. For God sake kuch toh bolo. Sun rahe ho...itne shant kyun ho?


Finally Sameer breaks his silence

Sameer: Naina...agar tumhare Papa humare rishtey ke liye nahi maane to tum kya karogi?


Naina: Sameer kya baatein kar rahe hoon...woh kyun nahi manenge...tumne dekha nahi ki woh kitne khush the us din


Sameer: Nahi Naina...mujhe aise nahi lag raha hai...mujhe kyun lag raha hai ki woh khush nahi hai


Naina: Aise kuch nahi hai


Sameer: Tumne Jawaab nahi diya ki tum kya karogi...agar Papa nahi maane toh


Naina: Sameer I think humein sona chahiye...kyun ki tum baat karne ke mood mein nahi ho..aur unecessary bateein soch rahe ho and she cuts the phone


Sameer gets depressed and gets scared of loosing her. He says himself, "main kaise samjhao tumhe...aaj kya kya hua...pehle toh mein khush tha...but unhone dil se accept nahi kiya...na unhone meri family se thik se baat ki...Naina mujhe darr lag raha hai


Naina starts thinking on Sameers word and she too realizes that her Dad didn't even spoke a word about Sameer to her. She too got scared and decided to go and speak with her dad. She goes down stairs and knocks her parents room door.
Her Dad opens the door and says, "Naina tum...kya hua sab thik hai


Naina: Papa mujhe aap se baat karni hai


Listening there conversation even Smita wakes up


Rakesh: Haan beta andar aao


They all sat on the bed...Naina takes a pillow in her hand and starts speaking


Naina: Papa itna kuch ho gaya but aapne mujhse ek baar bhi baat nahi ki


Rakesh: Kis bare mein


Naina: Papa...Sameer...Aapko Sameer kaise laga...aapne har ek choti cheez mujhse discuss ki hai...aaj 2 3 din ho gaye lekin aapne khulke baat bhi nahi ki...aap khush ho is rishte se...aap ko Sameer pasand toh hai na



There was silence in the room and this silence was killing Naina. She kept pillow aside, went near to her dad, took his hand in her hand again asked


Naina: Papa...aapne jawaab nahi diya...your silence is killing me


Rakesh: Tum mujhe aaj ye sawaal kyun puch raho hoon


Naina: Mere liye ye janana jaroori hai...ki aap kya soch rahe ho...waha Sameer ne bhi mujhe yahi sawaal kiya...ki Papa agar nahi maane toh main kya karungi..use lag raha hai ki aap ko ye rishta pasand nahi hai...main use samjha rahi hoon ki aisa kuch nahi hai...lekin woh samaj nahi raha hai...Papa...Sameer galat hai na


Rakesh: Removes her hand from his hand and goes near window.


Naina: Papa your silence is killing me...kuch toh boliye


Rakesh: Main khush nahi hoon is rishte se...tum dono bahot alag ho...dono ke profession alag hai...aage problems ho sakti hai.


Naina: Hum compromise karna jante hai...hum samjhte hai ek dusre ko, ek dusre ko space dete hai, we have respect for each other and for each other professions too...sabse important hum trust karte ek dusre ko



Rakesh: Naina maine bol diya mujhe jo bolna tha...tum jo chaho wo kar sakti ho...but mujhse kuch expect mat karna.


Smita tries to intervene: Lekin Rakesh...Sameer acha ladka hai


Rakesh: maine kab kaha ki who acha nahi hai...Naina faisla tumhara hai tum kya karna chahati ho.


Naina: Papa mein aap se bahot pyaar karti hoon...aur Sameer se bhi...main aap dono ke bina ji nahi sakti...ek meri saans hai to ek dhadkan...kaise jiyungi agar kisi ek ka saath chooth jaye toh...Papa mein aapko kabhi bhi force nahi karungi ki ye rishta aap accept karlo meri liye...jab tak aap dilse is rishte ko accept nahi karte hum shaadi nahi karenge...lekin main Sameer ka saath kabhi nahi chodungi...usse humesha aise hi pyaar karungi...hum aapko prove karke dikhayenge ki hum alag hone ke bawajood humare dil ek hai...I love you Papa and she hugs him. Papa mujhe Sameer ko pyaar karne se...uske pass jane se koi nahi rok sakta...kabhi nahi..hum intezar karenge aapki acceptance ka...Naina then leaves.


Rakesh: Kaha ja rahi ho


Naina: Sameer disturb hai papa...use ye batana bhi bahoot jaroori hai ki uski Naina uska saath chodkar kabhi bhi nahi jayegi...jitna main aap se pyaar karti hoon utna hi usse bhi karti hoon. Main abhi aayi use ye batake.



Smita: Beta itni raat ko


Naina: Wo soyega nahi Mummy


Smita: Looking at Rakesh...aap usse rokte kyunnahi


Naina leaves the home...Smita is angry on Rakesh


Smita: Kya kar rahe ho aap...Sameer itna acha ladka hai...Aap bhi dhund nahi pate aisa ladka hai woh...Naina ko khush rakhega...Ache sanskar hai Sameer mein


Rakesh comes near Smita and says, "shhh


Rakesh: Mujhe Sameer bahot pasand hai...main toh Naina ka test le raha tha...Sameer toh test mein pass ho gaya...woh sach mein acha ladka hai...bahot acha ladka...woh khush rakhega humari Naina ko...thoda drama banta hai na...agar koi cheez asani se mil jaye toh maaza kaisa...aur bacho ko asani se mili hui cheezo ki ahmiyaat pata nahi chalti...Tum Naina se kuch mat kehna...Hum kal subah Sameer ke ghar jayenge...rishtey ki baat karne...maine uske family se thik se baat bhi nahi ki. Kya soch rahe honge woh log humare baare mein.



Listening to this Smita said, "Tumne toh dara diya mujhe...Lekin ab ye ladki itni raat ko Sameer se milne gayi...kuch ho gaya toh



Rakesh: Daro mat ab Sameer uske saath hai woh usse ghar ke darwaze tak chod dega...tum nischint hoke so jao...mere damaad pe mujhe pura vishwaas hai



Naina was driving fast. As soon as she reached near Sameers building she gave a call to Sameer.


Sameer: Bolo ab kya? Abhi tumhe neend nahi aa rahi hai...Phone toh cut kar diya tumne



Naina: Sameer tum niche aaoge...mujhe tum se abhi baat karni hai...mein niche khadi hoon



Sameer: Tum pagal ho kya...itni raat ko kya hua...acha ruko ata hoon


He takes his jacket, wallet and comes down. Naina was standing near to her car looking at the gate when will Sameer arrive. As soon as she sees him coming, she runs and hugs him. Her eyes were full of tears. Sameer gets worried looking at her condition. He hugs her back giving her assurance that he is always there with her. After few mins they get a apart and Sameer just nod his head and ask kya hua. Naina again hugs him back and this time more tightly. After some time he wipes her tears kiss her forehead, takes her hand in her hand and ask again "Kya hua



Naina: You were correct Sameer...I think Papa didn't accepted our relationship whole heartedly.


Sameer: Hmm...will you now tell me what happened.



Naina narrated the conversation that happened between her and her father. Sameer stopped her in between so whats your decision. She takes his hand in her hand


Naina: Maine ye haath is liye nahi thama ki beech raste chod du...kabhi nahi Sameer


Sameer was happy and relaxed after listening to her. He takes her to his society garden. They sit on one of the bench. Then he continues with his conversation.


Sameer: Dekho Naina...jaise mujhe waqt laga accept karne mein waise hi Papa will take time. Isliye tum unhe force nahi karogi utna hi pyaar karogi jitna pehli karti thi. Tumhare behaviour mein koi badlaav nahi aana chhiye. Woh tumhare Papa hai...tumse pyaar karte hai...unhe thoda waqt do.


Naina says...hmm and keeps her head on his shoulder. He takes her closer with his hand & with his other he holds her hand in his hand.


Sameer: Naina mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum night dress mein itni sexy lagti ho. Tumhare bikhre baal, upar se ye chashma, tamatar jaise gaal...wow Naina maine ye roop kabhi nahi dekha...Thanks to Sasurji


Naina slaps him on his leg and both starts laughing. He takes her more close to him and says


Sameer: I love you Naina...thanks for coming in my life...you just keep smiling...your smile is my strength...I will manage everything when you are with me...sab thik ho jayega.


Sameer touches her upper side of hand to his cheeks, which has short beard. Naina's eyes are still closed but she says


Naina: Sameer kys kar rahe ho...chub raha hai but he still continues and says


Sameer: mujhe acha lag raha hai

He slowly taker her hand and kiss gently. Naina opens her eyes and says "Sameer and blushes.


To divert her Sameer says "look at the moon & stars...sky is so beautiful to night


Naina: Lekin bahot durr hai Sameer humse


Sameer: Bilkul nahi...mera wala chand toh mere saath hi hai...mere ekdum pass beitha hai


Naina: Kuchbhi...Buddhu ho tum...Sameer ye haath aur tumhara saath kabhi bhi nahi chodungi...kabhi nahi...I promise.


Sameer smiles and says, "Ab chale...tumhe ghar chod aata hoon...jara time dekho


Naina folds her leg on bench and says, "Nahi abhi nahi...abhi toh tumhare chand ko ji bhaar ke dekhna hai tumhare saath


Sameer: Sasurji baraat leke aa jayenge...lets go


He stand and pull her to the car. While driving back to Naina's home, Naina demand for an ice-cream. Sameer gives her sarcastic look and says

Sameer: Did you see the watch...whats the time?

Naina: Toh...apni ek lauti GF ka chotusa demand bhi nahi pura karoge


Sameer: Emotional blackmailing bolte hai isko


Naina: Toh...Zindagi bhar karungi...Haqq hai mera


Finally, they found the restaurant and Sameer ordered for one icecream. Naina was enjoying the icecream, but Sameer's eyes were on something else. He was not able to take off his eyes from her face & lips. But then said to himself, "Nahi Sameer...control...last time siyappa ho gaya tha. He smiled and then shared icecream with her.


They both arrived near to her gate and got down from the car. Naina took some step ahead but return back to him. Sameer smiled and nodded his head and asked her, "ab kya hua. She hugged him, said I love you, kissed his cheeks and ran away.


Sameer was happy with her gesture. He left once Naina confirmed that she reached home safely.


Rakesh was awake but he didn't said anything to Naina. Next day they all met for breakfast. As Sameer said Naina didn't spoke to him about them. Rather she behaved normally with him. Rakesh understood and was feeling proud how they both are dealing with situation.


Naina then further asked Rakesh, "Aap ready nahi hue..office nahi jaana hai


Rakesh: Aaj chutti lene ka mann hai...tumhari Mom ke saath ghumne ka mann hai...mein plan kar raha tha ki Smita ko movie dekhne le jao


Naina: Ok...Best of luck Mom she screamed...further she said...Papa hospital ke liye ek place almost final ki hai...please aap chaloge saath


Rakesh: Beta I liked the place you have finalize...I had asked my team to do all research and there opinions are positive. You can go for it


Naina: Papa...aap ne...


Rakesh: Tumhara Papa hoon beta...I know what is best for you


Saying this Naina left a she wanted to meet lender to collect the documents. As soon as she left Rakesh asked Smita to get ready as he wanted to meet Sameer parents before they leave for Chnadigarh. By 11.00 they reached Sameers home. It was a surprise visit. Rohan opened the door and was surprised to Rakesh & Smita. He welcome them and ask them to come in. He informed his Mom, Dad & Preeti that Naina's parents are here. Smita was angry on Rakesh as they visited without any prior notice. She immediately said to Sameer's parents that sorry for not informing you that we are coming. But Sameer's parents were very happy with there surprise visits. His mom immediately said, "Family members doesnot have to inform that they are coming...we are one family now so just relaxed


Rakesh asked, "Where is Sameer to which they replied, "he went for GYM..will be back in 15 20 mins. Meanwhile Rohan messaged him about the Rakesh & Smita's visit at there home. He immediately called Naina but Naina was clueless and was damn scared. She asked him to go home immediately. She was just praying ki Papa kuch gadbad na karde. Sameer immediately stopped the workout and reached home. He greeted and ask them to continue with breakfast. He joined them after shower. He too took a cup of coffee to accompany them. Naina was continously calling Rakesh & Smita but they didn't picked her call.


Rakesh started his conversation with Sameer parents


Rakesh: Bhaisaab & Bhabhi...aap ko shayad mera yaha aise aana acha na laga ho..lekin maine socha ki apno se milne keliye appointment ki jaroorat nahi padti...Us din aap ghar aaye...bahut kuch hua...mein disturb ho gaya tha...mujhe samaj mein nahi aa raha tha ki kya ho raha hai...isliye thik se baat bhi nahi kar paya...mujhe apna khudka bartaav thik nahi laga...isliye aaj aap sab se maafi mangne aaya hoon.


He got up and with greeted hands he said, "Mujhe ye Rishta Dil se pasand hai...main chahu bhi toh Sameer jaise ladka Naina ke liye dhund nahi sakta.


Sameer was shocked after listening to this and he started coughing. Sameer father got up and hugged Naina's father.


While coming Rakesh bought lot of sweets and gifts for everyone. Because he was happy that his daughter alliance was fixed. Everyone was very happy and Sameer was in shocked. Rakesh then got up from his place and gifted a Gold Chain to his Damaad. Sameer took the ashirwad from everyone. Sameer father asked him to call Naina and invite her for lunch.


Sameer called Naina and informed what all things happened. They both were very happy that there parents accepted there relationship. After finishing her work she reached Sameers home for lunch. All ladies jointly prepared lunch, first mens were served and then all ladies sat.


Sameer has to go for his shoot so he said loudly, "Maa mujhe nikalana hai...main ready hoke aata hoon and he went in. Vishakha understood and she said to Naina, "Beta ye sab rehne do...tum dekho Sameer ko kuch chahiye kya and she gave a naughty smile to Naina. Naina then went towards his room and slowly opened the door. Sameer was in his vest and shaving in bathroom...Naina peeped in from the door. She was shy seeing him like this. She was not able to take her eyes from him. He look like a perfect man with perfect height, body and muscles. He saw her in mirror and there was a smile on his face. He turned, walked towards her and took a support of the side wall. He further said


Sameer: Toh...Mrs. Maheshwari and he winked


Naina: Toh kya...Mr. Maheshwari and she too winked


Sameer: Ye chain mujhe mere khadoos Sasur ne di hai

Naina made her face and said


Naina: Aur ye Kangan mujhe meri pyaari si Maa ne diye hai.


There was a shaving brush in his hand. He rubbed the brush on her Nose and small amount of shaving cream was applied on her nose. She tried wipe it off with her hand. But he holded her hand...leaned towards her and rubbed his nose on her nose. Naina closed her eyes but he moved back. Naina realized in few seconds that he moved and then she opened her eyes. Sameer was laughing at her and said, "Mujhe late ho jayega Madam...karne ko toh bahot kuch kar sakta hoon...lekin mein sabar karna janta hoon.


He turned and continues with his shaving. Naina stood in front of him watching him with loving eyes. He finished his shave, washed his face and wet his hairs. He then moved towards Naina, kept one hand on the wall and rubbed his wet hairs in front of her face. Water got sprinkled on her face. He was very close to her..there eyes were speaking with each other. They were reflecting the happiness of being together. Naina just kept a hand on his chest and moved him back saying, "Ab late nahi ho raha hai saying this she comes out. Sameer just banged his head on the wall and said, "control Sameer. He too came out, took out the shirt from wardrobe.



Sameer was ready and was about to leave the room. Naina too was following her. He suddenly stopped and Naina banged her head on his back. She said, "Kya hua kuch bhool gaye. He started searching here and there, Naina asked, "kya chahiye bolo toh..maine bhi dhoondti hoon. He suddenly stopped and kissed her cheeks, "Ye bhool gaya tha...tum bhi kuch bhool rahi ho kya? and he brought his cheeks in front of her. She too kissed him and then Sameer said, "Chalo ab aaj ko din nikal jayega. They both came out. Sameer left for his shoot and Naina and her Family too left after sometime.

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Hope you all like this update...will update soon next part...eagerly waiting for your feedback
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Posted: 6 years ago
it's so long but no worries all happy as sasur accepted damadh whole heartedly. The testing was nice and Rakesh accepting the relationship wholeheartedly was good.
Nice update.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Very nice update! Chalo now all are ready for the rishta and all are happy!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
What an update Priti ❤️
Throughout I was imagining Vishaka and Naina in place of Rakesh and Sameer ...I mean I just hope Vishaka too ends up liking Naina the same way in the serial ..

The best part was Rakesh accepting his mistake and apologising

As far as the romance goes ,it was simple and struck a chord immediately ...I was blushing
(Toh part spply )

Sooper duper update
Loved it
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Posted: 6 years ago
Poornima Di
I have always adored simplicity while a story is being narrated and I would say this story has it all. It is so realistic just like the show and you have made sure it connects with people with no OTT drama and out of the world narration.

I know I havenot commented since a long time ...sorry.😳

Such a cute update with bundles of love and romance which makes you blush. Not to forget the parental care and love also being highlighted. This is a very good read that has both love and family equally balanced.

Loved it ⭐️
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks, u.condsiderate our request n updatted. Yes long one... Happy to read it.. u kept to connected to original story too .
RT now i have read in rush.. will read it again to get a feel.
Actually rakesh a wala twist Kamal Ka, for a time being i was like isne to accpt ker lia tha, abhi aesa kyu...
Waiting for another one.

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