|| Of Rainy Evenings and Bleeding Souls - an OS|| - Page 2

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

This ghazal is one of my favorites too...been listening to it since childhood...we had a cassette with this ghazal on it n used to play it during evenings...everytime I listen to this, it reminds me of my childhood...but at that time, probably I did not understand the depth of the lyrics...the pain behind that voice...but now with age, I can feel the emotions behind it...n I could feel Naina's emotions here as well...yes she is desperate to hold onto him...everything beautiful reminds her of him...of the times she was in his arms...yes she would have wanted to surrender and surrender she did...for she did not know if she is going to be able to feel him again...what if time plays a cruel joke...

PS: I'm a big fan of kisses in the rain. I don't know...there's something about rains, which puts me in an altogether different world. So thank you for making their first kiss...a kiss in the rain...

Can we expect this story to go forward? I would really like you to turn this into a story...the emotions behind them when they finally meet!

As usual...a brilliant write-up...🤗 is story ko khatam karne ki zidd na karo...

Love,

Sur

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Dil le lo Kshiti

Such a fantastic, emotional n heart piercing OS

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

It was emotional but as usual beautiful

So beautiful and so very sad! ❤️ ❤️ lovely OS..

Originally posted by: RabbitOnSkates_

So beautiful and so very sad! ❤️ ❤️ lovely OS..

Omg.. I am in tears again!! You writing is so soulful.. the longing of the souls captured so beautifully.,

Her envy of her aunt and uncle's togetherness is so natural and without malice.

This ghazal by Fareeda Khanam is my all time favourite.. I never imagined it could be used so beautifully to portray the feelings of young hearts. But then Roohani love has no boundaries of age, time or distance.

Milli hain roohen toh rasmoo ki bandishen kya hain..

Made me cry Kshithi!Absolutely beautiful piece...!

So emotional dear... the pain of separation... the fear of not being able to see him once again... to just look into his eyes one last time... ohh separation from your beloved is so difficult and heart wrenching... you expressed it through your words so beautifully... I have no words to express how I'm feeling... it brought back some memories to me... which I can never part with😳

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Just feel the thumps of my heart, they'll tell you that I don't want to be apart. Just hug me and feel the shivers in my spine, they'll tell you that I don't want to be away from someone who I call mine. Just look at the tears in my eyes, they'll tell you that I don't want to say goodbye.

Yet you are gone..Gone to achieve a few more happiness,gone to achieve a few more feathers in your cap,gone to build a secure future.

And my life reschedules and for your information..its not the same...

Kshiti! Hugs to you.This was so emotional and touched my heart.Been there so something hinged inside.Yes,it gets over and they are gone..

And for us for a few seconds..the world seems bereft of five senses.Fears creep and no matter how strong a girl is some where something breaks at the moment.

Yes! Life has to move on..but on tattered tyres or pumped tyres ..hardly any one notices.Life can be dragged and survived.And survival is not the same as living.

Loved this to core.Both the parts are just so beautiful and emotional and they successfully dampened my eyelids.

You write so beautifully,that needs no introduction and explanation.👏👏👏

Keep coming with more..

With love-

Minu.😳

Originally posted by: lakku19

Beautiful.. loved it..