Sameer-Naina FF : The Runaway Marriage (Upd: Part 4| Pg 20| 24 April)

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Ankita.jaiswal

@Ankita.jaiswal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#151

Awesome update...this is one of my favourite fanfic

You have beautifully portrayed the journey of samaina and how they the traverse through all the difficulties being posed at them...

Glad how sameer is trying to build his lost reputation and naina supporting him in each and every step

I also loved the conversation between vishakha and sameer and how seamlessly roped in the other characters too.

Their friends are the pillar of their strength...preeti and swati for naina. .same as munna and pandit for sameer..

Lastly the selfless love you portrayed through both the protagonists had me emotional..

Well done...waiting for the next update

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padmini92

@padmini92

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Posted: 7 years ago

#152

thanks for the PM

Nice chapter, always liked the expressive words of feelings in ur write ups.

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

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Posted: 7 years ago

#153

Hey Anju!

I understand your situation..relocating to another country and getting your life settled their, it takes time dear..and is much more prior than the story😊

Coming to the update, I totally enjoyed it😃

Sameer and Vishakha's conversation touched my heart..but are they going to go back to Ahmedabad!?

Tofu..our new villain😆

And then MunDit's hilarious talks🤣

But they're such supportive and cheerful dorks..I love them😳

Sameer and Naina are gonna face everything together..being each other's support n strength..that's the best part of the story😳

Btw I loved the part when Sameer felt so happy n proud seeing d mangalsutra of his name, around Naina's neck..that was ❤️

Edited by Anjali33 - 7 years ago

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shelly_nair

@shelly_nair

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Posted: 7 years ago

#154

Very well written. Thank you for the PM.

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Azraa

@Azraa01

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Posted: 7 years ago

#155

I love the pace at which this story is moving at. With the circumstances which surround their marriage and personal lives, l feel, it would have been unrealistic if they consummated their marriage immediately. I am with the way they are taking it slow. Mundit are truly Sameer's pillars of strength and yes, the girls will gradually help Naina as well...
Thank you for the pm and all the best with the re-location.

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Sona../PJ

@Sona07

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Posted: 7 years ago

#156

I was waiting for this update.. and finally my wait is over 😃

Beautiful update dear.. Loved it!!.. 👍🏼 story flow is very good..

They are facing many problems now in a new marriage.. But they will have to face all problems together and will solve it 😊

Now sameer's colleagues also have started to tease him.. He was completely frustrated at that night.. but got normal back in the morning

Sameer-Vishakha's conversation was very well written 👏.. It was a little emotional

SaMunDit conversation was hilarious and specially 'Mubarak ho Bhai'.. but the friendship of trio is the best.. and "Haan wo kya hain na, ye din me chaar baar Santoor saabun se nahata he.. waakai me chaalis saal ka he aur ghar pe chaar bachhe bhi he!" this line cracked me.. 🤣

When will Agrawal family get to know about their marriage.. I'm just waiting for that 😆

You wrote a very cute romance scenes.. and I really liked it..Their First ever kiss on forehead was just beautiful

Eagerly waiting for the next part.. Please update soon.. Thanks for the PM dear..

Edited by msdfan - 7 years ago

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#157

Hey Anju...

This part was really emotional. I liked how the talk with Swati made Naina think about the intimacy they'd lost out on n wonder if Sameer wanted the same. N how she tried the gift on...when she was alone.And the way the spent the night talking n reliving their memories was portrayed very well...Sameer finally being at peace...even if he hadn't slept with Naina...he'd made a lot of memories of their first night...

Sameer finally emerging instrumental at clinching the business deal for the company...n regaining his confidence back slowly...the conversation with Vishakha was emotional...she doesn't even know her son is now married too. Btw...nice touch giving the internet reference here...some info for ppl like me :)

Sameer n Naina's candle light dinner n the side effects of Tofu...Naina feeling herself like an added burden on Sameer n Sameer trying to console her...this is what life as a couple is...you've to face life's ups n downs n still stand strong together...if one is weak...the other has to lend support...beautiful written part again...

Eagerly awaiting the next! :)

Love

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vandana

@VandyP

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Posted: 7 years ago

#158

Hey anju

Thank so much for this update...

Before I write abt the update...I want to thank you for the language u use ... The use of Hindi makes the imagination of readers like me more realistic...

Coming to the update...

I loved how excited Swati was for updates on Naina's first night...it was so natural...and I loved how she was disappointed in Sameer too for agreeing to whatever Naina wanted...

Swati and Preeti are total filmy...and it reflected in her expectations and their choice of gifts for Naina...

Good that Naina tried the night gown... But where will she hide it 🤣

Sameer's being teased in office was well done...and that conversation with vishakha...was good too...

Y do I feel diwakar jee really wants Sameer as his damaad...and that's where Sameer will have to confide the truth abt his marriage to his mom...

Samaina...I simply loved the natural progression of their relationship...Naina totally oblivious to Sameer's dilemma on their first night...and the way the ice was broken and how they relived their past yet again...

I'm simply loving Sameer's understanding of their relationship...he's ready to give everything that Naina is deprived of in her life right now... Be it being like a mother and not disturbing her sleep...teasing her like a friend wen the kurti did not fit...hugging her like a lover...or being her strength like her life partner...

The fact that they are starting their life with these kind of testing situations will have the path of a very solid relationship in future...they will learn to value their relationship above everything else...

Munna and pandit...they will never let naina miss Preeti or Swati...liked how they saved money for Sameer...

Another touch of realism that I liked was the hospital thing...how a rich guy like Sameer who was used to such luxuries...was now trying hard to get the same facility for Naina...and how Naina understood his financial status...and was guilt ridden...

Financial transperancy...and coping with the problems related to it is another aspect that needs to be dealt with maturely by young couples...and I know u will do full justice to this...

All in all I'm loving the FF anju...do keep the updates coming ...

Looking forward to the next one...

P.s

I simply loved the spot u chose for their first kiss

Edited by -vandy- - 7 years ago

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Phoenix

@Phoenix100

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Posted: 7 years ago

#159

Amazing update

The story is getting interesting with each update... This had been the best update so far... The emotional connect between samaina is so beautifully penned down.

Swati and preeti knows more about intimacy than naina as they are more filmy... Naina being the innocent one, thinks even jooen can become barrier 😆... Loved the phone convo between the friends... Swati choose the right gift for naina.

Sameer had high hopes for first night.. Naina's innocence spoiled it all... Poor guy😆... Bt still he's happy just by being with her and talking to her whole night... Even these things makes him feel blessed.

Loved sameer as this hardworking and successful person... Only the thoughts of his future with naina made him do wonders... Sameer's relationship with his colleagues is so nicely written... Especially with Radhika didi... Loved the convo between sam and vishakha as well... The proud mom was a treat to read... Hope he tells her about his marriage soon.

The teasing part was amazing... Sameer was surely testing the waters... Naina was falling into it too😉

... Poor guy had plans fo for the night... Bt tofu spoiled it all😆

Loved the way sameer took care of naina... He'll make a great husband for sure... The concern he showed was so soothing... He rightly said atleast this time they are together in all this... Their married life had started with so many troubles... Bt they'll overcome all this together.

Mundit as usual is always there for their bhai and bhabhi... Nothing could have been the same without mundit being with samaina... The best friends anyone could get.

Loved this part fully... It was worth all the wait.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Edited by angelic567 - 7 years ago